Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
These people
These words
Telling-
Commanding-
You to have courage.
But this world's not kind.
This world's terrifying.
"Have courage,"
They say,
"Keep your chin up,"
They say,
Neglecting the tears on your face.
Neglecting the knife at your heart.
One wrong move,
It's a done deal.
You try to have courage.
You speak up for yourself;
Defend your beliefs;
Tread your own path;
"How dare you!"
They say,
"You can't do that!"
They say,
Pulling you down with them.
Pulling you into despair...
Again.
But you nurture that which is left,
You keep it in the dark,
The dark that hides you,
The dark that saves you
From the light that blinds;
From the light that burns.
You keep your courage.
It keeps you.
Keep it strong,
I say this to you both,
Keep it alive,
Burning,
Hopeful,
Courageous.
~
Whelp let's see how this goes down.
(June 10, 2019 - 4:16 pm)
Oh, A Poet, it looks lime we have some worthy competetion!
(June 11, 2019 - 5:44 pm)
(A lone wolf)
(A deer with no herd)
(A flower in the middle of winter)
A girl joining a new school in the middle of the year
(A fish on land)
(A cat in water)
The girl in her school cafeteria
(A dragon guarding its treasure)
A table full of popular students
(A mouse challenging a lion)
Approaching the table
(Error. Error. Incomparable.)
And saying, "Hello."
(June 10, 2019 - 6:29 pm)
Oh, that's a great analogy poem! I like it, especially the last stanza!
(June 10, 2019 - 9:30 pm)
Thanks!
(June 13, 2019 - 12:17 pm)
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(June 17, 2019 - 2:49 pm)
(June 19, 2019 - 11:25 am)
(I'm assuming the prompt is still courage?)
This poem's about a real experience! Hope you enjoy >.<
Talking To A Stranger
Walk up to the girl
Tap
Tap her shoulder
"Um -"
"Hi."
Smile is returned.
"I was wondering - "
Deep holes of dizziness
Dark caves of endless laughing
Mocking
Looking like a fool
"I was wondering if -"
So stupid
Can't do it
Look like a weirdo
Cheeks flush red.
Laughter vile and cruel
Endless days of judgement
So strange, can't talk
Must seem
So stupid.
"I was wondering if you knew-"
Deep breath.
Deep breath in
Deep breath out
In
And out.
In
And out.
Simple.
"I was wondering if you knew about the Debate team?"
Nods.
(June 22, 2019 - 7:54 pm)
Being New
I bike down the roads
The first day of school
I recently moved here
I’m nervous, being new
Everyone already has friends
Everyone except for me
I see them all play together
It makes me so lonely
School at last begins
I keep my head down
Pay attention to my work
My face in a frown
Soon, recess begins
I don’t know anyone
I look around the playground
Seeing if there is someone
Someone who is new like me
Needs a friend so they can play
I notice a girl sitting alone
Yet I just stay in place
It took some bravery to go up to her
But at last I was encouraged
I walked up to her, saying “Hello”
It only took some courage
(June 24, 2019 - 12:29 pm)
Judging! Third place was ecspacially hard, here were so many of you that I wanted to put there. It was interesting to see all of the different styles used in your entries, and it was great to see how many poets are still here.
In third place, we have A Poet!
I love how you used the promt in your poem! I love the lines memories drift to the surface,/ Jumping and withdrawing like flames,/ Playing with the ashes in the fireplace as well as the lines I bury my nose in my pillow,/ to extinguish the last traces of the scent from my nostrils. I do recommend maybe not using the commas after every line next time, or paying more attention to your use of capitalization in the first word of every line.
In second place, we have Abi!!
As always, you had the most beautiful descriptions. I'm in awe of the way you use words in places that they usually aren't used and somehow do it in the most beautiful way. The way you used the promt was a little strange, yet it made so much sense and was pretty relatable- through your amazing poetry, you give us Gen Z kids a reminder to love ourselves.
And in first place... Kitten!!!
Ah, that last stanza is just perfect, the way you show how the girl has been put in boxes or judged, then she does something that nobody would expect that also is totally perfect for the theme? Ah! I love everything about this poem- the little metaphors, the way the metaphors decline as the situation becomes more irregular and less stereotyped, the perposeful lack of punctuation, the parenthesis, all of it. It's been so cool to watch your poetry change and improve lately!
(June 25, 2019 - 8:31 am)
Yay! Third place! That’s pretty good actually. (I was t expecting to be on the leaderboard at all,)
Thank you so much for the CC, and I will be sure to take that to heart with the next entree I make! And, I’m glad you liked that one line! (( Jumping and withdrawing like flames//Playing among the ashes, I the fireplace )) it’s definitely one of my favorite lines as well!
(June 25, 2019 - 4:14 pm)
good job everyone!!
(June 26, 2019 - 6:20 pm)
Good job everyone!
(June 25, 2019 - 6:28 pm)
Oh, wow, thanks!! The new theme will be ???? and I'll be judging on Friday, July 5. I hope that day's okay with everyone because I'll be unavailable for a while after that. :)
Thank you again for this honor! I'm really looking forward to seeing your poems.
(Oh, and a slight warning: I'm very picky about conventions, so be sure your apostrophes are in the right places and such!)
Kitten, please choose another theme. We'd rather not have that theme on Chatterbox. Thank you.
Admin
(June 25, 2019 - 10:47 pm)
Oh, okay, I guess that makes sense. Let's go with whispers instead.
(June 26, 2019 - 7:29 pm)