Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
(June 3, 2019 - 9:35 pm)
Great job, everyone! I really enjoyed reading your poems.
3rd place: Rogue! That was super dark in the best way possible! The line breaks and quick, almost frantic description really communicated the fear in the poem. The ending was so good and creepy, gah. Great work!
2nd place: Leafpool! I like the title, and how you depicted a more metaphorical form of escape. You captured a very specific yet universal feeling, and it's haunting and sweet in all the right ways. I adore the line, "I fell hard and long for you."
1st place: Soren! Your poem is absolutely brilliant, it truly knocked the wind out of me. It gives me Orpheus and Euridyce vibes, and it's so darkly pretty and chilling, I love love love it. My favorite parts were the imagery of "arms... dipped in the River Styx" and "the mellow nothing under my eylids". Amazing job!! <3
(June 3, 2019 - 10:03 pm)
Thanks! I've never gotten first, so could you tell me what you think I could've done better?
(June 3, 2019 - 10:16 pm)
Oh! I meant to enter that; I guess I didn't. :) Congratulations, guys!
(June 4, 2019 - 5:55 pm)
Wait whaaaat? Ah, I thought my poem was terrible! Thank you so much, Abi!!
The theme is... courage! I can't wait to see what you guys come up with!
Judging will be posted on the 19th, if that's cool with everyone.
(June 4, 2019 - 7:57 pm)
Sorry everyone, I lied about the due date/judging. I'm leaving for summer camp on the 18th, so I'm moving the judging to the 25th. Sorry about that!
(June 5, 2019 - 7:58 pm)
I prefer to post poetry anonymously, but, er, here is my poem for the contest?
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The scent of Oranges drifts upon the wind,
Such a innocent smell,
Memory’s drift to the surface,
Jumping and withdrawing like flames,
Playing among the ashes I the fireplace,
Coming sharp, and clear, details easy to distinguish,
And,
Fading, into only the smell
Once again,
Tears soon join the memory’s
Behind my eyelids,
Such a innocent smell,
Such a innocent child,
Introduced to the pain of life,
So young was I, but a sapling compared to the mighty oaks before me,
Such a innocent smell,
My feet, kicking up dust, carry me along the dirt path,
Back home,
To the house where I can escape the memory’s,
I bury my nose into my pillow,
To extinguish the last traces of the scent from my nostrils,
Such a innocent smell,
Will I ever face my past,
Without flinching,
Without running,
With courage?
(June 5, 2019 - 9:03 pm)
Oh, wow.... I feel like A Poet will win this round! This poem is absolutely amazing!
(June 6, 2019 - 7:33 pm)
Thank you Jaybells! But...I don’t think it’d good enough to win...Your poem is amazing! I wouldn’t be surprised if you win this round! <3
(June 6, 2019 - 8:48 pm)
Why thank you so very much,
And with the utmost respect,
But with going and such
I've less depth of tale to dissect.
I appreciate your kinds words,
And reflect them, at that,
But please be assured
Already have I tipped my hat
~~~~~
In other words, the competition(game) is still afoot! Good luck!
(June 7, 2019 - 2:20 pm)
Writing prompt: Courage
~~~~~
Glancing up I frown,
Raising my hand,
then standing up
To face the rest
"That is not courage."
I simply add
to our class debate,
"Yes, it might seem like
an act of courage, to us,
But not for an 'invincible' hero.
Heracles was driven
by pride, and glory,
by repaying his debt, and hubris only."
I state flatly.
"Is that so?"
My English teacher responds
Narrowing her eyes,
Now thoroughly interested.
"Please elaborate."
Is all she says, expectantly.
"For any of us, slaying the Hydra
Or the Nemean Lion
Would be quite
the courageous undertaking.
But not to a hero
who always wins,
And whose destiny,
A point is making."
I pause, taking a deep breath,
"Real courage isn't always
So loud and flamboyant,
it can be simple,
Such as talking to some one new,
Or as important
as avoiding a war,
With, at stake, your reputation, too."
I sit back down,
My classmates
and teacher smiling,
And on the inside
Knowing that sometimes trialing
My often radical ideas also
requires some courage rallying.
(June 6, 2019 - 7:29 pm)
(June 8, 2019 - 10:26 pm)
Get Up, Get Up Onto Your Own Two Feet
Why sit and think when you already know the answer?
You are hated,
Bullied,
Despised
When you fall you can't even get up onto your own two feet
Why do you expect someone then to stand up for you?
Why do you expect someone to have the courage when you can't do anything yourself?
Get up
Get up
Get up onto your own two feet
Have courage
Believe
And have courage
Have the courage to stand up
Stand strong and tall on your own two feet
You will not fall if you have courage
(June 9, 2019 - 11:48 am)
sorry i didn't mean to put in have courage twice in the second stanza!!! sorry!!!
(June 9, 2019 - 1:40 pm)
I'm not sure this fits the theme properly, but oh well.
• • • •
some nights the sea
the great beyond lives in my bathroom
balanced on the tub’s porcelain edge.
suspended, on tip-toe, i press my hand
flat against the wall
and my palm cups an ancient globe.
it is easy to love this headless figure
a blurry mirror belladonna.
arm to thigh to graceful back, reflected in
a steam-smoked shard of glass
thoughtless, unbreathing.
the cracked shutters send light
slivering across nightshade hips
as the shower head spits and cries
its saliva scattering across hexagonal tile
my picture-show stays picture-sure:
there is no courage
in loving the fatale.
braver, though,
is adoring the prefix, is kissing the femme, is
loving the girl in the mirror,
when she steps down from the ledge
braver still, to smile and mean it, at her
head and shoulders and
heart
and all.
(June 10, 2019 - 3:47 pm)