Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Oh, my gosh. This is so good.
Yeah, definitely toast.
(February 1, 2019 - 7:17 pm)
Well.
I thought I had a good chance of winning this round. Now I'm trying for second place :)
But seriously, this poem is amazing and it pulled on my heartstrings and I maybe even cried a little. If this is a real person, give them a hug for me.
(February 2, 2019 - 4:59 pm)
Wow. Abi...thats amazing. I'm lost for words.
(February 2, 2019 - 11:53 pm)
M'kay so I suck at poerty but I want to get better soooo have a horrible excuse for a submission. This one's directed towards girls:
~
I know you.
I hope you know that too.
You who listened to my rants.
One at a time, we borrowed each other's pants
After church in our dresses
One hiding the other's bareness with 'yes's
That always followed a 'Can I borrow these?'
Then playing Cops and Thieves
With our legs properly covered.
I know you,
I wish you knew that.
After all we've been through,
I'm still here for you.
Tell me about your Him,
Whisper his personality while lights dim.
Smile with me once again,
Together we'll reign
Over imaginary pixies
and palaces of sticks.
Just don't push me away
Just because we're both changing
(Not pants this time)
Please tell me there's that part of you left-
~~
Now for guys:
~
'Hey, wanna come over?'
'Yeah, sure!'
'Cool, what are we going to play?'
'Knights!'
Those were easy times...
Times of shining armor and speaking in rhymes...
Of searching for Camelot
As 'Sirs Lancelot'...
It's not so easy now.
Nothing seems to flow.
Being popular doesn't matter,
And no, you aren't getting fatter.
I'm glad we're still close.
You're still my 'Friend Best Most!'
We didn't speak right then,
It was all 'Fight or Flight' then.
I remember we chose the former
Every single time.
Fighting dragons and saving maids
But now we're into Pokemon Raids.
What's wrong with that?
I don't see why you're nervous.
You were always the brave one,
Standing up to the drunk man's son.
He'd laugh in your face,
Tell you 'Watch your place',
But you'd never let him hurt anyone.
I want to do that for you, brother.
Get you away from this smothering life,
Maybe to the woods sometime.
I only have one more thing to say:
'Hey, you wanna come over?'
~~
*C R I N G E*
(February 4, 2019 - 6:17 pm)
Okay, I'm never going to submit a poem if I don't just write one right now. This hasn't had any editing, as I'm writing it on the spot...
butterflies in my stomach
hands clenched
biting my lip
my worry is disrupted by a bing!
scramble for my phone
open the email
it's from you
you, who can cheer me in the darkness
you, who knows when i need support
you, who remembers my complaints
and answers them
my heart is lifted
i begin to laugh
you have sent me a picture of yourself
grinning
eyes wide
funny face
my worries are forgotten
i prepare, confident again
writing a reply in my head
you have made me win today
(February 4, 2019 - 7:49 pm)
forever friend
hey, you're my forever friend, you know that?
we've known each other since the beginning
("no," you say, "because you're older")
("yes," I say, "because I don't care")
and we fully plan on getting old together-
("oh, and didn't we pretend we'd lived our past life together? in celestialland- remember that?")
(and I laugh, because I was six when I made that up, and I was weird)
we were young, and nothing was complicated and now we are still young, but things are harder
and stuff has changed, but we've stayed friends
and hey, I know you have other friends
I have others too
(and I could have written a poem about any of them, but not this one)
(and I didn't, I'm writing a poem about you)
(that has to mean something, but I don't know what)
my best friend is jimmy, he goes to my school
and i hang out with sophie, and miguel, and leroy, and irving, and jillian, and emma, and the rest-
and your best friend is bridget
(at least I think- tell me if I'm wrong)
but I don't know-
we've always drawn a line
between home and school
school and home
(home meaning the neighborhood)
(perhaps those are the same thing)
and, well, you know
someone else might be my best friend
but you're my friend forever
(February 4, 2019 - 10:56 pm)
Today's the deadline!! I'll be posting results soon, once I finish judging...
(February 7, 2019 - 8:03 pm)
I will BET YOU... It's Abi.
(February 7, 2019 - 8:35 pm)
Ok, so I had a really hard time deciding since ALL of them are absolutely amazing. In the end, here are the final results!
Honorable Mention: This took me forever, I had so many of you that I wanted to put, but it's......... Kitten!!! I love it because it represents what I think friends are amazing for. It's very pretty.
3rd Place: Soren Infinity! I love it. especially the line you/leaned in with a cupped hand, your/soul floating in midair for a moment before/it slinks into my ear.
2nd Place: Abigail!! It's beautifully sad, in a strange way. It's so meaningful.
And...... 1stPlace is.... Stardust!!! I LOVED it, I loved everything about it it's beautiful.
I tried not to write too much about each one because I'm not very good at commenting and am afraid to mess it up. And there are the results!
(February 7, 2019 - 8:39 pm)
Congratulations, everyone! There were so many good poems this round.
(February 8, 2019 - 3:38 pm)
Congratulations, Stardust! I loved your poem, you did an amazing job! I'm excited to see what you'll come up with for the next round!
(And thank you to everyone who said nice things about my poem, it means a lot <33)
(February 8, 2019 - 7:05 pm)
Next theme please?
(February 11, 2019 - 12:01 am)
@Stardust... are you coming?
Sorry if some of you guys are disappointed with the results (covers eyes)
(February 11, 2019 - 6:39 pm)
(February 11, 2019 - 8:36 pm)
No problem XP
Edwy.
(February 11, 2019 - 11:08 pm)