Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Congrats, Luna-Starr! Your poem is amazing <3 
and everyone who has entered so far (Celine, Wildwolf, Moon Wolf) your poems are super good! I really liked reading those especially for some reason :)

-Chains

The day that you broke my heart

Made me sad and made me cry

That was also the day that i

Wrapped my heart in chains.

They made it heavy and the iron weighed me down 

It turned soft love into steel

The links on my necklaces strangled me

Only hurt words were choked out

The chains on my wrists bit my skin

Left marks that no other could see

Heavy metal chains wound up my legs

Pinning my hands to my sides

Covering my mouth and making it cold

Covering my eyes in ice

Only hateful whispers reached my ears

And the chains locked and stayed

The weight dragging me down into the earth

Nothing could change the fact

That i would never love again

Nothing, that is, except for a kind face

And open loyalty in the smile

And shining sun eyes that melted the chains

Away from my face, my body, my hands

i could hear faint whispers of hope

Even though a small part of my heart

Was still wrapped in chains. 

submitted by Hawkstar, age Dynamite, My thoughts in Korea
(December 16, 2023 - 8:47 pm)

it's been a really long time since ivve posted anything much less poetry but it's worth a shot I geuss 

~~~~~~~

im so scared

sometimes

that ill never make it out of this small town

full of small minds

a small town im not even from

and dont belong in

 

im so scared

that

heaven forbid

i cant go to college

and ill be stuck in this house forever 

that ill never get work

and ill just shrivel up and die alone in the dark

 

im so scared

when i feel my emotions

slipping away like 

theres a spider sipping on my innards 

but who would want all the things

i keep inside anyway 

 

im so scared

that someday something will happen

to him

and i will have no reason

to struggle to make it out of this small town

 

im even more scared that maybe

somedaybu

i wont be the one protecting him 

that ill be on the other side 

that i already am 

and hes just too nice to say anything

or maybe even realise it

himself

 

im scared

i live in fear 

im bound by the chains

that bound my grandfather

long ago

across the sea 

in a land where color still matters

 

and im scared that one day

theyll get so heavy

that ill just fall apart

submitted by Scribbler, he/them
(December 17, 2023 - 7:57 pm)

I think I'm allergic to the grass, this grass that

Makes me itch wherever it touches skin, makes

Angry red welts pop up and

Sting. 

I think I'm allergic to the grass, but still I sit here, on the grass, with you.

 

I think I'm not a fan of these overcast days, these overcast days that

Drown out all the blue skies and sun rays with

Gray clouds, and dampen the air with

Promises of harsh, cold rain. 

I think I'm not a fan of these overcast days, but still I sit here, under grey skies, with you.

You're sun enough for me.

 

I think I don't much like the feel of slime between my fingers, this slime that

Oozes and goozes and is nothing like the natural coolness of snails, that

Makes me want to gag and barf,  

Makes me want to shake like a dog, wash my hands a million times over.

I think I don't much like the feel of slime between my fingers, but still I sit here, immerse myself in slime, with you.

 

Do you remember

Those sunlit days

When we laughed and made each other daisy chains? 

 

I think I'm not quite interested

In the things you've become interested in, 

We've grown up, now,

You've grown up

And instead of daisies you want to spend time making slime and doing makeup and gossiping, and sometimes I wonder

If you still even remember those daisies, but I do know you will always remember

 

Me and you

Sitting on the floor 

And no one else

 

And so I make believe the slime is daisies and weave them with you

 

welp 2nd attempt, I'm gonna have to try again later... but I'll submit this one for now. Feiya says MRWAX. 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age she/they(?, Daisy Chains
(December 18, 2023 - 9:02 pm)

OH MY GOSH THE SAME THING WITH THE GRASS HAPPENS TO ME-

This whole poem is so... Ahhhhh, good, I don't have the words to express itttttt  

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(December 19, 2023 - 8:29 am)

firebird

a reflection on Prometheus

 

every day a reminder of mistakes

past wounds cut too deep to heal, shallow scars torn open by harsh eagle talons

 

was the pain a reminder of previous lifetimes

did it make him remember he was alive?

or did he only spiral deeper into—blurry—shades of gray graphite hell

 

tear-tracks carving a path down the rainy windowpane in a never-ending tidal wave of loss;

 

good intentions are never enough

 

like blazing golden leaves trapped in free-fall

tumbling towards the lifeless winter graveyard, spinning out of control

(anxiety hurricane.)

the firebird couldn't spread his wings

 

just around the labyrinthine corner, too far to crawl

i wasn't strong enough

 

sometimes mental chains are enough to keep from flying

submitted by Woodwind, age he/they, echo chamber of solitude
(December 18, 2023 - 8:18 pm)

May I join? I have a few poems to share.

Waiting

There was once a lonely boy

Sitting by a winding road

Bathed in moonlight

Cloaked in darkness

Waiting

Waiting for another

Leaves fall

Flowers bloom

'Til one day

He can slumber

Under

A blanket of soil

Still waiting

Still waiting

For another

But they never come

So he waits

Alone

Beneath a willow tree

Under a blanket of soil

Always

Waiting

Forever 

 

submitted by Luna
(December 19, 2023 - 1:36 pm)

This is a really good poem! buuut... the promt for this round is CHAINS, so you might want to change it to some other poem? (I hope I don't seem intrusive or bossy :/)

submitted by @Luna, It's Hawkstar
(December 28, 2023 - 3:22 pm)

I used to be a bird,

With fearless freefall,

Confidence and

Sunlit smiles.

(I barely remember

And yet I rembember it all)

But my golden life changed suddenly

And I'd tell you how

but it's complicated.

(So impossibly complicated)

I'm not who I was.

Instead of the daredevil,

(I wanted to climb the highest mountain,

Skydive–I was a bird, you know)

There's a frightened girl

Who's too scared to do something new,

Chained down by fear.

I'm only free when

I dance.

(When I dance I'm a bird again) 

submitted by AvaraStar, age 14, Reading
(December 19, 2023 - 1:49 pm)

This is gorgeous, I love the "When I dance I'm a bird again" and vivid descriptions.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in a Dream
(December 20, 2023 - 12:42 pm)
Chains
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I can’t leave
The chains hold me down
Pinning me here
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
This is all I’ve even known
The chains hold me down
And all I ever will 
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
Too tough to cut
The chains hold me down
I can’t break free
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I’m not strong enough 
The chains hold me down
I can’t take this anymore
Stuck 
Trapped 
Imprisoned 
To tight to breathe
The chains hold me down
Nothing I can do
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
No one helps
The chains hold me down
I’m all alone
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I can’t leave
The chains hold me down
Keeping me here
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
submitted by Rainbow, Holding up the sky
(December 28, 2023 - 2:39 pm)

Ooh, I love the repetition! :D

submitted by WildWolf
(December 28, 2023 - 4:32 pm)
Oh, that's strange. The line breaks didn't go through... this is how I meant it:
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

Chains
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I can’t leave
The chains hold me down
Pinning me here
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
This is all I’ve even known
The chains hold me down
And all I ever will 
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
Too tough to cut
The chains hold me down
I can’t break free
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I’m not strong enough 
The chains hold me down
I can’t take this anymore
Stuck 
Trapped 
Imprisoned 
To tight to breathe
The chains hold me down
Nothing I can do
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
No one helps
The chains hold me down
I’m all alone
Stuck
Trapped
Imprisoned 
I can’t leave
The chains hold me down
Keeping me here
Stuck 
Trapped
Imprisoned 
submitted by Rainbow, Holding up the sky
(December 28, 2023 - 9:35 pm)

Huh. It still didn't go through. Well, I meant for there to be breaks between every 3 lines 

submitted by Rainbow, age Rereading, Daughter of the Deep
(December 29, 2023 - 8:36 am)

U could take a screenshot of it and then put that in your post, maybe.

submitted by WildWolf
(December 29, 2023 - 4:08 pm)

YUS daughter of the deep <333 so good

submitted by Hawkstar, age Dynamite, My thoughts in Korea
(December 29, 2023 - 4:21 pm)