Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Thank you so much.
(July 26, 2023 - 1:27 pm)
(July 27, 2023 - 4:22 pm)
All these poems were so beautiful and inspiring, and I loved the twists on the theme each poem had! It was hard to pick a winner, but here's my personal feedback on your poetry.
Honorable Mentions (no particular order)~
Celine BurningBright! I love the way you list all the things that you hope you can do, and the way that repeating the first line ties it all together into something meaningful. It's simple, but heartfelt, and seems to reflect deep thoughts and desires; I also like the things you chose and the order in which you put them, and the line at the end saying "Hope is enough." All in all, great job :)
Cloud Bunny! This one has beautiful imagery, and again, it's simple but somehow pure. It has a peaceful, hopeful vibe, and also seems to promise that Hope will continue forever, which in itself is hopeful. I love how the poem says that hope is things like stars and trees - it focuses on the natural world - and then with the final lines says that hope is you. I love this message, and you transmitted it in a beautiful, meaningful way :)
Ayles C.! Everything about the poem is powerful, but also entirely hopeless - it's an interesting interpretation of the theme. There's a sense of despair and having come to the end of everything the narrator cared about, especially in the lines "There is no hope in tomorrow./No more light in your eyes." There's a feeling that the narrator has decided that it's time to give up on hope, which is interesting; the structure of the lines is also wonderful. This is a great poem :)
Hawkstar! The theme of new beginnings and things continuing is really strong in this one, which I love, and which ties in very well with the message in the last two lines. The things you compare hope to are very symbolic of hope, in my opinion; the different ways you describe them convey the message that hope is everywhere and in everything, and your descriptions are amazing. Keep writing :)
Third place~
Moon Wolf! This is so beautiful - the way it's not about hope itself, but hope is the most dominant feature in it nonetheless, depicted as something that you cling to when there's nothing else. The way you described the storm can be applied in so many situations, and it's also lovely taken literally; the feeling of everything suddenly changing is something I sort of relate too, which might be why I love this, and the whole message comes together into something uplifting at the end :)
Second place~
pangolin! I always enjoy your poetry so much, and this is no exception. It's so stirring, so truthful, so beautiful - your descriptions are amazing (I especially love the lines "a broken-winged dove cupped in a/gentle hand;/a ivory flower petal/crushed underfoot;/a promise, so easily/broken."), as well as incredibly moving ("the stray dog who didn't/understand/he wasn't supposed/to make it"). The whole poem is determined, hopeful, and pushing towards something better - it's simply wonderful :)
First place~
WordSong! It's very loosely linked to the theme, and yet the whole thing is permeated with hoping for a better world and a future. I love the choice of taking the point of view of a mother wanting better things for her baby daughter; it feels so heartfelt, and the mother's love shows itself so strongly. The rhyming is incredible, and the whole poem is completely told through the mother's emotions. I love this so much :) You're the next judge!
(July 27, 2023 - 5:44 pm)
aah thanks so much for second!! and congrats WordSong! your poem was so beautiful and heartfelt <333
(July 27, 2023 - 7:13 pm)
congrats WordSong! your poem was absolutely amazing!!! also thanks for third Amethyst :D
(July 27, 2023 - 7:35 pm)
Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I've only won this contest a couple of times, and it always comes at the most unexpected time. Everybody's poems were so gorgeous.
The next theme will be Beginnings/Endings, and I will be judging on August 13. Good luck!
(July 27, 2023 - 8:27 pm)
Thx!
(July 28, 2023 - 11:39 am)
Oops, kinda late, but thank you!! And, again, WordSong, amazing!!!
(July 29, 2023 - 5:36 pm)
A Single Drop of Rain
The stale cold scent of the morning
The clouds collect in the sky above
The breeze of the wind flies across
Just a normal day, not unheard of
The town should be waking up
The birds should be starting to sing
The people should be getting out
The land should be turning spring
Yet there is not a single movement
Not a single sound
Not a single person
Not a sight of green around
The cracked cobblestone street
The smudged glass of the store
The rust of the lampstand
None knowing what they were for
Shadows on the ground
Of the humans that were there
Echoes of their sounds
That were floating through the air
Not a creature stirring
Not a sign of life
Not a blade of grass waving
Not a single sight
It seems that this is
The time of humanity’s end
It led its own destruction
And may never mend
There is a regret, and wish
That perhaps it could be fresh
Perhaps it could be different
Through some other blood and flesh
Yet peeking through the ground
Is a single, small sprout
Slowly through the dirt
Steadily poking out
It’s a promise
A sign
That it may be alright
That it will be fine
Once more, it may be
That nature will survive
Again, you will see
That nature will thrive
And through all the turmoil
And through all the pain
From the sky comes
A single drop of rain
(July 27, 2023 - 9:38 pm)
Woah. I love this SO MUCH!! The rhyming is beautiful and the message is beautiful and the whole poem in general is beautiful and that last line, AHH, is BEAUTIFUL!!!! :)
(July 29, 2023 - 5:38 pm)
tysm! Yours is amazing too!
(July 30, 2023 - 4:44 pm)
Amazing poem. I have nothing else to say, it's just perfect. Wow.
I'll bet my dessert that this poem gets into the top three!
(July 30, 2023 - 8:19 am)
Thanks! Your poem is so amazing and meaningful as well, like the mentioning of the Styx river from Greek mythology.
(July 30, 2023 - 4:48 pm)
This started out as a simple attempt at rhyming and got out of control very quickly. As anyone can see, it turned out terribly, but whatever.
Extra points to you if you got the meaning of the first 14 or so lines, and have a free slice of analysis cake if you understood the message of the entire poem, which might be (way) too loosely based on the theme. Conveying it turned out to be much more abstract than I expected, but then again I didn't want the entry to get too long.
Aaaaaalllllllright, here goes nothing.
Amnesia
My luggage pulls me down deeper into the Styx-
I am but a wisp of myself, yet nontheless
I see a few flashes of light, and there is a halo of brightness
(Is this the place I have missed?)
There are people standing over me in white
They take my baggage away with a slice
and wipe my head with a smile
(There is no more turning back.)
But then I hear your voice-
and I laugh, and I remember your familliar joy-
But can you remember me?
I've brought you news from the other side-
But I cannot tell you.
(struck with amnesia)
I remember that this place was a forest, I once was your best friend, and we'd play hide and seek until dusk.
I remember that apart from being friends, I once was your uncle, and you'd pester me for snacks all day.
I remember that we were lovers, and then a war came, and you were drafted and never came back.
We always end like so, fated to begin anew
Years of memories melting into a pathetic stew
Waving each other farewell before our words are subdued
And we drown in the sands of time
(struck with amnesia)
But do not cry, friend, or dear, or kiddo
Our lives are all circles
We all meet in the end
Regardless of which fork you head through
Be it on the bench basking silently in the sunrise
Be it under the oak towering rigidly in the twillight
Be it in one of the windows shining yellow in midnight
Old souls meet again, even if they are
struck with amnesia.
(July 30, 2023 - 9:28 am)
It is the end
for you
for me
It is the end
and there's nothing
we
can do about it.
For all things must end
to start
or else starting
is meaningless.
Or else starting
Is lost
Forever
And we're stuck in a deep dark void
Where nothing will ever change.
No range
No breaking free
Of the cycle.
From the cycle.
From the cycle born anew.
It is the end
It is time for us to end
My friend.
We have been here long enough
Together.
It is time to end
To mend.
ok, that was horrible but I'm just gonna post!
(July 30, 2023 - 10:51 am)