Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Update: I just realized I put July 13 for the judging date, but what I meant is June 13. Sorry about that! Get writing, everyone! :)
(June 9, 2023 - 11:37 am)
Ah, I thought so :)
(June 9, 2023 - 2:18 pm)
The List Of Books
I have a.list of books,
So many books to choose from,
What to read, what to read from that list,
I could read Harry Potter, or Percy Jackson,
Maybe, Anne of Green Gables, or Little Women,
I could read something like, Taylor Before and After,
There is so many books on my list, what should I read,
What should I read from that list?
(June 11, 2023 - 11:29 am)
Things to do
one: water Kat's flowers
(oh how terrbily dry they are, how terribly dry)
two: clean what was once my room
(now its a war zone of books
and the shorts that dont fit anymore.
now its a metaphor of my desires,
depressions,
and- goodness get back to the list!)
three: learn to focus
scratch that.
three: buy a new pen
(this ones run out)
four: finish this god forsaken list
five: write that french essay
(wasn't it due like a month ago?)
six: pretend im at the ocean
(sit in the yard with lemonade and watch the pigeons fly)
seven: plan out the things I'll never do
(like an outer movie-too many bugs-
or a hike through the appalacians- why is nature
so pretty but terribly annoying at the
same
exact
time)
eight: i could do math, but i also could sleep
(and gosh doesnt that sound nice)
nine: or i guess i could sit and just watch the world spin
listen to music and cry within
or pretend im a princess
come to take back what i've lost
ten: burn this list.
(June 11, 2023 - 1:41 pm)
(June 13, 2023 - 7:35 pm)
I might be past the deadline, ignore this if it is. I honestly don’t know if this even counts as a poem, but I was feeling incredibly sad for no reason the other day and just started writing it~
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Snapshots from my life to prove that the world is a beautiful place:
i. the flowers that emerge for only a few weeks during the springtime when the weather is just starting to turn and their petals fall like tears from branches
ii. mango smoothies with sticky straws from hole-in-the-wall stores in chinatown
iii. small bookstores with chalk signs handwritten with care and spiderwebbed with fairy lights
iv. the sky right before the sun sets, when it looks like watercolor paint in shades of irises and blackberry juice spread across the faint stars
v. churches with rainbow flags hanging over their open doorways
vi. listening to music so loud that it’s the central point of your entire world and you can’t hear anything else
vii. holding your best friend’s hand and making her laugh so hard that she can’t breathe and kissing her on the forehead and resting your head on her shoulder on the bus
viii. watching bootlegs of musicals during gym class and trying not to sing along or laugh
ix. the smell of the summer air when it rains softly without any thunder
x. the sidewalk during autumn when it’s strewn with fallen leaves in every shade of red and orange and yellow and brown and the breeze rustles them like a symphony of nature
xi. reading an old library book with soft pages and finding a four leaved clover pressed inside by someone who wanted to pass along some good luck to a complete stranger
(June 13, 2023 - 9:13 pm)
(June 14, 2023 - 7:46 am)
Many apologies for not doing this sooner- JUDGING TIME!
Honorable Mentions
Book Girl! This is such a relatable feeling- not knowing where to start when there's so many great options. (Plus the books you mentioned are all great ones). I think to improve you might want to add details and description of how this feeling feels, or about the books themselves.
Hawkstar! I love how lighthearted and fun this poem is, and yet so relatable. Your rhythm is also very good considering there's not much rhyming, and the last 2 lines of the poem are my favorite!
3rd Place: Silver Crystal! I just love your writing, honestly. This feels so comforting and uplifting to read, and your imagery is so simple yet specific and evoking a lovely feeling. Even if this poem doesn't have some super deep meaning, it's always good to just write for the sake of writing something beautiful.
2nd Place: Pointsetta! I love how this poem tells a really sweet story and circles back from beginning to end. The comparisons between a shopping list and the "essentials" of life are quite nice and clever, too. "the thing most worth buying in your shopping mall,/ the sun in the sunrise/ the water in the waterfall" is my favorite line.
1st Place: oldish books! I think I'm partial to this poem because I see myself in it- the unsureness of what I really want to do, the constant getting off track from the real "list". I like all the details- they are scattered and unexplained, but add realism; a life that we don't fully know but are getting a glimpse into. the speaker starts out writing everyday tasks, but flows so easily into a deeper look at their mental state and the conflict of their inner desires. The last line takes a darker turn, but I love the air of finished-yet-unfinished mystery it brings. My only criticism is maybe to look over it for spelling/grammar/formatting errors- but that might be purposeful which would make sense for this one.
great job everyone!!!
(June 15, 2023 - 11:14 am)
(June 18, 2023 - 12:00 pm)
(June 18, 2023 - 1:31 pm)
oh jeez I'm so sorry! School just ended for me so i didnt have much tim eot checj the CB! The next theme will be loneliness
(June 18, 2023 - 3:15 pm)
Lonely
The steady drip-drip-drop of the rain
Seems to be a representation of
How my mood is, how gray
It is without someone to love
All around it seems that
Everyone else is fine
Like I am the only one alone
Like it was by design
When I walk down the street
I keep my head down
So I won’t see anyone else
Together, everywhere, all around
Yet even when I am with
Others, and I’m not alone
How can it be that
I still feel on my own?
This loneliness, a heavy burden
From when I watch the sun rise
To when it sets, I feel
That I need someone, I realize
To be there with me
So that I can be
Not alone
Not lonely
(June 18, 2023 - 6:37 pm)
@oldish books when is judging day?
The streets are empty
Doors are closed
Windows are shuttered
The sky is gray
The town is gloom
And
Oh
So
Lonely
Empty of people
Of animals and life
Not a single weed peeks through the cobblestones
Not a single bird peeps
I walk under a raincloud
Tears of loneliness fall
No friends
No family
No place to call home
My sad face reflects to me
When through a window I peek
But beyond it I see
Here the curtains are drawn
And on the bed sits
Me
But not me
Shoulders that sag, and back that is hunched
But different
Like the eyes that are now looking
At me
A slight smile
A bit of hope
The door opens
Both to the house
And our hearts
(June 19, 2023 - 10:07 am)
Ill be judging Juy 2nd
(June 20, 2023 - 5:18 pm)
solivagant
there is a stranger, tales tell of her
the one who wanders, alone as if lost, but she is not lost, but she is found
petrichor, the scent of freshness and faith;
the swishing of wind in the trees, steps going forwards into the raw power of each aeolian swirl;
starry night skies, company even in the darkest hours, the north star lights the way;
dark branches and leaves twining upwards, arboreal mossy mountains in their own right;
terra incognita, into the unknown, but it is not unknown, but it is home;
because being alone
doesn’t mean
you’re lonely.
(June 20, 2023 - 6:00 pm)