Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Finally finished this!  I wanted to write a sort of rhyme scheme, something I don't usually do.

Shadows linger here,

Drawn from a cruel frontier

Beyond the reach of light and warmth.

The living raise cold towers

That stand stalwart through the hours

And falling sands of time.

 

Castles crumble but headstones remain,

Monuments to love and pain.

Here lies a spirit, unforgotten.

Strangers hidden beneath the stone,

Their loneliness through eons grown, 

Rise in murk to weep and sing.

 

Here the dead find a home,

Although they are still cursed to roam

The misty plain between finite and infinite.

There is comfort in the gloom,

The forsaken tomb where withered flowers bloom.

Life lingers here.

submitted by Sterling, age 16 winters, lost in a fantasy world
(October 31, 2022 - 5:36 pm)

Resulsts!:

Number 1.....:Artemis!

This poem was very sad, and very descriptive. I love you poetry, this feels heavy at parts and light at others. Take your turn at the judging wheel!

 

Second place goes tooooo....!: Sterling

I love the darkness of this poem, it's something I would hang on my wall. The last line really brings it all together. Just like you art, this has a fantasy and otherworldly vibe. It's amazing!

 

I'm sure you can all guess who 3rd place is...IT'S AYLES!

It's short, but sweet...or should I say spooky. The first and second lines are my favorite. Your rhyming is great! 

submitted by Reuby Moonnight, Judging
(November 1, 2022 - 4:27 pm)

Thx! I am happy I got third place!

submitted by Ayles C., age 11, Colorado
(November 1, 2022 - 7:49 pm)

aah thank you! :)

next theme: time (interpret how you wish)

I'll judge on nov. 16

submitted by Artemis
(November 2, 2022 - 3:54 pm)

It took me quite a while to figure out where I wanted to go with this prompt, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.

 

there is a point, when you are halfway to sleep

and the sunset has just been forgotten by the birds

when time is the only thing that is important.

the ticking of a grandfather clock

steals away your time

second by second, and you are very aware in this moment

that when the clock strikes twelve 

you will have wasted another twenty four hours of your life.

in the stillness of shining streetlamps & stars

life is only a countdown until it ends.

 

submitted by WordSong, age Forever, Under a Rock
(November 3, 2022 - 9:53 am)
submitted by toppity tippity
(November 6, 2022 - 12:15 pm)

Topping!

submitted by TOP
(November 6, 2022 - 3:31 pm)
I’m afraid to grow up
Afraid of coffee stains on my teeth
Afraid brightly colored sticky tabs decorating my calendar, no time to relax
Afraid of taxes & bills & paying for things
Why does everything in this world cost so much?
Afraid to rub my temples when I have a headache, wondering when the hair brushing my fingers will turn gray
Afraid for the world to be at my shoulders
Pressing down & down & down
I’m afraid I’ll have to make ends meet
And when they don’t—
I’m afraid to jump that ever-growing gap on my atrophying legs
Too afraid to see how far I’ve flown
Instead, waiting & breathless, stuck loving & longing for one beautiful second before—
Gravity—
Then all I can see is
How far I have to
Fall—
submitted by Hex, poem hatred
(November 7, 2022 - 3:34 pm)

Wow, the imagery in this is extraordinary. This poem is marvelous. 

submitted by WordSong, age Forever, Under a rock
(November 7, 2022 - 8:55 pm)

Thanks! I love yours too, especially the line "and the sunset has just been forgotten by the birds" has such a powerful image, and the last line ties everything together really well.

submitted by Hex
(November 7, 2022 - 10:35 pm)

Thank you so much!

submitted by WordSong, age Forever, Under a Rock
(November 8, 2022 - 10:59 am)

I watch as the hands go by and by

And I wonder, silently, why?

What makes those silver fingers tick

Every minute, every hour, they click, click

Then, every 60 ticks

of the longest hand

It rings, a solemn song

Speaking of right and wrong

Ding and dong

It claws to the top hour 

Then it chimes

Speaking of greater times

Twelve times

Inside, it opens a mechanical door 

Then the cycle begins once more

 

 

 

submitted by Miriam H., age 7777777777, The Stone Table, Narnia
(November 8, 2022 - 12:39 pm)

it's strange the way time can shift and change, 

the way the

tick, 

tick, 

ticking, 

of seconds can warp into

the deep thuds of my heart pounding as I walk into my high school for the first time, 

then twist back into the light pit-patter of rain on the roof of my preschool,

and slide into the light taps of my feet skipping into third grade. 

it's strange how elementary school felt like 

a ballet slipper sliding across the wood of my first studio,

smooth and soft and simple, 

but middle school was like marching through molasses, 

my pink sneakers swamped by the sticky syrup, 

each

step

an

agonizingly

slow

speed,

and then there was a flicker and now I'm fifteen with curls cut to my shoulders and ragged converse on my feet and a mind that won't stop moving. 

it's strange, 

you know, 

the way time twirls and traps and tricks you. 

strange, 

but also beautiful, 

in a way.  

submitted by peppermint, thinking
(November 9, 2022 - 12:36 am)

hi peppermint,

i've been reading your poetry (& everyone's on here! keep up the good work, oh my goodness) for a while and it's wonderful, and i relate to so much of it. your poems are very down to earth & i feel like i could get to know you through them. there's nothing in your poems that suggests you have an extrordinary life or even personality, and yet you manage to write about the most normal, everyday things with such deftness(?) and simplicity that it makes you think, "hey, this thing is pretty cool/weird!"

anyway, this is kind of exactly how i think of my childhood, and i also have curly hair cut, well, actually above my shoulders, but close enough, and i wear converse a lot, and you've written so many others that are exaclty how i also think of things (as probably normal as those things are) and i was like "omg! we're the same person! i should say that!"

i've been commenting on poems a lot here but not posting any. i should get to that- i started one for "graveyard" but got ridiculously busy; i'm planning on posting it anyway on the other poetry thread. ok, ramble over <3

 

submitted by Azalea, age 15, somewhen
(November 9, 2022 - 7:14 pm)

Azaaaaa!!! Haven't seen you 'round in a while! <3<3<3

Also, I know right?? Pepper's poems are always like that in the most relatable, YA/coming-of-age kinda way? I love it so much, even though not many people comment on it very often.

Also, it'd be great to see your poetry again! I hope you get a chance to post some more soon! Good luck with everything going on, and may the hassle and bustle not crush your spirit anytime soon! :D 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Universe
(November 11, 2022 - 2:07 pm)