Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Finally finished this! I wanted to write a sort of rhyme scheme, something I don't usually do.
Shadows linger here,
Drawn from a cruel frontier
Beyond the reach of light and warmth.
The living raise cold towers
That stand stalwart through the hours
And falling sands of time.
Castles crumble but headstones remain,
Monuments to love and pain.
Here lies a spirit, unforgotten.
Strangers hidden beneath the stone,
Their loneliness through eons grown,
Rise in murk to weep and sing.
Here the dead find a home,
Although they are still cursed to roam
The misty plain between finite and infinite.
There is comfort in the gloom,
The forsaken tomb where withered flowers bloom.
Life lingers here.
(October 31, 2022 - 5:36 pm)
Resulsts!:
Number 1.....:Artemis!
This poem was very sad, and very descriptive. I love you poetry, this feels heavy at parts and light at others. Take your turn at the judging wheel!
Second place goes tooooo....!: Sterling
I love the darkness of this poem, it's something I would hang on my wall. The last line really brings it all together. Just like you art, this has a fantasy and otherworldly vibe. It's amazing!
I'm sure you can all guess who 3rd place is...IT'S AYLES!
It's short, but sweet...or should I say spooky. The first and second lines are my favorite. Your rhyming is great!
(November 1, 2022 - 4:27 pm)
Thx! I am happy I got third place!
(November 1, 2022 - 7:49 pm)
aah thank you! :)
next theme: time (interpret how you wish)
I'll judge on nov. 16
(November 2, 2022 - 3:54 pm)
It took me quite a while to figure out where I wanted to go with this prompt, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.
there is a point, when you are halfway to sleep
and the sunset has just been forgotten by the birds
when time is the only thing that is important.
the ticking of a grandfather clock
steals away your time
second by second, and you are very aware in this moment
that when the clock strikes twelve
you will have wasted another twenty four hours of your life.
in the stillness of shining streetlamps & stars
life is only a countdown until it ends.
(November 3, 2022 - 9:53 am)
(November 6, 2022 - 12:15 pm)
Topping!
(November 6, 2022 - 3:31 pm)
(November 7, 2022 - 3:34 pm)
Wow, the imagery in this is extraordinary. This poem is marvelous.
(November 7, 2022 - 8:55 pm)
Thanks! I love yours too, especially the line "and the sunset has just been forgotten by the birds" has such a powerful image, and the last line ties everything together really well.
(November 7, 2022 - 10:35 pm)
Thank you so much!
(November 8, 2022 - 10:59 am)
I watch as the hands go by and by
And I wonder, silently, why?
What makes those silver fingers tick
Every minute, every hour, they click, click
Then, every 60 ticks
of the longest hand
It rings, a solemn song
Speaking of right and wrong
Ding and dong
It claws to the top hour
Then it chimes
Speaking of greater times
Twelve times
Inside, it opens a mechanical door
Then the cycle begins once more
(November 8, 2022 - 12:39 pm)
it's strange the way time can shift and change,
the way the
tick,
tick,
ticking,
of seconds can warp into
the deep thuds of my heart pounding as I walk into my high school for the first time,
then twist back into the light pit-patter of rain on the roof of my preschool,
and slide into the light taps of my feet skipping into third grade.
it's strange how elementary school felt like
a ballet slipper sliding across the wood of my first studio,
smooth and soft and simple,
but middle school was like marching through molasses,
my pink sneakers swamped by the sticky syrup,
each
step
an
agonizingly
slow
speed,
and then there was a flicker and now I'm fifteen with curls cut to my shoulders and ragged converse on my feet and a mind that won't stop moving.
it's strange,
you know,
the way time twirls and traps and tricks you.
strange,
but also beautiful,
in a way.
(November 9, 2022 - 12:36 am)
hi peppermint,
i've been reading your poetry (& everyone's on here! keep up the good work, oh my goodness) for a while and it's wonderful, and i relate to so much of it. your poems are very down to earth & i feel like i could get to know you through them. there's nothing in your poems that suggests you have an extrordinary life or even personality, and yet you manage to write about the most normal, everyday things with such deftness(?) and simplicity that it makes you think, "hey, this thing is pretty cool/weird!"
anyway, this is kind of exactly how i think of my childhood, and i also have curly hair cut, well, actually above my shoulders, but close enough, and i wear converse a lot, and you've written so many others that are exaclty how i also think of things (as probably normal as those things are) and i was like "omg! we're the same person! i should say that!"
i've been commenting on poems a lot here but not posting any. i should get to that- i started one for "graveyard" but got ridiculously busy; i'm planning on posting it anyway on the other poetry thread. ok, ramble over <3
(November 9, 2022 - 7:14 pm)
Azaaaaa!!! Haven't seen you 'round in a while! <3<3<3
Also, I know right?? Pepper's poems are always like that in the most relatable, YA/coming-of-age kinda way? I love it so much, even though not many people comment on it very often.
Also, it'd be great to see your poetry again! I hope you get a chance to post some more soon! Good luck with everything going on, and may the hassle and bustle not crush your spirit anytime soon! :D
(November 11, 2022 - 2:07 pm)