Poetry Thread!
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Poetry Thread!
Poetry Thread!
I know heaps of CBers do beautiful poetry, and I really wanted to read some of your amazing work!
Here's one I wrote last year:
Delicate snowflakes gliding down,
A glistening, crystal, icy crown.
A perfect drop of sparkling snow,
With silver icicles all in a row.
The shining grey-white mingled sky,
I want to cry,
I don't know why.
I hope you guys like it!
Enjoy!
submitted by BookBug
(January 26, 2017 - 5:51 pm)
(January 26, 2017 - 5:51 pm)
That's an amazing poem, BookBug! I'm not very good at writing poetry, BookBug, but I sure like reading it!
(January 26, 2017 - 8:27 pm)
Cool, BookBug! Did you really write that?
(January 26, 2017 - 8:28 pm)
Top!
(January 26, 2017 - 8:31 pm)
Thanks, guys!
(January 26, 2017 - 8:52 pm)
Okay... I have not written any decent poetry at all lately, but this is sort of a short metaphor for myself. My sister was giving me random facts from one of her magazines- who knew I'd find inspiration there! (whales' hearts are actually this big!)
whale
i must be part whale
for my heart is as big as a mid-sized car
what you must remember
is that things with
big hearts can
still
be
blue
(January 29, 2017 - 11:43 am)
That is BEAUTIFUL!!!
(February 1, 2017 - 9:48 pm)
I love that! I like the simplicity and I can definitely relate.
And BookBug's poem is delightfully visible.
My CAPTCHA (Eugene? Cinnamon? Dribble?) is completely incoherent today; 'xmyr.' Me too, Jigglemiester, me too.
(February 3, 2017 - 1:48 pm)
Thank you!
(February 4, 2017 - 3:54 pm)
Here, have some more random poetry. This one's about my sister (who you may know as Lavender. She doesn't post very often) (also, the apostrophes are for stanza breaks or whatever you call them)
sister (alternate title- storm) (idk I can't title or finish things???)
a little girl with
wide eyes and
terra cotta freckles
jumps as thunder rumbles outside
'
she sleeps with all
the lights on and
even
that won't stop her from
running into my room, saying
"i'm scared"
`
"can you sleep with me tonight?"
`
i wasn't going to get much
sleep anyway
(test tomorrow)
so
rubbing my eyes that the sandman had visited
i nod, a groggy
2 AM voice saying
"fine."
`
she surrounds herself with a multitude of
stuffed animals
nothing showing but her face under a
soft striped blanket, and bony olive fingers that match my own
clutch a light purple pillow
`
i'm fine with sleeping on the floor
(i'm fine with most things,
actually)
as the rain pounds down on roof
she asks, voice quivering,
"why is the sky so angry?"
`
maybe because of little girls like you who are
so scared of storms that
they wake up with dark circle under their eyes, or
don't wake up at all
(because they never slept in the first place)
`
maybe the sky just wants to be loved, whether
it's crystal clear and beautiful or
dark and
raging
(February 4, 2017 - 11:46 pm)
That's really pretty!!
(February 5, 2017 - 12:01 pm)
BookBug your poem was amazing!
Here's one I composed in bed when I couldnt fall asleep. :P
Autumn Leaves
A strong wind blows,
A tree is struck,
colors swirl though the air
Gathering slowly,
Towards
Towards teh earth,
Covering,
In a blanket of autumn leaves.
P.S. I want to submit this for the cricket league contest this month.
(February 5, 2017 - 2:13 pm)
Thank you, Caroline!
(February 5, 2017 - 7:44 pm)
(February 10, 2017 - 9:12 am)