Island Paradise Resort!!!
Chatterbox: Pudding's Place
Island Paradise Resort!!!
Island Paradise Resort!!! Please join!
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You are walking into your neighborhood, miserable. You just got out of school, and it's Winter Break. You should be happy, but you aren't. you are going to be stuck in your boring house the whole break, with no access to the Chatterbox. This is because you are grounded.
For reading. Reading!
Well, that isn't exactly the whole story.
The day before yesterday, you were reading an extremely immersing fantasy novel. You were in the middle of a very suspenseful part when your parent yelled,"Lights out!" You tried to argue, but your parent cut you off. "I don't care how good your book is. You need to get some sleep." You wanted to scream that they didn't understand, that you simply had to keep reading. But you kept quiet; there was no use in arguing. You sighed and turned off your lamp.
Five mintues later, you pulled your covers over your head, along with three quilts on top to make sure your flashlight wouldn't shine through and give you away. You turned it on. It was supposed to be used for emergencies only. And this was an emergency. A book emergency.
You continued reading, feeling excited. You wanted to scream with giddy delight when the main character finally kissed that girl, but you could only smile silently. You wanted to punch the wall when the main character's best friend betrayed him, but you could only grit your teeth. Then that charming wizard guy died. You dropped the book, shaking.
"Nooooooooo!" you wailed. "No, no, no, I hate you, author!"
Your bedroom door flew open, and your parent rushed it. It all went downhill from there.
"I am confiscating your book for two da-" your parent started. Suddenly there was a flash, and the room seemed to shudder. For a second, your parent's eyes turned scarlet. Then everything went back to normal, and you forgot all about that weird thing that just occured.
Your parent's voice was cold. "You are grounded. For the entire Winter Break. No screen time, no blogging, and no leaving the house."
Now you are walking home, dead leaves crunching beneath your feet.
You arrive at your house and open the mailbox. Something flies into your hands. It's a letter:
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Dear Chatterboxer and Book Lover,
You have been invited to be in the first group of people to stay at the newly constructed Island Paradise Resort! The Resort sits on a tiny island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. In fact, the entire island is owned by the Resort. We are its only inhabitants. You will be taken to the island on a first-class private jet. Once you arrive, prepare to have a world of fun!
Our Resort is made up of a four-story luxury hotel, a beautiful beach, a small amusement park, a five-star restaurant, multiple relaxation areas, three thrilling waterslides, a peaceful forest, and absolutely no murders!
And the best part is...it's all FREE*!!!
The length of your stay depends on the number of people attending. If you choose, you may bring one AE and/or one CAPTCHA. We will pick you up from your home. Watch for our purple limousine.
We are not responsible for any pain, excruciating pain, deaths, excruciatingly painful deaths, or pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.
See you there,
Island Manager
*You will have to pay for the popcorn.
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You pack your belongings right away, and as soon as you finish, a shiny violet limousine parks in front of your house. You run outside, dragging your AE and(/or) your CAPTCHA with you. The car door opens, and you get in. Before you know it, you are driven away in a whirl of mauve.
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I will let you all know when we have enough people, and then no more people can join.
And you may start guessing as to who I am starting the moment you join.
(June 6, 2016 - 12:58 pm)
Nooo! This suspense IS killing me. I can't wait to find out what happens next. This is spectacular! No matter, I'm willing to wait for it...
*walks off, singing to myself*
Wait for it, wait for it, wait for it, wait for it.
I am the one thing in life I can control!!!!!!!!!
I am and imitible
I am an orginaal (a-al, a-al)
I'm not falling behind or running late!
I'm not standing still I am lying in wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Muriel says "danz". She dancing to Hamilton! :):):):)
(September 9, 2016 - 7:46 am)
(September 10, 2016 - 1:39 pm)
DAY FOURTEEN, part four
Dark.
It was so very dark.
It was pitch black--a darkness Shadowmoon had never known before. For it wasn't like darkness she had experienced before in places where the lights were off--that was merely an absence of light. But this blackness was all there was. It was whole, it was deep, it was completely dominant.
Am I dead?
Shadowmoon suddenly became aware of something cold and hard on her wrists. She tried to lift her hands, pressing the top of her wrists against what was binding her. It felt like the sharp edges were bruising her skin. Shadowmoon sighed and let her hands go limp.
As she relaxed, she felt her spine tingle, sort of like the feeling she'd get in her hands and feet when she went indoors after being outside in freezing cold weather.
More of the tingling sensation, and Shadowmoon could feel that she was strapped to a chair. Why couldn't she feel that before? Had her senses been numbed somehow?
She decided that she couldn't possibly be dead, since she was sensing things. But if this wasn't death, then where was she?
Think, she told herself. Think. What do you remember?
Slowly it came back to her. She had been kidnapped. The killer told her to jump out the window, and she did, landing in a bush and getting a few scratches. She had been led across the island, hidden by palm trees and building overhangs. Then when they got to the slides, she had been ordered to halt. She turned around, and the killer was holding its gun out at her. Now I have to go pretend I don't know where you are, the killer had said. Shadowmoon remembered the click of its finger against the trigger, then a prick on her right collarbone, then the scrape of sand against her legs as she fells, slipping out of consciousness...
And now she was here. But where was here?
Creak.
A light bulb hanging above her sputtered to life. Shadowmoon inhaled sharply as the light illuminated the killer's face directly in front of her, the edges darkened.
If she hadn't been in such a grave situation, Shadowmoon would have found it almost amusing. It was just like interrogation scenes she'd seen in old mystery movies or crime shows.
"You will answer what I ask you. You won't lie to me. Or else it'll be much worse than a tranquilizer dart next time."
Its eyes bore into hers, challenging her to retort. I will not let it know I'm afraid, Shadowmoon thought. She relaxed the facial muscles around her eyes, lightly bit the inside of her cheeks to keep her mouth set in a straight line, and returned the killer's gaze, putting her poker face on.
After a few seconds, the killer spoke, "You said you took advanced biology. Correct or not?"
Shadowmoon's poker face dropped as she registered the killer's question with surprise and confusion. Why on earth would the killer want to know about plants? There had to be a reason. Shadowmoon needed tread carefully.
"Yes," she responded slowly. "I did."
The killer's shoulders relaxed a bit, then stiffened again as it said, "I need you to tell me the name of the fungus discovered by Alexandru-Filip Martine."
Shadowmoon clenched her fists, her nails digging into her sweaty palms. It was all Shadowmoon could to keep from gasping. Because she knew exactly what the killer was talking about.
"You know exactly what I'm talking about. I can tell," the killer's eyes lit with a hungry fire. "Give me the name."
"No," Shadowmoon said, her voice rising with her panic. "No, I'm not telling you!"
The killer glared and leaned closer, grabbing Shadowmoon by the shoulders and giving her a little shake. "Give it to me."
Shadowmoon pressed her trembling lips together and shook her head rapidly.
"Give it to me!" the killer yelled, and Shadowmoon, continued to shake her head. Suddenly the killer's voice dropped to a whisper that was somehow scarier than shouting.
"I have ways of making you tell me, you know. Terrible ways." Shadowmoon stopped shaking her head. "I'm going to get out of you sooner or later. You're no hero. You won't be able to withstand it." The killer smirked. "Nobody on this island could. It's your choice, whether you want this to be painful or not."
Frantically calculating her options, Shadowmoon took a deep breath and looked the killer in the eye. "Okay! Okay. The fungus is sacchormyces cerevisiae."
The killer grew still. Shadowmoon was relieved that it had accepted her lie.
Suddenly it jerked forward and slapped her, hard. Shadowmoon cried out, and her hands slammed against the tops of her wrist cuffs as she instinctively tried to reach for her stinging cheek. Her wrist made a noise that was a cross between a pop and a snap. Shadowmoon whimpered, tears springing to her eyes. Her hand was hanging in its cuff at an odd angle.
"You think I'm an idiot?" the killer screamed, clutching her face wildly, its fingers like hot rods of iron on her skin. "That's the scientific name of common yeast! I don't have time for this! You're a rock in my path, and I will gladly break you, you worthless scum! Give. Me. The. Name!"
Shadowmoon couldn't stop the hiccuping sobs bubbling up in her throat, nor the sweat rolling down her forehead, mixing with her equally salty tears. She couldn't hold back any longer.
"Corruptamentis physarum," she whispered, uttering each syllable like a stab to a vital organ. The killer released her face, panting. It searched her eyes maliciously, then slowly grinned, reaching towards the ceiling turning off the light. Shadowmoon closed her eyes as the killer retreated and shut the door.
Shadowmoon's head was pounding. She sat in silence, alone with the pain she was so full of she couldn't even tell where she was hurting.
And it was dark. So very dark.
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Ohhhhhhhhhh, so THAT'S why you put in all that pointless dialogue about secretaries and advanced biology, Owlgirl!
*runs away cackling, clutching evil writer plot plans*
By the way, I completely made up the scientist name and that fungus name, except the yeast one. I did reseeeeeeeeearch! On a side note, you would not BELIEVE how much I've had to research really random things while writing this. Hawaiian names, tree species, synnyoms, antonyms, definitions, Latin roots, "random gift bag items," etc.
Sorry you had to wait six days for that post! Unfortunately, what with all my schoolwork, long times between posts may be come a thing. I really can't help it; 7th grade is SO busy! I'll try to write during lunch sometimes, if I'm not helping out with the garden shed...sorry, I'm rambling.
And keep this thread topped please! Whether that means throwing crumpled sheets of Hamilton lyrics *glances at pile of paper wads next to computer from the last post*, giving compliments because your words of encouragement keep me going *strikes dramatic pose*, or having a Hamilton complete-the-lyric game because WHO DOESN'T LOVE THOSE, or sharing conspiracy theories *protectively shields those evil writer plot plans*, or posting pictures of dictionaries each time you spot a typo, which I've been checking for, but sometimes I miss something.
Oh thread, just stay alive, that would be enough!
(September 10, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
Daaaaaaaaaaang I reread that post just now, and I must say I am very pleased with that interrogation scene. My hard work on that part seems to have paid off; the scene was just as intense as I intended it to be!
(September 11, 2016 - 9:03 am)
Oh no that comment came across as boastful. I'm so sorry!!!! I hate when it sounds like I'm bragging or complimenting myself, because I'm really not!!!! That was more of a writers public critique. Trust me, I'm honest with myself when I don't think a scene is very good.
Once again, sorry! Ugh, I'm embarrassed.
(September 11, 2016 - 9:12 pm)
No no, don't say that! I thought it was a great scene too! This is honestly one of the most well-written ski lodges I've ever been in, and that interrogation was no exception. Patiently awaiting the next part!
(September 12, 2016 - 12:47 pm)
OHMYGANDOLF!!!!!!!! SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!! I'M LITERALLY ABOUT TO EXPLODE!!!!!!! I know, I'm weird, but this...... It's weird when it's happening to you......But not you. It's like, your heart starts racing at the exact pace of you in the story and...... I dunno. I've never done that before...... Owlgirl this is SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! And your still retaining amazing quality while being busy! That takes some serious skills. You go, girl.
(September 10, 2016 - 7:14 pm)
(September 11, 2016 - 8:54 am)
(September 11, 2016 - 11:15 am)
Ooooooh my goshness I just read what I've missed and... It is so. So. So. SO. Amazing!!!! Owlgirl, you are amazing.
*faints away dramatically*
(September 11, 2016 - 4:41 pm)
Let this thread never die! LET IT NEVER DIE!
(September 15, 2016 - 11:48 am)
(September 15, 2016 - 11:44 pm)
And if this child
Shares a fraction of your smile
Or a fragment of your miiiiiind
That would be enough.....
(September 17, 2016 - 7:48 pm)
(September 18, 2016 - 6:12 am)
We don't need a legacy
We don't need money
If I could grant you pece of mind......
(September 18, 2016 - 10:23 am)