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CBER OLYMPICS FIRST EVENT!
Event One: Mega Charrie Sheet
Participants: Joss; Leafmist; balletandbow; Micearenice; Dragonrider; Jarvis (if anyone else from the CBer Olympics thread joined this event then say so in the comments.)
Charrie Sheet Theme: Typically Normal Looking Humans With Powers
Name: (example: Char Martin)
Age: (e.g. 17)
Gender: (e.g. male)
Hair color: (e.g. russet)
Right eye color: (e.g. green)
Left eye color: (e.g. amber)
Skin color: (e.g. tannish)
Scars: (typically none)
Weight: (e.g. maybe one fifty pounds, so pretty skinny)
Shirt: ( e.g. cobalt blue with half sleeves)
Pants: (e.g. nonscuffed blue denim jeans)
Shoes: (e.g. dark gray converse)
Jacket: (e.g. cyan ski jacket with gray accents)
Any other articles of clothing: (e.g. none)
Other appearance attributes: (e.g. wings RARE)
Wings (very rare, optional): (e.g. russet feathered wings with white tips)
Positive personality traits (list five+): (e.g. cheerful usually, intelligent, helpful, a good teacher, a natural leader)
Negative personality traits (list five+): (e.g. grumpy at night, fiery temper, too authoritative sometimes, hard to trust, likes to fly up to a cloud and mope on some days)
Other personality traits:
Power type: (e.g. shape shifting, elemental control, becoming invisible, walking through walls, etc...)
Power Details and Limits: (e.g. controls fire and water, but can only start small fires and not large waves)
Aura color (the color of the mist of magic when they use it that surrounds them): (e.g. since Char controls both fire and water, his aura is half red orange, half blue.)
Aura Scent: (e.g. red half: hawthorn, blue half: fresh cacao beans)
Other:
I guess if you want to do this just for fun and are not in the Olympics, you can, but put in your form that you're not in them. They will be judged once all entrants have posted. Was this charrie sheet big enough?
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submitted by Scylla
(January 2, 2016 - 10:04 am)
(January 2, 2016 - 10:04 am)
Just a quick thing for the judges, could you guys post your scores and comments all together in one post maybe so we cann see all of them at once?
Also, I am putting some more details into Ash's backstory, so when this event is over, would you guys like to see that?
(January 10, 2016 - 3:15 pm)
l'm on Team 2.
Cyclone says mama. Ah! A real word!
(January 10, 2016 - 5:10 pm)
@Merenwe: I'm going to put you on team 2; is that ok?
@Jarvis: You can still participate!
NOTICE: This contest will end the eleventh, if that's ok with you guys. We need more people from team 2 to post to make it even.
ANY QUESTIONS:
(January 10, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
WHAT THE HEMATITE, I HAD NO IDEA WE WERE JUDGING ALREADY!! OH BAST! Sorry for that outburst, I am just. . . . . A little unprepared. So, I will begin.
Micearenice: You made this charrie sheet so vivid that I could just imagine taking a walk in the woods and Hazel jumping out of nowhere on me. That was fantastic and I don't hesitate in giving you a 10/10. Have you read The Secrets of the Immortal Nicholas Flamel by Michael Scott? I loved it and based this charrie sheet kind of off it.
Curio: Hmm, that wasn't as lifelike. The power was intriguing and your personality traits blended nicely. The backstory was a little lengthy, however. You could probably edit it down, and I don't think it all was necessary. I would say a seven-point-five, or maybe eight.
Applejaguar: I appreciate how normal your charrie seemed, as the subject was seemingly normal-looking humans with powers, and that you acknowledged that you spelled "camoflage" wrong. I give you an eight out of ten.
I will finish later, I need to practice instruments.
(January 10, 2016 - 10:20 pm)
Posted on the other thread for the Oyimpics, but I don't know if Will saw.
@Will, would you rather I compete or judge? I'm fine either way.
(January 11, 2016 - 4:39 pm)
@Merenwe: Either way is great! Which would you prefer? Or do you have no preference?
(January 11, 2016 - 5:58 pm)
@Will, no preference! XD Where ever you want to throw me would be fine.
(January 11, 2016 - 11:14 pm)
(I am on team 2 if nobody saw my 'I'm on team 2' posts yet.)
(January 11, 2016 - 6:11 pm)
Has the judging begun?
(January 12, 2016 - 4:02 pm)
Here is what I gave each of you!
Love the powers, Leafmist.
You get a... 8 out of 10!
Nice backstory, Shadow Dragon!
8 out of 10
nice job, savvy
7 out of 10
awesome powers, cho
8 out of 10
very good background story, DragonRider
8 out of 10
Nice aura colour and name, Elvina
8 out of 10
interesting backstory, Regina!
6 out of 10
love the background and the name,
9 out of ten!
Wow, Rose Bud, awesome background!
9 out of ten
love her backstory, Mincearenice! A very original idea for the growing tattoo.
I'll give you...… a 9 out of 10!
Great job!
Curio, I love what you wrote for power details and limits.
You get a...8 out of 10!
Applejaguar, great the backstory.
You get a....7 out of 10!
LOVE how you put dialogue in Ash's backstory!
You get a....8 out of 10!
That is really awesome about her eyes, OtR!
You get a...7 out of 10!
Nice backstory, Joss.
You get a...7 out of 10!
Nice power details and limits, Owly!
You get a....8 out of 10!
I love Sawyer's appearence, Horse Spirit Girl!
You get... 9 out of 10!
(January 12, 2016 - 8:30 pm)
Merenwe, could I put you on team 1?
(January 12, 2016 - 8:09 pm)
Sure! Thanks, should I complete this part? Or wait til the next one?
(January 13, 2016 - 4:22 pm)
On with the judging:
Balletandbow: Yours was extraordinarily detailed, and I loved the backstory, save for a couple spelling and punctuation errors. Perhaps a bit too close to a fantasy appearance, but I suppose there are people like that out there. . . 8/10
Over The Rainbow: I don't have much to say about yours, but agree with Anna. 7/10. I'm not saying I don't like it (I love all of them) but can't come up with much.
Joss: That power was very intriguing. I was a bit confused at first, but eventually caught on. The scar bit was somewhat alarming, but turned out okay. 7 and a half or so out of 10.
Booksy Owly: Yours was so sad! You made some errors, but I don't even care anymore. I like it. What I was confused about, though, was if Lilla didn't want to talk or couldn't. 8/10
Leafmist- I'm tired of giving feedback. Go, me! 7/10
Shadow Dragon- I love everything you write. 10/10. That was really creative, and typo-free!
Cho Chang- Very fantastical appearance. Typically normal humans with unusual powers, remember? Normal. How many people have you seen with silver and gold eyes? Still, I love silver and gold and would be amazed to see one with aurum and argentum in their eyes. 8/10
Dragonrider- 9/10
Elvina- 9/10. I loved that "power".
Regina- A little hard to read, but 9/10.
HSG- What's up with everyone running away? Or tragic incidents? THERE ARE NO HAPPY FAMILIES!! NOOO!!! Sorry, your rating now: 8/10
Rose Bud- Awesome! 9.5/10
Any more entries, hum dum dum. . . . Nope! All done! If I missed anyone, tell me. Please don't be upset if you think my rulings are unfair. If you have a valid reason, however, tell me. We should see who has the top votes and take the winners from that group.
(January 13, 2016 - 6:41 pm)
Totally slapping my face right now. And I was thinking as I created this charrie how everyone didn't seem to be doing normal stuff.
Totally slapping my face right now. Sorry team one!
(January 14, 2016 - 2:22 pm)
*blushes*
Thank you, Scylla!
(January 16, 2016 - 9:12 pm)