Post your own

Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

Post your own

Post your own poems thread!

This is basically just a thread for posting poems that you wrote yourself. I''m a little bored right now and poetry is sometimes a really good pastime. I'll post mine later. 

submitted by Dragonrider
(May 26, 2015 - 8:20 pm)

The ocean retreats

A giant wave is spotted

A scream "TSUNAMI" 

 

submitted by StormyCat, age NA, Earth
(May 26, 2015 - 11:53 pm)

top top top

Here is my poem:

The Sea

A turtle swims slowly, silently,

through the calmly rolling waves 

feasting on small things but not meaning any harm.

Meanwhile a dolphin glides through the ocean,

searching for a playmate.

Schools of fish seem to dance in the water,

their silvery scales glittering

in the beautiful sunlight.

The sea does not mind,

he's as old as the earth

he's used to these creatures

and loves them dearly

offering them an endless world,

of wonders 

submitted by Dragonrider
(May 27, 2015 - 8:10 pm)
Remembering the Colors
Remember. Oh, the girl doesn’t want to. But she will. Remember the colors, the red streaking across her face, the white coats… Those men. Those men with blue eyes, silver guns… White coats… But the blue eyes, looking into your soul, eating through your skin. Those eyes showed hatred, evil, and horror.
Don’t remember… Don’t remember those colors… But the memories bite into her neck, whisper in her ear, tell her about the secrets that she doesn’t want to hear. The men held bright orange torches, that you could see from a mile, that gleamed in the jet black night. The bangs of gunshots… The screams of family…. The fall of legs… Remember, remember, remember.
Why can’t she stop remembering? Remember the red blood, the whispers of the men… “Come here… Come here…”
She will keep remembering, remembering those memories, sunk into her soul.
She will keep remembering those colors of hatred, evil, and horror.
One little story. Very very optimistic.
submitted by Danie
(May 27, 2015 - 8:14 pm)

My braid comes undone

in the wrathful, raging wind

as I stand, waiting 

submitted by Nora the Singer
(May 27, 2015 - 9:11 pm)

quilts be Crumpled,

stiched awry,

blood be Splatters,

hearts Beat dry,  (no clue why I'm getting weird spacing, but moving on!)

 

marches synchronous,

harsh our guide,

Stubles many,

staty by my side.

 

Gloom touching,

little Aches, 

sacks we're clutching,

Stolen Snakes. 

 

world, so Wretched,

dawn, so cruel,

Forgotten, stilles,

Lifetime Spooled. 

 

Eyes, so tiny,

glistening Embers,

techings kindly,

Abruptly Dismembered.

 

batting Thread,

tangles unpry,

Soft your tread,

Stay By My Side. 

 

 

Ahh, don't we all love super depressing poems?:) Actually, this poem is about taking a pilgrimage and it was a school assignment.

 

submitted by Abigail A., age 14, VT
(May 28, 2015 - 6:45 am)

we are ash mired,

salt choked.

our throats tangle poison

and our hands devour clocks.

this is a disconnect.

 

-on lying to yourself 

submitted by SC
(May 28, 2015 - 10:19 pm)

This is my most recent poem, not my best, but here it is:

Two Ponds

 

 

This spring, there were turtles everywhere.

From palm-sized babies to giant alligator snappers,

the two slimy, murky ponds had every size.

 

We caught a baby and kept it over-night, and 

this was the first of many that spent several 

hours in the big plastic planter. I imagined my mother

 

and her two sisters catching turtles years ago

from the same ponds, keeping the babies in 

empty cool-whip containers, passing around 

 

the bigger ones so that all could stroke its dripping brown shell.

I can picture my Mom wading in the larger of the two ponds, 

flicking water onto her younger sisters and daring them to 

 

go swimming in the realm of the alligator snappers. Back when 

the old wooden diving board was intact, they probably

would dive from it one after the other in swimsuits

 

and cut-off jean shorts. Maybe they would catch

worms and spear them onto a fishing pole,

dangling their legs in the water from a favorite perch,

 

swinging the pole back and slowly watching the red

and white ball float back to them, covered in algae,

just like we do now, except we can never actually 

 

catch a fish. My brothers, myself, and various cousins

explore the water just like our mothers; splashing 

and sharing legends about the giant alligator snappers,

 

catching all the turtles that come within our reach,

and watching their bobbing heads duck into 

the brown-green shadows when we pass. 

 

 

And here is one that was really fun to write:

 

Transmitters of Thought

 

 

 

Finger joints bent at the knuckle,

jagged oval nails clacking unevenly,

 

skin pressing in a way only described

by the black squares gently clicked

 

two at a time, excitedly, restlessly

then pausing, tentatively hoping for more,

 

tremulous, as the blood circulates under

the rough skin, marred by scratches,

 

the criss-cross lines spread open

like the veins of a leaf, extending

 

with every grasp of the curled

fingers, working in wrinkles,

 

writing in riddles, catching phrases,

however random, and harvesting

 

every word they create, scratching

themselves, tapping in aimless rhythm,

 

forever moving in energy yet indescribable

flattening, and inhaling, sharp ends 

 

picking forgotten shreds of nail-polish,

until at a single command, they slow,

 

stretching, lying across the words they

have fingered, scribbled, re-traced, now alive.

 

 

SC... That was AMAZING. 

submitted by Rose bud
(May 29, 2015 - 10:43 am)

Imaginary Friend (it's not the best but whateva)

I'm not leaving you

you'll never see me again

this is not goodbye

you're not leaving me

I'll never see you again

but I can't ask why

the word spins too fast

I grew up much to quickly

way to late to try

imaginary

they say you're not even real

but I won't take sides 

 

submitted by Savvy44x
(May 29, 2015 - 6:33 pm)

 

To Darkness?

By Brooke Elliott 

I've seen darkness and light

I've seen splendours and glooms

I don't know if I'll fight

The soft waning of the moon 

 

There wil always come a time

When you wish to place

Your own soul on the line

To live in some false peace

 

Sometimes the line is greyed

Between heaven and hell

But a whisper comes to mind

Saying "all will be well."

 

I wrote this randomly, it doesn't seem good. But seriously, guys, I don't want to sound mean, but non-rhyming, non-metered "poetry" should be called VERSE. Rhyming, metered poetry is POETRY. Not mad, just saying. 

 

submitted by Brookeira
(May 29, 2015 - 6:53 pm)

Poems do not have to rhyme. They just need rhythm. There is a difference.

submitted by Poet
(May 29, 2015 - 9:39 pm)

Actually, some places like Stone Soup will only accept non-rhyming poetry.

I do like your poem. 

submitted by OtR
(May 30, 2015 - 6:32 am)

@Poet: Non-metered means rhythmless. Please read my whole post and look up any vocab you don't know before you critique it, thanks.

submitted by Brookeira
(May 31, 2015 - 8:54 pm)

I'm aware. I never said otherwise. What exactly are you referring to... ? 

submitted by Poet
(June 1, 2015 - 11:36 am)

I write verse about crazy things... 

Always watching you

Everywhere

At

Once 

One eye

Yellow triangle

Four-Dimensional?

He can be called 

His eye opens 

As he shakes your hand

He lights a blue fire

The fire of a deal

With many strings attached

Reality is an illusion

The universe is a hologram

Buy gold

BYYYYEEEE!!!

... yeah. You can guess who it's about.  

submitted by Somebody, age No cares, Various placss
(May 29, 2015 - 7:10 pm)

Here I go:

I peer over the edge

Jump!

No.It's too far. I'm too scared...

Fear is nothing! Don't be scared!

Well I am.

Jump!

NO.

Your friends are at the bottom, they wait expectantly.

They are staring at me.

They want to see you overcome your fear! Jump!

I can't. 

Too bad, you're going to.

My legs tense, my feet leave the ground, and I hit the water

My friends are clapping.

Fun?

Yes.

Again?

Nope.

 

 

Sorry, It's pretty terrible. I was just sort of writing down a conversation with myself I had at the diving board once. 

submitted by TARDISrider, age 982, Gallifray
(May 30, 2015 - 8:14 am)