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Post your own poems thread!
This is basically just a thread for posting poems that you wrote yourself. I''m a little bored right now and poetry is sometimes a really good pastime. I'll post mine later.
submitted by Dragonrider
(May 26, 2015 - 8:20 pm)
(May 26, 2015 - 8:20 pm)
The ocean retreats
A giant wave is spotted
A scream "TSUNAMI"
(May 26, 2015 - 11:53 pm)
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Here is my poem:
The Sea
A turtle swims slowly, silently,
through the calmly rolling waves
feasting on small things but not meaning any harm.
Meanwhile a dolphin glides through the ocean,
searching for a playmate.
Schools of fish seem to dance in the water,
their silvery scales glittering
in the beautiful sunlight.
The sea does not mind,
he's as old as the earth
he's used to these creatures
and loves them dearly
offering them an endless world,
of wonders
(May 27, 2015 - 8:10 pm)
(May 27, 2015 - 8:14 pm)
My braid comes undone
in the wrathful, raging wind
as I stand, waiting
(May 27, 2015 - 9:11 pm)
quilts be Crumpled,
stiched awry,
blood be Splatters,
hearts Beat dry, (no clue why I'm getting weird spacing, but moving on!)
marches synchronous,
harsh our guide,
Stubles many,
staty by my side.
Gloom touching,
little Aches,
sacks we're clutching,
Stolen Snakes.
world, so Wretched,
dawn, so cruel,
Forgotten, stilles,
Lifetime Spooled.
Eyes, so tiny,
glistening Embers,
techings kindly,
Abruptly Dismembered.
batting Thread,
tangles unpry,
Soft your tread,
Stay By My Side.
Ahh, don't we all love super depressing poems?:) Actually, this poem is about taking a pilgrimage and it was a school assignment.
(May 28, 2015 - 6:45 am)
we are ash mired,
salt choked.
our throats tangle poison
and our hands devour clocks.
this is a disconnect.
-on lying to yourself
(May 28, 2015 - 10:19 pm)
This is my most recent poem, not my best, but here it is:
Two Ponds
This spring, there were turtles everywhere.
From palm-sized babies to giant alligator snappers,
the two slimy, murky ponds had every size.
We caught a baby and kept it over-night, and
this was the first of many that spent several
hours in the big plastic planter. I imagined my mother
and her two sisters catching turtles years ago
from the same ponds, keeping the babies in
empty cool-whip containers, passing around
the bigger ones so that all could stroke its dripping brown shell.
I can picture my Mom wading in the larger of the two ponds,
flicking water onto her younger sisters and daring them to
go swimming in the realm of the alligator snappers. Back when
the old wooden diving board was intact, they probably
would dive from it one after the other in swimsuits
and cut-off jean shorts. Maybe they would catch
worms and spear them onto a fishing pole,
dangling their legs in the water from a favorite perch,
swinging the pole back and slowly watching the red
and white ball float back to them, covered in algae,
just like we do now, except we can never actually
catch a fish. My brothers, myself, and various cousins
explore the water just like our mothers; splashing
and sharing legends about the giant alligator snappers,
catching all the turtles that come within our reach,
and watching their bobbing heads duck into
the brown-green shadows when we pass.
And here is one that was really fun to write:
Transmitters of Thought
Finger joints bent at the knuckle,
jagged oval nails clacking unevenly,
skin pressing in a way only described
by the black squares gently clicked
two at a time, excitedly, restlessly
then pausing, tentatively hoping for more,
tremulous, as the blood circulates under
the rough skin, marred by scratches,
the criss-cross lines spread open
like the veins of a leaf, extending
with every grasp of the curled
fingers, working in wrinkles,
writing in riddles, catching phrases,
however random, and harvesting
every word they create, scratching
themselves, tapping in aimless rhythm,
forever moving in energy yet indescribable
flattening, and inhaling, sharp ends
picking forgotten shreds of nail-polish,
until at a single command, they slow,
stretching, lying across the words they
have fingered, scribbled, re-traced, now alive.
SC... That was AMAZING.
(May 29, 2015 - 10:43 am)
Imaginary Friend (it's not the best but whateva)
I'm not leaving you
you'll never see me again
this is not goodbye
you're not leaving me
I'll never see you again
but I can't ask why
the word spins too fast
I grew up much to quickly
way to late to try
imaginary
they say you're not even real
but I won't take sides
(May 29, 2015 - 6:33 pm)
To Darkness?
By Brooke Elliott
I've seen darkness and light
I've seen splendours and glooms
I don't know if I'll fight
The soft waning of the moon
There wil always come a time
When you wish to place
Your own soul on the line
To live in some false peace
Sometimes the line is greyed
Between heaven and hell
But a whisper comes to mind
Saying "all will be well."
I wrote this randomly, it doesn't seem good. But seriously, guys, I don't want to sound mean, but non-rhyming, non-metered "poetry" should be called VERSE. Rhyming, metered poetry is POETRY. Not mad, just saying.
(May 29, 2015 - 6:53 pm)
Poems do not have to rhyme. They just need rhythm. There is a difference.
(May 29, 2015 - 9:39 pm)
Actually, some places like Stone Soup will only accept non-rhyming poetry.
I do like your poem.
(May 30, 2015 - 6:32 am)
@Poet: Non-metered means rhythmless. Please read my whole post and look up any vocab you don't know before you critique it, thanks.
(May 31, 2015 - 8:54 pm)
I'm aware. I never said otherwise. What exactly are you referring to... ?
(June 1, 2015 - 11:36 am)
I write verse about crazy things...
Always watching you
Everywhere
At
Once
One eye
Yellow triangle
Four-Dimensional?
He can be called
His eye opens
As he shakes your hand
He lights a blue fire
The fire of a deal
With many strings attached
Reality is an illusion
The universe is a hologram
Buy gold
BYYYYEEEE!!!
... yeah. You can guess who it's about.
(May 29, 2015 - 7:10 pm)
Here I go:
I peer over the edge
Jump!
No.It's too far. I'm too scared...
Fear is nothing! Don't be scared!
Well I am.
Jump!
NO.
Your friends are at the bottom, they wait expectantly.
They are staring at me.
They want to see you overcome your fear! Jump!
I can't.
Too bad, you're going to.
My legs tense, my feet leave the ground, and I hit the water
My friends are clapping.
Fun?
Yes.
Again?
Nope.
Sorry, It's pretty terrible. I was just sort of writing down a conversation with myself I had at the diving board once.
(May 30, 2015 - 8:14 am)