Mysterious. Should I make a new charrie for this?

it was cold. and wet. it twore me apart again and again until I thout I was nothing but shreds. It went on for houers, or was it then? then it stoped. nothing at all. but there was cold. I knoe I was on solid ground, but I didnt move. I dodnt want to know if it was just a trick set up by B.I.G. and I wold much rather stay in the frezing mistery. slowly, I started hearing waves, and frealing sand under my bare towes. then I also felt my breth, or morsow, how I wasent breathing! I emedeotly started cauthing, triying to get the salty water out of my lungs. Okay vivean, you have to start breathing, I have no idea how you lived this long without air, but without it much longer and you,ll shurly be dead. and that wont help you vary much, will it? I blinked open my eyes. the word araud me blured into focous. winded over sand dunes and grey warm skys. and not a human or animal in sight. I was laying just below the line of sea wead, on my side. the jacket I had ben wering had a huge gape in the back. but they were in beter shape than my shews, I think. they were ribed of of my feet with the portion of my jaket. and the rest of my clothes, well, I think you can gess. I stood up, stumbled, took a step, and fell over, geting sand all over my ears and tail. okay than vivean, were going to make it harder for yourself? FINE I started crawling up the beach. eventualy, I made it to a small bush under a grewp of evergreens. I took of my jaket, and spred it over the nedles that were poking my kneas, than I curled up under the leaves. I hope it dosent rain tonight. Ive had enoth water. 

"this is were she will be, I promis you" "well, if she isent, and we cant bring her back to Dagger bay, it may not be just awer jobs on the line." I sat up, the bush had hide me up till now, but now, the speshal opritives were standing feet away from me! I slid backwards then I hit sumthing, squishy... 

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sam grabed my jacket, and lifted me of the ground! "HEY PUT ME DOWN!!!" I shouted! the other three spun araund. "Im sorry Vivean, but your stay will have to be expanded, all they cold make out of your blood so far was a bunch of lethal gew. " sam started to drag me twords the beach, then I streched my arms up, and sliped out of the tworn jacket. "come on Vivean! weve let you go outside, weve ben so genorose to you! why wont you let us ceap awere jobs and lives!" thats when I exploded. "YOU CALL CEPING ME IN A SINGLE ROOM FOR MONTHS BEFORE LETING ME BRETH FRESH AIR, GENORUS? sorry, not sory, but without you, I wodent even have to be like this!" I motiond to my face, and the skars that mangled it. "and frankly, I dont think you diserve my... kindnes, from how you treat eny animal thats not human. and also, without you guys, I dont think there wood be much of a skurry inbewten the races. and now I must say, Good day."

I took a step back and landed in a lilly pad coverd river, that im glad wasent just a member of my imagenation. the waters caried me away quikly, and after a minute of to, I was shure I was at least a mile or two away. I climed out at a low bank, coverd in stone. "I realy nead to find a bater way of transpertation." I muterd to myself as I rung out my Hair. Now moreso able to wlk stedaly, I went into a shady forest, still uterly lost. I shoud also find another thing to do wen Im bord than geting lost I smerked. and I knew, It was all doun hill from hear.

smoke. thats what led me to the small town. "welcome to Paralin? Paranli?" I shruged and walked twards the midle area. I saw alot of diversity in the small town. I saw animals and humans alike, and even maby afew shape shifters? I knew this becose I saw a large famaly at the market, only geting things like letuce and carotts.

"Extra Extra! new power discoverd!" I paused there was a young otter waving a news letter obove his head. "a new pawer was discoverd?" I asked. "yes, where have you ben the ast month?" I shruged "Its a long storry." the news boy mimicked my shrug and sayd,"well, there hosting a large party at an under sea dome, super exclusive. and there are acuple gests that have gone mising, or just not shown up." my eyes widend, "I think I know who your talking abaut. can you point me to where I can get some new clothes?" I say. the otter smiled. "yha, actualy, my famaly runs a clothing store, that tayors clothes for people like you." he glanced at my ears and tail, then back at my face. "Thats great! can you tell me where it is?" "of cores, if you falow the road this way he pointed to the left, were a smoth pathed road was then It wil be the 12 bilding to your right." "Thanks!" I say before stroling of in the direction he pointed me in.

It was a small bilding, but it was much biger on the inside.

"Hello?" I say, as I walked into the darker part of the store. a femail otter apeard out of the shadow. "Hi dear, Oh my! what hapend to you?" she exclamed! "Its a long storry, but I knead your help, oviosly."

I explained my problem, and she helped me get a outfit that will mach the theam of the party I wood be crashing, well, not egcactly, If I wasent in such a fishy situation, I wood have the invatation to. the outfit was simple, A short sleve white button doun shirt with a long skirt that bilowes doun past my feat. we had thout abaut having a hat, but I wanted to be able to hear everything, so nothing covering my ears, or tail at that. and the most astoneshing thing, nothing to cover my skars. "Are you shure I shudent cover my skars?" I asked her. "yes, I am. if enything, they just draw mor atention to your face. more than eny amaunt of mackup will ever." that made me blush.

eventualy, I sayd thank you to her and started of to the warph. If I was going to get to this party, I was going to chach this boat.

and after hours of whating, I finaly made it to the party, where they havent even anaunced who was going to be gardean.