Elizabeth M./ Analesia's
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Elizabeth M./ Analesia's
Elizabeth M./ Analesia's thread! This thread is for us to write... whatever we end up writing.
submitted by Analesia, age 12, starting this thread
(June 11, 2011 - 3:49 pm)
(June 11, 2011 - 3:49 pm)
I love the name!!!
Fifteen souns good.
Appearance: Brown eyes, Frizzy (insert color here) hair, tallish
I couldn't think of the hair color...
(July 8, 2011 - 2:29 pm)
Dark red hair! I don't know why, but it could be so dark red that it's almost purple! XD I'm glad you like the name!
One more thing before we start. Where does she live and what's her background story? She could be out in the country and then she has to go to a big city or the other way around... What do you think?
(July 10, 2011 - 9:27 am)
The kingdom in the country she's princess of could be called... Fedrio. Then she goes to the kingdom of... Kuline, which is more populated. The names came off the top of my head. You can change them.
(July 11, 2011 - 5:16 pm)
The names are great! One more thing: first person or third person?
(July 12, 2011 - 11:36 am)
I write better in 1st.
(July 14, 2011 - 7:26 pm)
I sit in the large parlor of our castle. The afternoon sunshine shows through the white curtained windows. Ellie, the maid, walks in carrying a silver tray. She stumbles slightly when she walks in and I glare. What exactly is the use of a servant when they can't even carry in your tea?
"Missus Edria. Here's your tea. Lord and Lady have someone they want you to meet." I sit up in shock on Ellie's last piece of news. I am of higher birth so I normally do not converse with servants, but my curiousity had just been aroused.
"Who is this guest?" I turn my full attention to the small girl of twelve.
"I-I-This is not my place to tell you, Missus."
"Tell me now or-" I do not end my threat. The girl is younger than me. I cannot be so cruel to someone so young. My feeling get ahold of me and I change," I'm sorry, Ellie. I did not mean..."
"Bribery is not a good habit, Missus."
"I am not bribing you!" My voice raises slightly.
"Yes, Missus, and before you get angry sit down and wait." Ellie exits the room.
(July 15, 2011 - 10:01 am)
Ellie comes back in. "Milady, you are to meet him in an hour," she says. I sigh and get into my gown Mother makes me wear to meet new suitors. That is surely who theyh want me to meet. I work on my embroidery until Ellie comes to show me to the correct chamber. I glide in, my dress pluming out behind me. I walk in and see my mother and father with a strange man.
(July 15, 2011 - 2:36 pm)
Please do continue.
(August 12, 2011 - 9:42 pm)