Chatterbox: Inkwell

Hey peoples. I'm writing a novel about a few teenagers with pretty rough lives who stumble upon a "perfect world", where they could get a chance to become a flawless version of themselves, while trying to escape from the institution that they are locked up in. However, the people in the "perfect world" who supposedly want to help them to become their perfect selves, with the aid of new technology, are actually outcasts from society who became demons while trying to create this new technology to "fix their flaws". And now the demons want revenge; they want to make the earth a demon kingdom. It is up to these misfit kids to save the world from the demons with the help of several other kids who ended up in the "demon world" but were not killed by the council of demon people who try to find regular kids to lead them to earth, since the demons cannot get to earth without a portal that can only be opened by a pure human in very specific circumstances.

I know it is confusing now, but if this generates interest I can post the prologue. I hope to get some reviews as I think my story is pretty good so far.

Thanx!