Started a new

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Started a new

Started a new novel. EEEEEEE!

(Not for NaNoWriMo. Just so you know.)

 

So, it's called the Silver War, and the plot is this: These two children called Cambron and Rondelay are living in a town called Archinduke, which is the main town in Cymbell kingdom. There are rumors of a "Silver War" starting-a war between humans and wood-elves between the silver under the ground in Brindell forest. As Brindell is the immense forest that borders Cymbell, the king-spurred on by the greedy and ambitious Lord Aubrey-reasons that the silver belongs to him. The elven king disagrees and...well...you can see. In the midst of the rumors, Cambron and Rondelay meet an elven princess called Lillet, and set out to stop the elves and humans from starting an inter-species war.

 

So, what do you think? I'm not entirely sure how it will all wrap up-I'm in the middle of the first chapter, so I'm still developing the characters and what-not. If you like, I can post the prologue, but be warned: The prologue, while it is wrapped up with the story in a way that would spoil it to explain here, has nothing about Cambron, Rondelay, Archinduke, Lord Aubrey, or Lillet in it. Intrigued? ;)

 

Well, lemme know whatcha think, and if you want the prologue.

 

Andy P. C. says guii. He thinks I should post it. And he's calling me a genius. Aw, Andy! :D

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 20, 2010 - 11:16 pm)

That sounds AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, please post the prologue!!!

submitted by Clair, age 13, Somewhere Quite
(November 21, 2010 - 3:14 pm)

Yes, ma'am! Haha, hi Clair, I was wondering where you'd gotten too! ;)

 

PROLOGUE

 

It wasn’t Billy’s fault that the teacher never made herself clear. It wasn’t his fault that when she said “Civil War” it sounded a lot like “Silver War”. It was, he supposed, partly his fault that he had what his father called “CDS”-Chronic Daydreaming Syndrome-but not all the way. And it certainly wasn’t his fault that it was a beautiful spring day and there was half an hour to go before school was out for spring break, so he was naturally feeling bored and not listening to his teacher.

The way it started, Billy was wondering whether to put an hour-glass or a clock on his doodle of a time machine that he was carefully making in the corner of a notebook. This was an important decision. He couldn’t put in the calendar until he’d decided which one worked best. On the one hand, a clock had more times to choose from-but on the other hand, Billy had a fondness for hour-glasses, and it looked better on the dashboard.

He was in the middle of this dilemma and wondering if he ought to use both when the teacher called on him.

“William?” It always bothered him when people used his full name. He was busy thinking about his annoyance and his clock-or-hour-glass dilemma, so it was no wonder the teacher’s next words sounded garbled. “Could you come up here and hand out these book lists? They’ll help you in your research about the Silver War.”

Silver War? That sounded kind of interesting.

“Yes, Ms. Burns,” he said obediently, and went to her desk to get the lists.

“As you know, class,” Ms. Burns continued as Billy handed out the lists, “spring break is almost here, so you’ll have two weeks to write a three-page essay on the Silver War.”

This time it was hard to hear what she said, since at the words “three-page essay,” many of the students, Billy included, set up a loud groan. His mild interest in the Silver War had fled. Ms. Burns was a pretty good teacher, Billy supposed. She was pretty, but not excessively so. She could keep the rowdiest kids in line, and most of the time she had fun ideas. Her only fault--besides calling him William--was her unquenchable enthusiasm for three-page essays.

“Come on, class,” she said. “Think of this as a challenge to overcome, an adventure to take!”

Like as not it was these words that sowed the seeds for Billy’s idea.

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All while on the bus, Billy’s head was spinning with thoughts of the Silver War. For some reason he kept thinking elves had something to do with it, even though they were studying American history and he was pretty sure there had never been any elves in the United States. Two names kept following him, too--Cambron and Rondelay. And so it was that when his friend Andy tried to talk to him, he was locked deep in argument with himself about whether or not Rondelay was a boy’s name.

“Hey!” Andy shouted, punching Billy on the shoulder.

“Huh?” said a dreamy Billy, having decided that Rondelay was a boy’s name. But what’s the elf’s name? What elf?

“What’s the matter with you?” Andy demanded. “You’ve been really quiet.”

“Hm? Oh, I was just thinking about that essay we have to do.” If Billy had added, “About the Silver War,” he might never have done what he did, but luckily he didn’t.

“Yeah, bummer. Ruins the whole spring break. Aw, well…” And Andy was silent again, leaving Billy free to contemplate the Silver War.

 

 

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When the bus stopped at his house, Billy raced up the steps, through the door, to the dining room table. He was going to get his homework over with as quickly as possible so that he could start on his essay. Funny, he had never felt this enthusiastic about an essay before.

Math, English, science, social studies, and geography were run through quickly. Now he just had history, and that, of course, was his essay.

If he had looked at his book list, he would have stopped his idea right then and there. But Billy, although he was a good student and liked to read fiction every now and then, never read non-fiction if he could help it. So, he chose to cheat a little and search on the Internet. After all, Ms. Burns never said he couldn’t.

Half an hour of searching proved fruitless. There was almost nothing about the Silver War besides World of Warcraft pages and the Silver War Badge. There were countless pages on the Revolutionary War, the Trojan War, the Civil War--but the Silver War? Not a thing.

Rubbing his eyes behind his round glasses, he stood up, grabbed a piece of lined paper and a sharp pencil, wrote The Silver War across the top of the page with his name underneath, and sat down at the table with half an idea forming in his mind. Subconciously, he banished the essay to a dark void and wrote a story instead.

This is what he wrote.

 

Andy P. C. says fetr. Fester? :P to you, Andy.

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 21, 2010 - 4:12 pm)

First- I LOVED IT!!!!!!

Second- I haven't been posting because school's been keeping me quite busy, but I pop up occasionally.....................

submitted by Clair, age 13, Here
(November 22, 2010 - 8:14 pm)

1. Really? You did? :D Thanks!

 

2. Ah. Last year of middle school? (I'm asking because I'm homeschooled, so the ways of public and private school are strange to me...)

 

Andy P. C. says gfxo.

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 22, 2010 - 11:50 pm)

1. Yes, yes I did!!!!

2. Um, well, I don't really understand the term "middle school" because I am in seventh grade and where I go to school elementary is K-6, Junior High is 7-8, and High School is 9-12. But if you want to consider Junior High middle school, then I am in my 1st year of middle school. This, makes sense, right???? Because the girls I go to dance with go to middle school and they don't get it at all..............................

3. TOP!!! 

 

submitted by Clair, age 13, At Home
(November 23, 2010 - 6:14 pm)

I'm fairly certain that the terms "junior high" and "middle school" can be used interchangably, actually. 

submitted by ZNZ, age Lucky 13, Death's Domain
(November 24, 2010 - 5:15 pm)

Thank You For That! ZNZ, if you don't mind me asking, why the, erm, interseting location???

submitted by Clair, age 13, Inside A House
(November 24, 2010 - 8:15 pm)

Oh my goodness, I hadn't realised how morbid that location must make me sound! It's actually a Discworld reference. The Death of the Discworld -- how to explain this? Well, for starters, he's the Anthropomorphic Personification of death. Basically, the Grim Reaper. Bones, scythe, black cloak, white horse (his name is Binky), all that jazz. HE TALKS LIKE THIS. And he doesn't kill people; he just goes around to the people who are dying and takes their souls off with his scythe so the souls can go about their business. This is actually a very important job, as evidenced in Mort when the wrong person is taken and history is totally messed up, with two conflicting realities trying to take place at the same time. And if Death doesn't keep doing his job, nothing can die properly. Windle Poons in Reaper Man, for example, was supposed to die, but Death didn't come so he became a zombie. And Death as a person really isn't mean or scary at all, no matter what CoM and LF may have told you. He actually /likes/ humans. (He saves the life of the Little Match Girl. Not to mention his adopted daughter, Ysabel. And several other people whose names I do not recall. At one point he takes a woman to the afterlife that her dead husband-to-be had gone to so they can be together forever. This is after giving said woman a /bouquet/, a /box of chocolates/, and a huge diamond /to be friends with/. Nice guy? I THINK SO!) And he's really funny, mainly because he takes everything dead literally, pun only mildly intended. And sometimes he's so sweet you just want to give him a big hug. I am an unabashed fan of him. And Death's Domain is the name of the place "between the dimensions" where he lives. Hence, my location. 

Ahem. Sorry. Leaving thread now. 
submitted by ZNZ, age Lucky 13, Death's Domain
(November 24, 2010 - 11:20 pm)

@ZNZ: Oh, no you're not! *drags back* Not until you tell me what you think of my novel. :P

 

@Emily: OK, thanks. :) Whadya think of the novel?

 

Andy P. C. says akef. Akef? Good name for...the elven king! Yes! Thank you Andy! *hugs*

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

 

 

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 26, 2010 - 4:59 pm)

So you don't mind that I went into a huge digression about Discworld on your thread? Oh good. *grin* I like your story so far. Love me some framing devices! (Seriously, that's what I was thinking as I first read it: Ooh, cool framing device!) 

submitted by ZNZ , age Lucky 13, Death's Domain
(November 26, 2010 - 9:10 pm)

No, it's no problem. Thanks for the compliment! :)

 

...This will probably make me sound really ignorant, but what's a framing device?

 

Andy P. C. says agcp. I think he means that I should call him Andy G. P. C. Whatever you say, Andy...

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 27, 2010 - 2:19 pm)

Nah, you don't sound ignorant. As for explanation... I assume you've seen the movie The Princess Bride? (Most people I know have.) You know how it begins with the grandpa reading a story to the little boy? But the grandpa and the boy aren't the main story? The grandpa and the boy are a framing device, a secondary story that surrounds the main story. Another example would be the Arabian Nights -- Scheherezade telling the stories to King Wossname is a framing device for the actual stories. In your story, Bill mis-hearing "Civil War" and begin to write a story is a framing device for the actual story about the Silver War. A framing device would usually be a character telling the story to another character, writing a story, or something similar. Make sense? 

submitted by ZNZ , age Lucky 13, Death's Domain
(November 27, 2010 - 4:48 pm)

@ZNZ: Um, no, I haven't seen the Princess Bride, but I have seen The Point, and that has the same idea. (The king's name is Sharyrar, or something like that.) Yeah, I think I realized what a framing device is about a second about I submitted the post. Haha.

 

Andy P. C. says imia. Imia would be great for either Lillet's sister or mother...

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 28, 2010 - 2:02 pm)

You haven't seen The Princess Bride? Inconceivable! It is the best movie ever, bar none. Certainly the most quotable. It's hilarious. You have to watch it. 

You know, I've never seen it either, ZNZ, but I think I'll add it to my Netflix queue.

CS Admin

submitted by ZNZ, age Lucky 13, Death's Domain
(December 1, 2010 - 7:11 pm)

It's the same way where I live. To the best of my recollection, Junior High and Middle School are the same thing.

submitted by Emily L., age 15, WA
(November 24, 2010 - 6:15 pm)