Hi, everyone. I

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Hi, everyone. I

Hi, everyone. I was bored, so I decided to do a few haikus. They just popped out of my head. If you are going to be critical, keep in mind that these haven't been revised or edited.

Enjoy!

Gecko

Creeping on the tree,

the gecko stares, pounces, kills,

insect devoured

 

Sticky feet clinging,

he darts away into leaves,

waiting for his prey

 

But he has to watch,

keeping alert for hunters,

or his life may end.

Wolf

The wolf scents the air,

ears pricked for an easy kill,

as he trots towards deer

 

He hides in the brush,

waiting for his pack's signal

to strike, attack, kill

Cat

Curled up and purring,

the cat dreams of hunting birds

in the light of sun

 

She wakes, drinks warm milk,

then she finds her way outside,

into the forest

 

Leaves dapple the ground,

birds chirp and twitter in trees.

Then, the cat pouces.

 

 

 

submitted by Nicole P
(March 4, 2010 - 7:24 pm)

"Will anyone at least read my poems?"

submitted by Nicole P
(March 19, 2010 - 2:32 pm)

Love 'em, Nicole! I don't have an critiquey stuff... I just hope this comes to the top so people can read it! :D

submitted by Meadow
(April 16, 2010 - 11:18 am)

Yeah, I am Nicole, everyone, but I am now posting as Coyotegirl76!

*Tries to bring it to the top*

submitted by Coyotegirl76
(April 17, 2010 - 10:38 pm)

Um...  Coyotegirl76 would you please write a story with me??  I think we would have a similar writing style.  What genre do you like?

~ Smile :P ~

submitted by Smile :P, age How Rude!, ~My House~
(April 18, 2010 - 5:42 pm)

Sure, Smile! I like fantasy or animal fantasy, as well as science fiction. What do you like?

submitted by Coyotegirl76
(April 18, 2010 - 11:36 pm)

Amazingly any of those are good for me.  I think an animal fantasy would be fun.  So yeah, let's do that.  Can you make a thread?

~ Smile :P ~

submitted by Smile :P, age How rude!, *my house*
(April 19, 2010 - 6:40 pm)

SURE!!! I love animal fantasy. I'll make a thread now!

submitted by Coyotegirl76
(April 20, 2010 - 5:13 pm)

Those are really good, and like Meadow I'm no critic.  Really you just randomly thought of those?

Wow...

Smile :P

submitted by Smile :P, age How Rude!, ~My house~ (in
(April 18, 2010 - 3:36 pm)