Hi, everyone. I
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Hi, everyone. I
Hi, everyone. I was bored, so I decided to do a few haikus. They just popped out of my head. If you are going to be critical, keep in mind that these haven't been revised or edited.
Enjoy!
Gecko
Creeping on the tree,
the gecko stares, pounces, kills,
insect devoured
Sticky feet clinging,
he darts away into leaves,
waiting for his prey
But he has to watch,
keeping alert for hunters,
or his life may end.
Wolf
The wolf scents the air,
ears pricked for an easy kill,
as he trots towards deer
He hides in the brush,
waiting for his pack's signal
to strike, attack, kill
Cat
Curled up and purring,
the cat dreams of hunting birds
in the light of sun
She wakes, drinks warm milk,
then she finds her way outside,
into the forest
Leaves dapple the ground,
birds chirp and twitter in trees.
Then, the cat pouces.
(March 4, 2010 - 7:24 pm)
"Will anyone at least read my poems?"
(March 19, 2010 - 2:32 pm)
Love 'em, Nicole! I don't have an critiquey stuff... I just hope this comes to the top so people can read it! :D
(April 16, 2010 - 11:18 am)
Yeah, I am Nicole, everyone, but I am now posting as Coyotegirl76!
*Tries to bring it to the top*
(April 17, 2010 - 10:38 pm)
Um... Coyotegirl76 would you please write a story with me?? I think we would have a similar writing style. What genre do you like?
~ Smile :P ~
(April 18, 2010 - 5:42 pm)
Sure, Smile! I like fantasy or animal fantasy, as well as science fiction. What do you like?
(April 18, 2010 - 11:36 pm)
Amazingly any of those are good for me. I think an animal fantasy would be fun. So yeah, let's do that. Can you make a thread?
~ Smile :P ~
(April 19, 2010 - 6:40 pm)
SURE!!! I love animal fantasy. I'll make a thread now!
(April 20, 2010 - 5:13 pm)
Those are really good, and like Meadow I'm no critic. Really you just randomly thought of those?
Wow...
Smile :P
(April 18, 2010 - 3:36 pm)