I wrote a

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I wrote a

I wrote a poem this morning. It was VERY early this morning, probably 5:40 A.M, so it's a little weird.

A beam of morning sunshine

Shines lazily through the pane

It looks like hope and life and love

It smells like summer rain

Two feather pillows piled high

Four windows open wide

Can you see the land of golden sand?

Can you hear the carousel ride?

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Any feedback? I'm still working out the rest of it.

submitted by Ann, age 13, England
(February 19, 2010 - 8:34 am)

back to the Inkwell

I like it! I really like writing stuff like that. Cool! :)

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~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, A room (and thi
(February 19, 2010 - 2:03 pm)

To the top!

submitted by Ann
(February 20, 2010 - 5:52 pm)

I liked it soo much! I seemed to have lost my talent for poetry. But you..... I envy this poems potential.

submitted by Katie
(February 21, 2010 - 12:29 pm)

Nice!

submitted by ZNZ
(February 21, 2010 - 8:19 am)

Thanks! Here's the next part.

I'll keep dancing in the summer rain

Letting waterfalls hit my face

`Cause nobody can take from me

the feeling that I have my own special place

He used to sing in his deep, growly voice

Tell jokes and smile when no one would

They couldn't keep him all cooped up

I'm writing this in past-tense

`Cause no one could.

submitted by Ann
(February 22, 2010 - 8:20 am)

Hey, nice. I can't really figure out what it's about, but it's nice. :)

Andy (spam message thingy) says ezgi.

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, A room
(February 22, 2010 - 3:06 pm)

*can TOTALLY hear the carousel ride*

Meaning, very pretty. I like it. :)

submitted by Mary W., age 12.22, NJ
(February 22, 2010 - 5:57 pm)