Hiya. This is

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Hiya. This is

Hiya. This is a poem about a dog. My dog.

 

I sit with her.

Her head rests on my lap.

Her bronze fur shimmering in the fading light.

Her chocolate brown eyes looking at me.

 

As we watch the sunset, I wonder.

What will tomorrow be like?

As I ponder, I know.

She knows, to.  

 

She knows that this is her last walk,

Her last Day 

Her last time,

alone with me.

 

While I fall asleep,

Her head rests on my lap.

She is out before me.

Then I go, to.

 

We load her up into the truck,

all five of us.

My parents, My brothers.

And I.

 

And there is a tear in our eyes.

In my parents eyes,

My brothers.

But more then a tear is shed in mine.

 

It is overpoweringly white.

I don't like it.

Neither does she.

I hold her head.

 

And the needle goes in.

Her beautiful eyes look up into mine,

And then she's gone.

My brandy. 

submitted by Jean Da Bean
(February 18, 2010 - 12:23 am)

I really loved it. Seriously.

submitted by Katie
(February 18, 2010 - 4:41 pm)

*sniff sniff*

That was beautiful and bittersweet!

submitted by CJ, age !!!!!!!!!!, Nowhere in part
(June 9, 2010 - 6:43 pm)

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submitted by CJ, DTRA worker, age DTRA age, DTRA sqaud car
(June 21, 2010 - 6:23 am)

So sad and well-written. OMG. How amazing. OMG.

submitted by Sasha B., age 11, Berkeley, CA
(July 17, 2010 - 6:34 pm)