I wrote this

Chatterbox: Inkwell

I wrote this

I wrote this poem while daydreaming in math class. Oh, and keep in mind that it DOES NOT RHYME, so do not try to read it like it does.                                                                                                        

An artist's sketch                                                                                                           in charcoal                                                                                                                    of a dream                                                                                                                   that floated past her window                                                                                            it had been trying to get to the countryside                                                                          instead it ended up in New York city.                                                                                  It found its way to Central Park                                                                                        and settled on a rock that later                                                                                          was sat on by a girl                                                                                                        who grew up and became                                                                                                an artist.

Does anyone have any feedback?                                                                                                                                                                                       

submitted by Ann
(December 15, 2009 - 5:13 pm)

wow! beutiful!  I just wonder what happened to the sketch later. Did the girl sit on the sketch, or did the sketch fly away to touch another persons life? I really think it would add to the whole dreamlike feeling of the poem, sort of like a calm peaceful eternity.

submitted by Adina
(December 16, 2009 - 4:57 pm)

i luv it! its all about luck and consciousness and dreams. its great.

submitted by Rachel M., age 10, Neenah, WI
(August 4, 2010 - 9:01 am)