I wrote this
Chatterbox: Inkwell
I wrote this
I wrote this poem while daydreaming in math class. Oh, and keep in mind that it DOES NOT RHYME, so do not try to read it like it does.
An artist's sketch in charcoal of a dream that floated past her window it had been trying to get to the countryside instead it ended up in New York city. It found its way to Central Park and settled on a rock that later was sat on by a girl who grew up and became an artist.
Does anyone have any feedback?
(December 15, 2009 - 5:13 pm)
wow! beutiful! I just wonder what happened to the sketch later. Did the girl sit on the sketch, or did the sketch fly away to touch another persons life? I really think it would add to the whole dreamlike feeling of the poem, sort of like a calm peaceful eternity.
(December 16, 2009 - 4:57 pm)
i luv it! its all about luck and consciousness and dreams. its great.
(August 4, 2010 - 9:01 am)