Chatterbox: Inkwell
Yet another morbid(ish) poem of mine :D Thoughts, if you please:
I fly through the night with the wind at my heels.
A dark, fallen angel.
I creep up to people unnoticed.
Or I sit with them and stroke their hand
Lingering, but not taking.
I breathe on their suffering faces.
My hoarse voice promising better things.
I am hated by all, save those I take.
And you hate me too.
You won’t dare to speak my name
At the bedside of one that, already, I hold to my breast.
For Fear that I will come faster.
Fear is my brother.
I myself, am Lady Death.
submitted by Koffee
(October 4, 2009 - 6:39 pm)
(October 4, 2009 - 6:39 pm)
Eh, that's kind of cool. I think it could, in general, be better written, but I'm tired and thus pessimistic, so take no notice of me. :P
-EH
(October 4, 2009 - 10:16 pm)
:D Thanks, Emily. I'll heed your advice :D Yeah, I haven't really revised or edited it yet, I just sort of put my thoughts down in no particular order XD
(October 5, 2009 - 8:30 pm)