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Ok this is my story, it is called “Despair on Moonrise Horizon”! It is about Harry Potter mostly (yeah it is a FANFIC XD OwO!) however it might feature stuff from other things! Like Hunger Games (really good) and maybe even Pathologic!!! (That is a video game, it is very good. I like it a LOT.)
Ok so anyways, here is chapter one! I hope you enjoy it!
Chapter One!
My name is Ruby Angst and I’m going to Hogwarts. It’s my seventh year there! (Also I am 18.) Which means I totally gotta go out with a BANG! Which is why I decided to dye my hair bright red and put on lots of eyeliner and red eyeshadow, also red lipstick! I also decided to wear bright red platform shoes and a black skirt with red accents.
So anyways I was walking up to Hogwarts when someone touched me on the shoulder. I spun around to see someone wearing a purple three-piece suit and a super-scary bird mask!
“Um who are you?” I said.
“Terrible things are going to happen…” they said, then completely vanished. Wow, that was really weird I thought, chills going down my spine. Oh well it is probably just someone playing a prank. I kept walking, then I saw my best friend so I started running towards her!
“Hi!” I shouted. My best friend is named Misty Morkins and she is also eight teen! She has long wavy black hair, olive skin, and a tattoo of a pink cat on her shoulder! She is so awesome.
“Hi Ruby!!” She shouted back. “I LOVE your hair!!”
“Thank you!!!” We got on a thestral carriage together. I could see the thestral but I don’t wanna say why, it is very personal.
The carriage ride was super bumpy and we almost lost our bags twice. But then we finally got to the school finally. I looked up at the huge gates. They were almost like a portal to another dimension……
We got off the carriage and then went into the school. Misty and I are both Gryffindors so we went to hang out with the other gryffindor kids who all looked at me in awe. I guess my hair color change must have surprised them!!
We sat down at the long tables in the dining hall as the new kids got assigned to their houses. For a second I swore I saw the weird bird-mask guy standing behind Dumbledore but then he was gone. Hmm, that is weird I thought. But nobody said anything so I guess my eyes must have been playing tricks on me!
That was when I noticed there was no teacher at the Defense Against the Dark Arts spot. “Misty” I said, “Who is the teacher for Defense against the dark Arts going to be?”
Misty shrugged, “Idk, maybe there just isn't one yet. We probably shouldn’t worry about it though!”
“Hmm ok.” But then two people showed up there! One was a very strong-looking man with a white three-piece suit and the other one was a very skinny pale-skinned man with a black three-piece suit, they looked very mysterious.
“These are our new Defense Against the Dark Arts teachers,” Dumbledore said. “They are Mork Fishback and Eef Nest. You can call them Professor Annus and Professor Unus though, Unus Annus is latin for one year. Which is how long they will be teaching here!!”
“We’ve never had two teachers in that position before,” Misty whispers.
“Yea,” I say. “Suuuuper weird.”
But then dinner continued and we were too busy eating to keep talking. Eventually it was time for bed so the heads of the houses led all the kids to their dorm rooms. So far today has been pretty exciting, but also a little scary! I hoped the rest of the year would also be exciting but I could do without the scary part. Then I fell asleep.
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submitted by Jemma W., age 15, Littletown, Idaho
(April 24, 2021 - 6:06 pm)
(April 24, 2021 - 6:06 pm)
Intriguing! It makes me want to find out what is going to happen next! Bird-Mask and the professors are really interesting, and I just can't wait to find out more! It's looking good!
(April 26, 2021 - 11:58 am)
Thank you!!!!! U r incredible!!!! (And i seriously mean that!)
(April 28, 2021 - 10:57 am)
OMG OMG GIMA WAT R U DOEN!?1/1/1/1?!??!?/11/?!/1 im in skul an im reeden dis an screemen dis iz al ur falt!111!!1!11!1! IM GUNA RITE ANUDER CHRAPTAR OF MI SKAR LEDGE OK!11
>:(((((((((
(April 26, 2021 - 1:18 pm)
(April 26, 2021 - 5:23 pm)
omg wow dis is rlly good!!1!1!!1! im sooooo excited for da next chapter lololol
(April 27, 2021 - 7:00 am)
(April 28, 2021 - 10:12 am)
Wow! This story is great so far! I love the character names, and the dialoge seems very realistic. It's very mysterious, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
By "What characters should i add to the story??," do you mean a character from the series (such as Neville Longbottom), or a character we make up? If you need a character we make up, you can use Jasira Yarrow. I'll put a descripton of her below.
Jasira is a 7th-year Ravenclaw, with straight blonde hair cut off just below her shoulders, tanned skin, and freckles. She's a half-blood; her mom's a witch, but her dad's a Muggle. She's very smart, as her House implies, and is usually found in the library. She's a bit antisocial at times, and prefers to be left alone and read, but once you're her friend, she's very pleasant to be around. She always speaks up for a cause she believes in. Despite being a Ravenclaw, her favorite teacher is the Gryffindor Head-of-House, Professor McGonagall. Jasira's best subjects are potions (though she doesn't like Snape), transfiguration, and charms. Her hobbies include reading, writing in her journal, practicing spells, and learning about magical creatures.
(April 28, 2021 - 12:35 pm)
Any characters from anything!!! Made-up or otherwise!! Also Jasira sounds very cool!! I will b sure to add her in!!!!! OwO thank u!
(April 28, 2021 - 2:30 pm)
Hey there! Cool story, can't wait to see where it goes next :)
(April 28, 2021 - 2:42 pm)
Hi Jemma! Are you by any chance going to continue your Hogwarts Solo Write?
ANYWAYS!
THIS IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE LET ME SCREECH IN FANGIRL MODE-
Aight, I'm done! This is really good, looking forward to seeing the next chapter!
:D
~`Elle`~
(April 28, 2021 - 11:43 pm)
Jima ppl jest like your story because it has Harry Potter in it!111!1!11!!!1!11 Thatz lazy writeng!111!1!111 The birdman sounds realy scary I dont like him at all!!11!111!!!!1111!11111 and the werst part is THARES NO CUTE BOYS IN YOUR STORY have you ever read a book before?!???!????//1/1//1/1/1111/1//
Anyways im gonna keep writing my story KEEP READIN IT GUYS
(April 29, 2021 - 8:30 am)
u r wrong!!! there will b cute boy in story!!! just u wait!!!
(April 29, 2021 - 7:41 pm)
O just 1 cute boi?////// MY STORY HAS 2 SO TAKE THAT YOU MEAN PERSIN >:(((((((((((
(April 30, 2021 - 8:31 am)
it will have way more than 1!!!!!! i promise!!!! it will have many!!!! Just u wait!!!!!
(April 30, 2021 - 10:06 am)
(April 29, 2021 - 11:31 am)