Adventure Solo Write

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Adventure Solo Write

Adventure Solo Write

In the realm of Amora, the people and cities are divided into guilds.  The Asan, warriors and builders, children of ambition and conquest.  The Kieran, scholars and seekers of magic and lore.  The Dirgen, rangers and explorers, one with nature.  The Eian, clerics and artisans, close to the gods.  The Rakan, thieves and spies, living in the shadow of the other guilds, always watching.  For as long as any soul can remember the guilds have lived in their own villages, ruled by their own leaders, never having anything to do with each other.  They are separate and always will be. 

And that was how the world was, and it was a relatively peaceful one.  Many of Amora’s people had never even heard of the other guilds, and they liked it that way.  Until the Guild Master came.  Some say he was a traveler from another world.  Others say he was a god incarnate.  Whatever his origin, this man dazzled all five guilds with his elegant, charming ways and otherworldly powers.  He called himself the master of the guilds and united them in a towering, glorious city he built himself.  This Guild Master commanded a legion of beasts, foul creatures that hunted all who stayed true to the old ways.  Yet some still opposed their so-called master, defending themselves against what they thought of as tyranny.  Thus Amora was divided once again, between those loyal to the Guild Master and those who rebelled against him.  And then a forbidden prophecy was uttered, one that called the Guild Master Amora’s destroyer and that young people from each guild would be the world’s saviors.  And this is where we begin.  If you would like to contribute a character, please complete the form below.

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The tale will begin once I have about 10 characters.  Step well, heroes, and keep your eyes open.

submitted by The Teller of Tales
(March 14, 2021 - 1:53 pm)

For the pronouns: Are they/them pronouns okay? If not, Tatsuki can use he/him, but they would still be nonbinary. Just using he/him pronouns.

Also, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was pretty spooky. As before, the descriptions are  very vivid, and the end really makes me want to know what comes next. Your writing is also clear - there aren't many unnecessary words. You also use a lot of strong words ("illuminated" versus "shone brightly), which helped the wording feel more active and interesting. I also like the information about the world and characters; for instance, the documenting of stars being the only thing Saffran found beautiful.

One note, though: Generally, things feel more sudden when you don't use "suddenly". Suddenly is a long word and gives you an expectation for something unexpected. That's just a thought though, and you only used it once. I still really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next!

submitted by Blackfooted Bobcat
(April 8, 2021 - 3:53 pm)
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