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I think I have a story plan laid out, but here is a rough idea:
"Dakota, you can't do this to me!" I said dramatically.
"CUT! Em, stop, just stop saying Dakota's real name, and start calling him 'Demetris', ok?" Kiki said.
If you didn't know, Dakota and I, Emekittycon Kitten (A.K.A, Em), were in a class play.
Ugh, I wanted the GOOD part, and Im playing the BAD guy, while my arch nemisis, Candace, was going to, get this, KISS Demetris, or Dakota, my friend.
Dosen't he even KNOW that I like him?! It's like he's kinda clueless about my feelings towards him. I mean, COME ON! I actually gave him half of my breakfast, which consisted of eggs-in-a-nest (Or eggs in the middle of a piece of bread, which is then put on a pan over a stove. Trust me, it's REALLY good.), and two juice boxes! He appreciated it, but I ALMOST said what I felt about him.
Anyway, my brother, Devan, walked in the auditorium.
"Well, it does look like you have a real talent in acting. I like that. Oh, hey Kiki." He said, leaning against the stage.
"Dude, watch where you put your hands, I'm wearing heeled boots, I could CRUSH your hand!" I warned him, stomping my boot on the stage floor for effect.
I'm gonna have to finish this later. Maybe tomorrow. My timer's goin' off. Let me know what you think of it!
Oh, 2admins, that is fiction. The characters mentioned so far, don't know I'm alive...
submitted by Emekittycon Kitten, age 12, Kitten Kingdom
(November 24, 2020 - 2:57 pm)
(November 24, 2020 - 2:57 pm)
I'm continuing!!
"Well, well, well, look who finally showed up." Kiki said, striding towards Devan and crossing her arms.
If you didn't know, they've been rivals since they've been in high school. Kiki got the most appreciation, but before her, Devan got literaly ALL of it. The students FLOCKED around him, just so they could hang out with him. No other guy in his WHOLE school got that much loyalty.
If Devan wanted a stand-in for a boring meeting (He was part of the L.A.H.S School Students Program), all the girls told him that they would do it.
But when Kiki came, she did MORE than what Devan did. She got the most popularity, and that's why Kiki and Devan don't like each other.
Anyway, Devan also crossed his arms.
"Well, excuse ME, Miss Popularity. I got all the attention, all the love, and all the time before you! What did I ever do to you?!" he said.
"Well, for one thing, you managed to, oh, I don't know, STINK BOMB EVERYONE'S LOCKER AND BLAMED ME FOR IT, AND THAT'S HOW YOU MANEGED TO GET A COUPLE OF GIRLS UNTIL I DID THE SAME THING!!!" Kiki shouted.
"Oh, so it WAS you that did that. Well, excuse me for this, but, WHY DID YOU BLAME ME?! I WANTED THE ATTENTION, THE LOVE, AND THE TIME!! I WAS MR. POPULARITY, UNTIL YOU MOVED HERE FROM WHO CARES WHERE YOU CAME FROM, AND YOU STOLE ALL THE BOYS AND BY THE WAY, I TALKED TO THE PRINCIPAL ABOUT IT, AND HE DID NOTHING, REPEAT, NOTHING ABOUT IT!!!" Devan yelled.
I rolled my eyes. I dragged Dakota back-stage and continued to watch Devan and Kiki's bickering continue.
"When will they ever stop?" Dakota said.
"Eh, this happens a lot, trust me." I said, walking to a chair.
The second I sat down on it, though, it BROKE. I landed on my hind end, HARD. Meanwhile, Dakota was laughing so hard.
"Oh, yeah, ha, ha, ha. You're laughing at me, like I'm the biggest joke since the interrupting cow!" I said, clearly annoyed.
"Ok, Em, we have to go! Is Dakota staying for a while or..." Devan said, trailing off.
"Yep. She asked me, and I wouldn't want to dissapoint her. 'Casue we all know what she does when that happens." Dakota said.
I playfully shoved him, and he laughed.
Devan, Dakota and I were talkin' while we walked to the car.
"Ok, Devan, where's your car?" I said.
"Well, I finally traded that Jeep that was my first car, for a new one, with the arm rests, and a canpoy roof and windows, that can be taken off." Devan said, takin' the roof off.
"Cool." I said, looking at my notebook.
"C'mon, Em. We all know that you like the feeling of the wind against your hair." Devan said, climbing into the Jeep.
I stared into the distance, which was thickly covered in trees, when Dakota lightly tapped my shoulder.
I need to finish this, my timer's goin' off. I'll try to continue this tomorrow!
(November 26, 2020 - 12:54 pm)
TOP!!!
Bradley just said "hrkpt". Dude, do you have the flu?!
(Yeeep.)
(November 28, 2020 - 12:44 pm)
This is pretty good!
(November 28, 2020 - 1:01 pm)
I like your writing style.
(November 29, 2020 - 9:39 am)
Em! *hugs* Oh my Claaws, this is amazing! I wish you luck in your writing, I have a feeling you could become a great author someday! I love your writing style!
~Nightfall
(November 29, 2020 - 12:32 pm)
O, I know it's been a couple of months since I made this, but, I managed to work out some more story parts. So, HERE'S CHAPTER ONE, PART THREE!!
"Ah! Dude, don't do that. What do ya need?" I said.
"Well, I was just thinkin'... What will Candace think about your part? I mean, she hasen't even SHOWN UP for rehearsals this week. And I clearly heard her promise that she wouldn't miss one. Single. Session!" Dakota asked me.
"Ok, numbero uno: DON'T mention that two-time traitor in my face OR behind my back EVER. Numero dos: I don't know, and numero thres: I don't really care." I said, as Devan pulled into our drive way.
"Ok, Collins should be home from another job interview in a few hours. So, that means..." Devan said, trailing off.
"Another night of takeout?" I said.
"Yep. What do you want, Taco Bell, Burger King, or--" Devan said.
No sooner as he said the magic words, "Burger King", I pounced on him like Dakota on a bag of gummy worms.
"YesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyespleasegetBurgerKing!!!!" I said, mashing all of the words together.
"Ok then." He replied.
I'll continue this later.
(January 21, 2021 - 12:32 pm)
Ok, I'M CONTIUNIN'!
CHAPTER ONE, PART FOUR
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"Wow, you REALLY like Burger King, don't ya?" Dakota asked me.
"Yeah, well, as long as we have McDonald's Sweet 'N Sour sauce, I'll be fine." I said.
"Yeah, she also likes the pie. I once saw her eat that thing in less than 1 minute. I know, 'cause she asked me to time her. Seriously, she gets crazy over the pie." Devan remarked.
"And I thought we weren't gonna talk 'bout that anymore." I said.
Devan shrugged, as Collins came into the door.
"Hey, bro. Hey, sis." He said.
"How many stinkin' times have I told you to stol callin' me that?" I asked him.
He shrugged, and Devan hung up.
"They are apparantly busy, so, I couldn't get in." He said.
"Yeah. Ya know, when I move out--" I said.
"Oh, boy, here we go again, Em's gonna move out at age 18, get a job at a pet store, play Minecraft and other video games all day, have pizza for breakfast, Burger King for lunch, and mac and cheese for dinner, and then stay up late watchin' out videos. How'd I do?" Devan said.
"Eh, 9 out of 10." I said.
"THAT'S what she wants to do when she moves out?" Dakota said.
"Yep. What time is it, 3:30, ok, that means... OH NO I FORGOT TO STOP BY THE LIBRARY BUT THAT'S OK SINCE I HAVE THE MONKEES SEASONS 1 AND 2 ON DISC SO I'MMA GO WATCH 'EM NOW!!!!!!!!!!" I said.
(March 29, 2021 - 4:53 pm)