Fallen;Poem

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Fallen;Poem

Fallen;Poem
A new start,
A new end,
A new patch of clean skin,
A new scrape to ruin it,
A new escape,
It won’t last,
Break my mind,
Just like glass,
Fallen hearts,
And fallen stones,
Written words hurt,
And heal like those,
That come from the mouth,
Of any other person,
Fallen people,
Just like any other,
Fallen youth,
Hurt by those close to them,
Falling,
Fallen,
At last we can rest,
Soon enough,
They’ll be laid to rest,
Hurt by people,
They thought they knew,
Fallen people,
Fallen youth.
submitted by Ripley_The_Fox, age 13
(September 6, 2020 - 12:06 am)

back to the Inkwell

This is really, really good, Ripley! However, I’d like to ask you to put this on the Regular Poetry Thread on Pudding’s Place. Inkwell is kind of being taken over by new threads that should be put in other places, causing new RPs and Solo Writes to sink to the second or third page before they even get any comments. This isn’t meant to come across as rude, but i feel that this might be better suited to the other poetry thread. I can give you a link if you can’t find it. 

submitted by @Ripley
(September 6, 2020 - 9:59 am)
submitted by Top
(September 6, 2020 - 12:24 pm)

Thank you for letting me know, you did not come across as rude and my apologies! :)

submitted by Ripley_The_Fox, age 13
(September 6, 2020 - 1:30 pm)