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This is my first Solo Write so sorry if it’s terrible. But here goes: In the middle of a war torn universe, Aelaas has fallen. Likha did it. Likha… the indestructible empire. And Aelaas. The center of art and music and quite simply, happiness. The country that gave hope to every, single, person who’s had to live through this war. Without Renilaas… the war is lost, Likha has won. Or so everyone thinks. A small group of renegade rebels is formulating a plan to overthrow the malicious Empress. They call themselves Heilona, after their founder, Heilona Liya. She was imprisoned long ago. But they have continued her work. Charrie Sheets: Name: Age: Personality: Appearance: Where are they from? Aelaas, Likha, or a place you made up. Please be creative! If people are interested, I will try to post once a week.
submitted by Luminescence, age XI, California
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(July 19, 2020 - 3:35 pm)
WAIT ITS OVER?!?!?!?!?!?!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Ahhhh well if its over its over, and im just glad that you made this! I can say that this is a wonderful piece of art! You are a fantasic writer and i am SO sad this is over... maybe continue it later on?
you portrayed each of the characters so perfectly, and i adored how Luila and Raymond were brought to life <3
if im wrong about it ending, sorry lol
(July 19, 2020 - 4:31 pm)
Oh Luminescence, this was great! I understand not having time but don't feel like this solowrite was bad. I love it. I'm sad this ended, but then I enjoy storys that leave it up to the readers to decide what happens next. I really hope you do another one. If you do I will definitely join. I am so sorry I always missed your posts and you had to top it a bunch of times before I saw it. You portrayed Lianna so well. Thank you for writing this. Remember, it isn't bad, it is good, and I love it.
(July 20, 2020 - 10:45 am)
Aw, thanks to both of you! I just think I need to go back, revise, edit, make some things make more sense. Maybe rethink it a little bit. I might do another one later, when I have a bit more time.
(July 20, 2020 - 10:56 am)