Okay, here it

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Okay, here it

Okay, here it is!! This is the poem I entered in the online contest. I think I changed it, but I can't remember what.

A thing of beauty

Driving down this road

nothing but cement

and yellow lines

and stop signs.

When I see something.

A bit of green.

It is a weed. 

There are more

on the sides of the road

but I don't notice them.

For in this world of cement

I see this weed 

as a thing of beauty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by Clair, age '12', NE
(August 19, 2009 - 3:12 pm)

Hey, not bad. I like the 3rd-5th lines especially.

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(August 19, 2009 - 4:47 pm)

Yeah, I like those the best.

submitted by Clair, age '12', NE
(August 19, 2009 - 6:40 pm)