Chatterbox: Inkwell

By the way, the reason I stopped posting my dragon story is because Parental Controls is blocking me from the second thread too. >:o So I thought, what's the point if it's going to do that? And I keep revising it anyway. So.

However, I'd be happy to post the prologue and/or illustrations if anyone wants to see them. I need criticsm on the prologue; it's really weak, and since it's the first thingy in the story that's bad . . . . .