The dying soldier
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The dying soldier
The dying soldier draws his sword for possibly the last time. He looks out to the setting sun. It's weak flame paints his sad face in a flickering glow, bouncing in his golden eyes. The celestial phoenix tucks it's wings in and dives under the horizon as the soldier clambers with labored movement into a man-sized pit, six feet into the cold, hard ground. Before disappearing into the earth, he looks at a grave next to him. A sword, blade silver and hilt white with a silver diadem hanging from the handguards, sticks like a cross in the ground, marking the grave. Tears stream down the soldier's face and he takes his own golden diadem from his black hair.
"Good night, my love." Then, turning away from the silver sword, he raises his own sword and, with a motion as fast as fire coursing out of a dragon's mouth, strikes his golden sword into the ground and places his diadem carefully on the hilt. He looks at it for a second, then lays down on the bottom of the pit. Closing his eyes, he crosses his arms over his chest. The ground closes over him.
All is silent. On the horizon, the moon peeks over the deserted earth. It's pale light is faint and pulsing slowly, like a heart slowing into death. Suddenly, the ground in front of the silver sword opens with agonizing lack of speed. Out of it steps a woman, her long, auburn hair flowing over her shoulders like a river. She turns to the silver sword and takes the diadem from it, placing it on her head. Then she unsticks the sword from the ground and slides it easily into the sheath hanging at her side. Then, whirling around to face the moon, she begins to hum.
(November 3, 2018 - 1:51 pm)
(November 5, 2018 - 12:13 am)
(November 5, 2018 - 12:20 pm)
Nah, that was me. I bottomed it so that I could top it again. XP
(November 5, 2018 - 2:10 pm)
Wow, Rogue, this is really good! Are you going to post more?
(November 6, 2018 - 10:31 am)
Yep:
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Hours have passed since the woman awoke.
The woman, queenly in stature and appearence, begins slowly dancing. Her bare feet soak in the dewy grass as she skims them low over the ground. Out of nowhere and everywhere at once, music, sad and high, eminates. The moon's waning light pulses along to the beat of unseen cello strings plucked and the thrum of deep basses. Her dancing slowly grew faster as did the music until it throbbed in her soul like the very beat of her heart. Suddenly, the moon's light becomes intense as it reaches the apex of it's celestial climb. The music cuts off, and the woman whips out her sword, pointing it straight at the silver moon. Its light glinting off of her blade, the moon beams down, steady and bright. The moon's light pulses once, and the woman nods. She lowers her blade. The moon glows more intensely as an unexpected dawn breaks on the horizon. The ground rumbles and the man-soldier's grave opens. Golden eyes blazing with love and sadness.
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(November 6, 2018 - 9:46 pm)
I have no idea what's going on but I love this! You are SUCH a good writer Rogue!!!
(November 7, 2018 - 6:26 pm)
This reminds me of a few book series that I thoroughly enjoy, very good Rogue! If this was a book series I would own all of the books, not just because you're my friend and I would be your #1 fan if you did but because it's a kind of story that I find interesting and enjoyable.
You would be an amazing author.
(November 8, 2018 - 4:13 pm)