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JUlY 26: 100 years from 2018:Night 

'Hello" she whispered into the eternity of darkness around her. 

Nothing answered.

She called again, more frantically. The darkness did not reply, but only pushed through her skin, suffocating her. 

She called and called through the night, more franctic. Fear overwhelming her. The darkness seeped into her heart. 

 

July 27: Morning

Dawn broke. The girl lay on the ground, sleeping. Her cheeks were wet from crying herself to sleep. 

submitted by MJ, age ca, 12
(May 22, 2018 - 6:42 pm)

This is... interesting. I can't wait to see what you do with it! Top!

submitted by Agent Winter, Classified
(May 23, 2018 - 9:31 am)

Top again!

submitted by Agent Winter, Classified
(May 24, 2018 - 1:36 pm)

Top number three!

submitted by Agent Winter, Classified
(May 25, 2018 - 4:00 pm)

I rewrote it.  So here the new version. And thanks for all the topsLaughing 

6 hours ago

The mist came. It came…..suddenly. Covering everything in a green haze. Changing everything.

All I know is came to the classroom. People panicked. My arm was on fire. That is all I remember. 

NOW

I jolt awake. My arms are tied to a chair! I can’t see anything! My breath comes in panicked breaths. 

'Hello" I whisper into the eternity of darkness around me. 

Nothing answered

 

I call again, more frantically. The darkness dose not reply, but only pushes through my skin, suffocating me. 

 

I call and call through the night, more franctic. Fear overwhelming Me. The darkness seepes into my heart. 

 

submitted by MJ, age 12, ca
(May 26, 2018 - 5:43 pm)

This is so good! I can't wait for the next part. 

submitted by Agent Winter, Classified
(May 26, 2018 - 8:28 pm)