GUYS!!!! I FINISHED

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GUYS!!!! I FINISHED

GUYS!!!! I FINISHED MY BOOK!!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

Ahem. So, some of you might remember the story I started last November for NaNoWriMo and posted here. Well, the thread eventually died, and I stopped posting, but I kept writing. And here I am, five months, 153 pages and 81,486 words later, and the first draft is finally, finally done. I'm so excited. I've never fully completed a book before, and I could never have done it without my dear fans and their constant encouragement. I would like to thank Rose bud, Jarvis, MJ, and Autumn Moon for your kind words and for reading my writing, and I'd especially like to thank Tux, Aspen, and Strytllr for sticking with me all the way.

The original thread is pretty far down, and so instead of topping it, I'm going to go ahead and post the whole thing in the comments once this pops up, if anyone cares to read it. Light Runs Deeper is my tentative title for now, though I might change it. Keep in mind that it's unedited, and therefore will have mistakes. I'm not even sure how good it is, really, but I'm taking a deep breath and putting my story out there, and hoping that somewhere in this jumbled-up pile of words, at least a few of you will find something that you really enjoy. 

 

Congratulations, Leeli!

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submitted by Leeli
(April 7, 2018 - 2:22 pm)

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Wow. Amazing Job, Leeli!!!! For me, writing a book is a distant dream that will. Never. Happen.

I'm so happy for you!!!! 

submitted by Jwyn, age 13, Amazing Book Reading
(April 8, 2018 - 3:45 pm)

Thank you, Jwyn! You are most certainly capable of writing a book, too, if you work hard and set your mind to it. :)

submitted by Leeli
(April 8, 2018 - 5:51 pm)

Yay Leeli! Congratulations!

submitted by Young Writer
(April 8, 2018 - 6:22 pm)

Thanks!

submitted by Leeli
(April 8, 2018 - 8:49 pm)

Wow, Leeli, congratulations! I love your book so far, and can't wait to see what happens next!

submitted by Quill
(April 9, 2018 - 6:21 pm)

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!

submitted by Leeli
(April 9, 2018 - 7:00 pm)
~Chapter Six~
When Eris woke, she found herself in a comfortable sort of hammock hanging in a room made beneath the roots of trees. She glanced around the room, trying to get her bearings. 
Where am I?
In the corner was a girl with soft dark brown hair falling into her amber-hazel eyes. She was reading a thick, ancient looking book. When she looked up, she noticed Eris was awake. 
“So you rise finally! I wondered if you'd ever wake up.” She said, smiling. 
Eris was confused. 
“Where I am I? What happened?” 
The girl's eyes softened. She brushed her bangs out of her eyes. 
“You are in Thraenen, the great Elven fortress. Your village was set to flame. Rohir and his father, Gladir, two of our most trusted men, went after you and brought you here. Do you not remember?” 
Suddenly, it all came flooding back to her. The flames. The screams. Her people being taken hostage, lined up with shackles on their wrists. She shuddered.the last thing she remembered was sitting on a white horse behind Rohir. 
“You fell asleep on the ride here. It's a good two hours on horseback. You slept the entire time, and it's a mercy you didn't fall off! Probably a combination of a steady horse and Rohir’s careful eye. He, more than anyone, wanted to make sure you were safe.”
Eris blushed. Why did it feel as if one thousand butterflies had just come out of cocoons in her stomach? She ignored the feeling, not wanting to think about it. 
“I remember now.” She said. “I'm Eris, by the way.”
The girl giggled. “I know. We all do.” When Eris looked surprised, the girl explained. “We've been tracking you for at least a month now. We all know who you are.”
Eris was stunned. “Wh-why? How? Am I special?” 
“You'll find out soon enough.” The girl smiled mischievously. “I'm Tryss, by the way.”
Eris was soon out of bed and Tryss looked her up and down. She was still in her stiff white nightgown. Tryss shook her head. 
“It's pretty, but it'll never do out here, in the forest.”
She found Eris a nice green tunic, comfortable and practical, and some grey leggings. Paired with strong leather boots and a cloak of her own, Eris almost felt like one of them. 
Almost. 
She was lacking the silver clasp they all wore on their cloaks. 
It wasn't long before Tryss was showing Eris all around Thraenen. Thraenen was where all the elf rangers lived. It was actually a large fortress. Its walls were thick and tall, and well concealed from anyone brave enough to venture that far into the forest. Inside the walls, most of the elves’ homes were made in, around, or under the trees. Unlike the thin woods in Minildrith, Darkest Forest was a huge woodland, thicker and lusher than the woods in Fynnesse. The trees were of all shapes and sizes, many of them huge, the biggest trees Eris had seen. Their roots were large too, often stretching up and across the ground instead of under it. Inside these roots were many rooms, homes, and meeting places. Around the trees were often stairs leading to platforms higher in the treetops that the elves used for various purposes. 
Eris was fascinated by Thraenen. Though the elves of the forest were very practical, they also enjoyed beautiful things and fine crafting, and much of the design and architecture was beautiful and enthralling. 
Eris spent most of that day exploring and learning all about Thraenen, the way of the elf rangers, and anything else she wanted to know. Most of the elves were quite friendly and enjoyed answering all of Eris’s questions. 
Eris and Tryss were at the top of one of the two towers inside the fortress, in the Great Library. Earlier, Eris had asked Tryss about the book she was reading, which drew them into a long conversation about books, a subject which they both happened to love dearly. When Tryss learned that Eris loved books, she practically dragged her to the West Tower. 
“I have to show you the Great Library right away, then!” She had said. 
She was right. 
The Great Library consisted of two levels, each one round, in the shape of the tower, and the walls completely lined with books, from floor to ceiling. On the walls between the shelves were stepladders, going up to reach different heights of different shelves. There were also small railed ledges jutting out from each stack of two or three shelves, so that from the stepladder, you could easily walk the length of that shelf. On the floors were different tables on which sat scattered books, and by the tower windows sat overstuffed chairs where you could sink in and just read. 
Eris immediately fell in love with the Great Library. To her great joy, she found that it was open day and night, and she was to be allowed in anytime she wanted. After that first initial introduction to the library, she and Tryss must have spent hours there. The library seemed like a place where time didn't exist, where one could stay forever and ever and never miss a thing. It was so quiet and serene, and though time passed, Eris didn't seem to feel it. 
At this moment, Eris was sitting in one of the afore mentioned overstuffed chairs, falling into a very interesting book she had found from the very top shelf in the room. Browsing all the shelves alone must have taken her a good two hours. Before Eris was very far into her book, however, a bell at the top of the tower began to ring. Eris looked up from her book. 
Tryss noticed, and answered her unvoiced question. “That's the diningbell. It rings at mealtimes. Come on, we don't want to be late for dinner!” 
She hurried Eris (who was neither hungry, nor happy at having her reading interrupted), down the tower stairs and into the courtyard. 
“Every night, we all gather to eat dinner together. After dinner, we'll have the meeting.” Tryss explained. 
“What meeting?” Eris asked, quite puzzled. 
Tryss grinned. “The meeting where you get all of your questions answered.” She turned the corner. “Come on, the dining hall is just this way.” 
The rounded into a large open area, under a stone arch, where vines hung down above potted plants. A small fountain sputtered water in the center of the area, and just behind it was a very long table where a few of the elves were already gathered. Eris recognized Gladir and Rohir, and another elf from the night before. 
Rohir approached them. 
“Evening Tryss, Eris.” He grinned and mock-bowed. 
Tryss laughed. 
“I see you have already met our newcomer, Tryss,” He said. Then he turned to Eris. “And I bet you are just about ready to have an explanation.” He chuckled. “I know I would be.” 
Just then, two tall elves, both with black hair, called for attention at the head of the table. 
“We better go sit down.” Rohir said. They followed him to the table, and Eris sat between him and Tryss. 
“That's Lord Oryn and Lady Etheryn, the leaders of the rangers.” Tryss explained. Eris recognized Lady Etheryn as the she-elf that had met them early that morning and escorted them back to Thraenen. 
Then, Lord Oryn began to speak. 
“As you all know, tonight is no ordinary night.” He began. “It may seem like a usual evening. We are all gathered to eat in the dining hall together just as every other night. But there is another among us.” He looked pointedly at Eris, and all eyes followed his. Eris suddenly became very interested in her feet. Oryn went on. “You all know of what I speak, except for Eris, whom I will speak to later, in private.”  Eris stopped and looked at him strangely. What was he talking about? 
Oryn sat and began to eat, as did everyone else. Eris had lost her appetite. Her mind was spinning and her stomach was churning in anticipation. She felt Tryss nudge her with her elbow. 
“Aren't you going to eat?” She asked. Eris looked at her bowl. It was some sort of stew. It looked delicious, like the kind you'd want to eat on a chilly evening after just coming indoors.
“I'm not very hungry.” She replied. 
After dinner, when everyone was chatting and talking to one another, Eris felt a presence behind her. Somehow, she knew it was Oryn without looking. She turned to him. 
“Come.” He said simply. She got up from her seat and followed him into the trees behind the Dining Hall. He led her into a small stone pavilion and told her to sit one of the bronzed benches. 
“I'm sure you are quite curious why you've been brought here, and what it is everyone but you knows.” He started. 
Eris nodded her head firmly. 
“And that is what I am about to tell you. But I must start from the beginning. 
“Years ago, there was a fair elf-maiden who fell in love with an elf-lord. They were joined together in marriage, and soon had their first child. Now, they could see that war was coming. Turmoil was coming. Darkness would soon be over the land, just like the lord of evil across the sea promised many centuries ago. Those elves had been blessed with a weak gift of foresight, and even elves that didn't possess that gift could sense it coming. They could sense a change in the air, in the water, in the trees. Things were not as they once were. The birds didn't sing quite as loudly as they used to. The air was not so crisp and clear as it had been. Even the winds were changed. 
“The two elves loved their child more than anything, but she was a mere baby. They didn't want her to have to grow up in war, for they didn't know how long it would be until war came. They knew the peaceful valley of Minildrith would be safe for her. So, as much as it pained them, they went down into the valley, and found a young couple who hadn't been able to have a child of their own, and they gave the baby to them, asking them to take good care of her. They hoped that when she was old enough, she would be able to return to them. Not long after this, they had a second child, another girl. But her mother was very sick, and died during childbirth. The baby was healthy, however, but her father was devastated at losing his wife, and he couldn't bear to lose this child as well, so he kept her, in hopes that war would hold off until she was old enough to really be trained, fifteen or so.”
During this story, Eris had begun to catch on. She knew it even before he said the words, but those were the words that confirmed it. 
“Eris, you were that child. The first child.” 
Eris's head was spinning. What? She was elven-born? She couldn't believe it. No. She was Minildrithan born! She had to be! And if she was really an elf, why had her parents never told her? Her parents! They weren't even her real parents! Eris felt like crying, though she didn't know why. It was because, of course, everything she thought she knew was a lie. And, though she had never known her real mother, she was saddened that she had died. 
Tears began to roll down Eris's cheeks. Then she realized something. 
“Who was the other child? Do I have a sister?” She asked. 
Oryn smiled. “Yes, and you know her, though you don't think you do. Tryss is your sister.”
The realization hit Eris full force. It was so much to take in Eris couldn't really process it all. She had a sister! And it was Tryss! 
“But Tryss and I look nothing alike!” She said out loud, more to herself than to Oryn. 
“That doesn't make a difference. Tryss looks exactly like your father, and you are the image of your mother. Same mouth, same eyes. Same hair.” 
Eris smiled. “Is my father—my real father—still alive?” She asked. 
Oryn’s expression changed. He hung his head and sighed. “I am sorry to tell you that he is no longer with us.” 
Eris's face fell.
“He ventured out of Thraenen one day, said he was going to find something, and never came back. We believe he was going mad.”
“Who does Tryss live with now?” Eris asked. 
“No one, really. She lives on her own, though there are so many elves here to help her if she really needs it, that it doesn't seem that way.”
Eris had one more question. 
“Why did you bring me back?” 
Oryn looked up at her. 
“Tryss had a vision. She saw you in the Glass Pool. And she saw your village burning, and many other terrible things she wishes not to have seen. It was a sign that it was time to bring our kin back to whence you once came.” he paused. “There is something else. Something only I and a few others know about, but that I will reveal to everyone tonight.”
Later that night, all the elves of Thraenen gathered in a meeting room nested in the branches of a tree. The moon shone down silver, gleaming off of Eris’s hair and making it look white. 
Lord Oryn cleared his throat. 
“As you all know, last night the village Fynnesse was set to flame. It burned long into the night and may still be burning, for all we know. Two men by the names of Nark and Laryn were the criminals who started the blaze, and they took all the survivors captive. We had no way of knowing who they were or where they came from, but I sent out Gladir and Rohir on the day of the festival they hold in Fynnesse to keep an eye on any rough looking men that might've been looking to cause trouble. They saved Eris and another young boy when they listened in on the men, a wise idea, I might add, if it ended badly. But just earlier this evening I received word from two men on a ship that we sent out about a month ago. They had been keeping watch for signs of the enemy's second strike, as promised, and the messenger said we have reason to believe the the enemy plans to strike soon. I heard just earlier today, also, that a band of hostages was being led through the western gate of Minildrith in the direction of Angyth. They say a long bridge spans the gap between Angyth and Engar, on the other side of the sea.” Oryn looked over the crowd. 
“These men are working for Him. The enemy across the water. We now think that he plans to send forces to other lands, burning and ravaging towns, in the same way that he did the weak town Fynnesse.”
Eris bristled at this remark, but deep down, she knew she agreed. The town was weak. The people unprepared for such a calamity. 
Lord Oryn continued. 
“We have reason to believe that he uses those prisoners as minions, turning them into awful creatures, and that once he musters his army, he will be able to cover the lands in darkness again. I'd like to meet with some of my most trusted men and women to discuss our next move in this. Fainor, Arglith, and Lady Etheryn, if you wouldn't mind meeting me here on the morning of the morrow, we will plan out our next move.”
A wave of murmurs swept through the crowd. They wanted to know the elf rangers next move. They wanted a say in it. And so did Eris. 
That night, Eris lay in the same hammock as she had that morning, Tryss sound asleep in the hammock beside her. Unlike her sister, Eris was wide awake. She had too much on her mind to sleep. Everything that had happened the night before was enough to keep anyone awake, and on top of that, she had just learned that who she thought she was was a lie. 
As soon as Eris fell to sleep, she began to dream about her town burning. This time, it happened exactly how it had in reality, except she saw Finn burning with the town. Eris awoke with a yelp. She sat up in her hammock. 
The noise had woken Tryss, who looked at Eris groggily. 
“Are you okay?” She mumbled. 
“Yeah.” Eris said under her breath. “Just a dream.”
“A dream?”
“A recurring nightmare. It's different every time, but this time…”
“This time?” Tryss prodded. 
“I had a friend in Fynnesse, a very good friend, and I don't know if he made it out. I dreamed he didn't.” Eris said, her voice cracking at the end. 
She sighed and rolled over, looking up at the moon. She wondered where Finn was now. If he was okay. If maybe he was looking at the same moon. 
And, in fact, he was. 
submitted by Leeli
(April 9, 2018 - 7:02 pm)
~Chapter Seven~
Finn had woken up, confused. He smelled smoke. Thick, black, smoke. It was coming from the roof. The thatched hay of the roof was burning!
Finn started coughing and got to his hands and knees, hoping the floor would be less smoky. He crawled to his door and attempted to open it, but it seemed blocked. Finn rammed his shoulder against the door over and over until he was able to bust it open. 
He flung himself into the hallway outside his bedroom, and crawled, coughing, eyes burning, toward his father’s room. When he got there, he found the door wouldn't open, and he couldn't kick it down either. 
He had to hope his father had gotten out the window. 
Suddenly, the front door of Finn’s cottage was knocked down, and a short man with a beard rushed in and grabbed him by the arm. 
“Come on, boy, if you want ta live.” He said roughly, jerking Finn toward the door. 
Finn knew something wasn't right. Then he realized the man was the same man he and Eris had heard talking to the strange man with the horse the night before. 
Finn struggled against him, but the man had a strong grip. The man, Finn later learned his name was Laryn, led him through the town toward a line of Fynessians. Past the cottages that had once held love and hope and happiness. Past the streets where just yesterday there had been people singing and dancing. Past the burning booths and carts that had been selling gooey buns earlier that night. Past what had once been his home. 
Laryn bound Finn’s hands and chained him to the line of other prisoners. Some were old, some were young, there were men and women and children. He knew many of them.
“‘’Ey, Nark, is that all of em’?” Laryn barked.  
“I b’lieve so, but I'll check over ‘ere at these cottages to be sure.” Nark headed in the opposite direction. Finn's heart skipped a beat. That was where Eris lived! Eris—was she okay? Had she gotten out? Finn scolded himself for not thinking of her sooner. What if she'd been trapped in her house?
“Oy, Laryn, lookie ‘ere! Ain't that the girl we saw yesterday evenin’?” Nark called back from a fair distance. Finn jerked his head in that direction. It was Eris! She was bringing her horse out and getting ready to mount. She had made it! 
“I b’lieve 'tis! She sure gave us a load o’ trouble, didn't she, with ‘er little friend?” Said Laryn. “Get ‘er!” And now they were coming for her. 
Finn had to do something. 
Eris took off on her horse, galloping away toward the forest. Nark wasn't far behind. 
Finn hastily squatted down and grabbed a few fair-sized rocks which he threw at Nark. They hit his legs, causing him to curse and stumble, but it wasn't much. Laryn went over and struck Finn with a blow to the face, knocking him to the ground. His face stung and felt like someone had just thrown at brick at him. He held back hot tears. A few drops of blood stained the ground red. Laryn turned. Finn glared up at the back of his head, gritting his teeth. 
Later Nark returned, dirty and tired. 
“I tried to catch ‘er, but the horse was fast. They got too far into the woods and I lost ‘em.” He admitted. 
“Nark, you dummy! I don't what made me think you could. Oh, no use wasting extra time. It's just one girl. C’mon.” Laryn replied. 
The two men led the train of silent prisoners away from the burning village, Laryn on a pony in the front and Nark on a pony in the back. A few other men they had brought with them flanked the prisoners on each side. 
Finn trudged along the road in silence. He didn't know what to do, or even what was happening. He hoped Eris had been able to escape into the forest or over the mountains. The last time he had seen her, she was angry at him and ran to her house. He wasn't sure if they were even friends anymore. He sighed. 
Things had been quite good for Finn before Fynnesse burned. He had spent his childhood wishing he were somewhere bigger, wishing he could see the world, and imagining himself somewhere else, instead of being content where he was. Now he wished more than ever he could have that back, as he was forced away from his home. 
The Fynnessian prisoners greatly outnumbered their captors, and perhaps if they had been men of the river, who were experienced fighters, they could free themselves. But they were weak and unprepared. They didn't know how to fight or what to do. So they walked on, occasionally stumbling, blindly following the orders of the men. 
They walked on in the night for a long time. Finn didn't know how long. Eventually, the reached the Western Gate on the Minildrithan border, where they met with a group of prisoners from Cargon, and a group from Larton, and went on, out of Minildrith. 
Now, a day later, Finn was still walking in line with the other prisoners. They had been allowed a few hours of sleep the night before in a prisoner camp, and now, walking under the light of a full moon, they were about to stop and set up camp by the river. They would cross in the morning. 
Walking mindlessly for hours had given Finn time to think. Tonight he'd escape. While they were all asleep, he'd escape. He'd been going over and over his plan. 
So, once the men had set up the tents and the prisoners were tied into them so that they couldn't just run off, and the men had all gone to bed, leaving two soldiers to guard, he set his plan to action. 
One of Finn’s ankles had been tied to a post on the tent, in the hopes that with his hands free, he'd be comfortable enough to sleep (and wouldn't drag along come morning) but he wouldn't be able to get up and run from the camp. Finn, though, while walking down the road, had found a shard of glass. It was large and amber-colored, probably from a broken bottle of ale, and he had almost stepped on it. The sunlight had happened to glint off it, and Finn had seen it, so he picked it up and stowed it in his pocket for later use. So, now, Finn rummaged around in the darkness, hoping to find a stick on the ground. He did find one, soon enough, and used a strip he ripped off his nightshirt (for that was what he'd been wearing when he was captured) to tie the glass to the stick. A makeshift dagger. It wasn't pretty, but It’d do the trick. 
Hastily, Finn cut through the rope the bound his leg to the tent post. It must've taken him at least twenty minutes to finally do it, what with the glass being thick and not as sharp as he'd hoped, and the fact that the glass kept coming off of the stick and having to be retied. But eventually, he was able to free himself and get out of the tent. 
The guards were fast asleep as Finn crossed the camp to the tree the ponies were tied up to. He untied one of them and mounted, but it was stubborn and lazy. No matter how hard he kicked its sides, it didn't want to go anywhere. Its sleep had been interrupted, and it wasn't moving until morning. 
Finn sighed and gave up. He'd have to go on foot. But as he dismounted, he landed in a pile of leaves with a terrible loud crunch. It spooked the pony, who whinnied loudly. 
“Shhh! Shhh!” Finn tried to sooth him, but it was too late. The guards were awake. 
“‘Ey, boy! Whaddaya think yer doin’?” One of them yelled. Before he could escape, the guards seized him and escorted him rather roughly back to his tent. 
Finn was made to sleep tied to a tree outside as a penalty. And to make matters worse, the guards had found his ‘dagger’ and taken it. Finn sighed and rolled over. Looking up at the moon, he wished he could be anywhere else. He had failed escape. Now what? He doubted he could pull it off again. He only hoped things were faring better for Eris. 
submitted by Leeli
(April 9, 2018 - 7:03 pm)
~Chapter Eight~
Eris woke at the break of dawn. She lay in her hammock for a moment, soaking in the daylight with her eyes closed, listening to the soft breathing of her sister. She heard voices, hushed, outside. Probably speaking of some important matter. 
Eris's eyes flew open. Important matters. It must've been Lord Oryn speaking with the other important rangers about…Eris actually wasn't entirely sure what about, only that it was important and had to do with the enemy across the water and the burning of Fynnesse. She wondered why she could hear them so well, and then realized that they must've been just above Tryss’s home in the tree. 
Eris lay still for a moment, listening. She caught a few snippets here and there, but nothing she could really understand. Then, the tones shifted a bit. The voices grew slightly louder, as they often do when you're talking about serious matters and forget to keep your voice down. 
Eris didn't mean to eavesdrop. She honestly just wanted hear what was happening and what was going to happen. She hadn't intended to really listen in on the conversation. The thought hardly crossed her mind as she padded from beneath the tree. The words had intrigued her. She had to know more. 
Softly, careful not to crunch the leaves on the ground, Eris made her way to the stair on the opposite side of the tree and began to climb. As she ascended the tree, the words became clearer. She stopped when she could see the group’s backs facing away from her. They couldn't see her from here; she was too low on the stair. Eris pressed her back to the trunk of the tree. 
“Only rumors have reached this far inland from the Farr Sea up until now.” She heard a low male voice say. “Rumors about the enemy gathering his forces. But it is only now that we realize the true extent of these rumors.”
“As I told everyone last night, I received word from two men I sent out to scout about a month ago just yesterday. Word had it that the enemy was about to reach us. And I didn't think that the burning of Fynnesse was a coincidence. Those men work for Him, and He plans to take more towns in time.” This was Lord Oryn. 
“We are the only ones who know of this evil as of yet.” A soft female voice, light and airy, this time. Probably Lady Etheryn  “He will take the other towns by surprise. We must warn them.”
A short silence. Then the first male voice spoke again.
“And the prisoners? What of them? Surely we can't just let them be taken and do nothing.”
“But what can we do?” A new voice, female, but sharper and deeper than Etheryn’s. 
Another moment of silence. Lord Oryn spoke again. 
“We will send men to ride to Ryland and Tirden to warn the men of the rivers.”
“And what of us?” The other woman, Eris guessed it was Arglith, said. 
Silence. Eris thought they must've been thinking about the question. 
“We can not sit this one out, Arglith.” Etheryn said finally. “We will be swept up whether we want to or not, like sand in the tide. But why wait to be brought into this? We can not wait and do nothing. We can't save ourselves. We have a place in this, and we must figure out what.”
Their voices grew quieter. Eris could barely make out the words. 
“I think an alliance would be wise.” Lord Oryn said. “An alliance with Endell, perhaps. We have been nothing but friends to them in times past, and they to us, though I haven't seen the men or the king for some time. Not since we went into hiding one hundred years ago.”
One hundred years! Eris hadn't realized how old Lord Oryn was!
Suddenly, she felt a presence behind her.
“What are you doing?” A sibilant voice hissed in her ear. Eris jumped and clapped her hand over her mouth to keep herself from gasping audibly. She whirled around to see the pale face of her sister, framed by messy brown bangs.
“Tryss! You startled me!” Eris whispered. 
Tryss looked at her sideways. “Are you eavesdropping?” She asked. 
Eris shook her head. “No, no! Of course not! I-I,” it was then that Eris realized she most certainly was eavesdropping, though she hadn't intended to. Though she felt guilty, especially since she admired the rangers, what she had heard seemed more important than what she had done. 
Before Eris could finish, she noticed that the elves had fallen silent. A hush was over them. 
“We're being watched.” Said the other male voice, Fainor. 
Eris looked up to see Lord Oryn crossing to the edge of the platform. 
“Or listened to,” he said suspiciously, intuitively, though he hadn't seen them yet. 
Eris heard footsteps. They were coming down! They would see her! But her feet remained glued to the stair. 
Arglith and Fainor came toward them, seemingly unsurprised. 
“I see we have uninvited listeners.” Arglith said, with the smallest hint of a grin. 
She took Eris by the arm with her gloved hand and brought her up the stair, red hair glinting in the sun. Fainor did the same for Tryss. 
They were brought before the Lord and Lady. Eris hung her head. She felt bad now, for listening. 
Lady Etheryn spoke first. “Listeners in, have we?” Eris thought she saw betrayed amusement in her eyes. 
Eris didn't know what to say. “I-I-No, I, well, er—“ She stuttered. “I didn't mean to, I just—I just heard you speaking and wanted to know what you were talking about.”
Etheryn smiled. “No matter. You were to know later on anyway, when we told our plans to the rest of the Rangers. However, we'd appreciate it if you didn't listen in on such private conversations in the future.”
Eris nodded. “Yes your ladyship. And, to be fair, Tryss had no part in this. She simply came up for wonder of what I was doing.”
“Of course. Thank you Arglith, Fainor. You may release them.”
Eris approached Etheryn. 
“I have a few questions, if you wouldn't mind answering.” She said. 
The Lady smiled and nodded. 
“I heard Fainor say something about the prisoners. Is there any way you can help them?” Her blue eyes pleaded with Etheryn’s dark Amber ones. 
Lady Etheryn’s face became sober. “I am afraid there is nothing we can do. The enemy takes prisoners and turns them into his minions. They are in his hands now.”
Eris's heart sank. Etheryn must have noticed. She realized that Eris probably had family and friends that were taken captive, and she softened, adding, “We will, however, do what we can. But we must first reach Endell.”
Later that afternoon, the Lord and Lady and everyone gather in the courtyard, and announced that they were going to seek an alliance with Endell. Everything that Eris had heard that morning was repeated. 
“Some must stay here to watch Thraenen, but tomorrow at dawn two parties will leave. One will ride up the Arkino river to warn the men of Tirden and Ryland, and the other will ride up the forest and through the mountains to Endell. We will need a company of about twenty men for the ride to the rivers, and thirty or more for the trip to Endell. Anyone willing to go, stand and let it be known.” Lord Oryn announced. 
Soon, they had a party of twenty to ride up the river, and nearly thirty for the ride to Endell. 
Eris stood by Tryss, listening. Then, unexpectedly, Rohir, who was sitting just in front of them, stood. “I'll go.” 
Eris wasn't all that surprised. Rohir had proved an adventurous boy, and besides, his father was already going. What surprised Eris was that, on sudden impulse, she stood. 
“I will go also.”
She heard Tryss gasp beside her. 
“Eris!” She said under her breath. “It's a dangerous journey! Are you sure you want to make it? You could stay here!”
Eris shook her head. She was decided. 
“No, Tryss. I need to go.” She answered simply. 
Tryss sighed. Reluctantly, she stood beside her sister. 
“As will I.” She said. Eris looked over. It was her turn to argue. 
“Tryss, you don't have to. You said it was dangerous. You have a home here!”
Tryss gave her a sidelong glance. Eris heard herself and said no more. 
The next morning, Eris was up early again. She had hardly slept the night before with excitement and nervousness. 
She sat under a large tree on a comfortable silver bench, soaking in the early morning, having nothing else to do. 
Glancing over, Eris saw Rohir emerging from the bushes. He reached her, leading two horses, one white with a black spot on her forehead and back, and one chestnut brown with a white blaze on her face. He patted the white horse’s nose. 
“These are two of Thraenen’s finest steeds.” He said. “This is Lùemine, she’s mine,” he said, gesturing to the white one. “And this is Smoke.” He patted her flank. 
Eris smiled. 
“Is this your first time?” He asked. “I mean, your first time on a journey like this.” 
She nodded. “This my first time being out of Minildrith.” 
“Don't worry,” Rohir said. “It's not so bad as they make it sound.” He seemed to be able to tell she was nervous. “You may ride Lùemine, if you like, seeing as you don't have a horse of your own.” He offered kindly. 
Eris thought back to Ash, how she had ridden the beautiful grey mare over the fields, racing Finn on his own black stallion…
Finn. How she missed him. She wished she hadn't lost her temper at him the last time she'd seen him. 
Eris forced herself back to the present. 
“Thank you.” She looked at Rohir gratefully and took the white horse by the bridle. 
She followed Rohir to the stables where they saddled their horses and slung their packs across them and prepared for the trip. It wasn't long before Tryss found them, and began to ready her own earth-brown stallion. Before long, a horn was blown in the courtyard and Eris and her friends rode out to meet it. 
“That's the signal for us to gather with the other rangers who'll be riding to Endell.” Rohir explained. 
Eris, Tryss, and Rohir fell in line with the other elves, led by Gladir, and rode out into the forest. Away from the safety of the fortress Thraenen. She was, for the first time since the night the strange feelings began, content, riding beside her sister and her friend. Many times Eris regretted leaving, but many times she was also glad she did. For the adventures ahead were more than she could have ever imagined. 
submitted by Leeli
(April 9, 2018 - 7:04 pm)
submitted by Top!!!
(April 10, 2018 - 5:21 pm)

CONGRATULATIONS! WOW! 81,486 words is a HUGE accomplishment! I'm sorry, I wish I could, but I won't be able to read it...I'm swamped with school and can't even read BOOKS that I want to! Oh horrors! And I can't come on Cricket often anymore...but oh, I'm so happy for you! It takes a LOT of hard work and commitment to accomplish something that amazing. Good job, Leeli! I hope this is a first step to a wonderful life of wonderful books, and I hope that one day I will read on of your works, when I'm not standing up to my ears in school. xD

Congratulations, Leeli! 

submitted by Silverwaxwing
(April 10, 2018 - 8:47 pm)

Thank you so much, Silver! I understand completely. School can be so overwhelming at times. I hope you get un-swamped soon! XD

submitted by Leeli
(April 11, 2018 - 8:19 am)

congratulations!! that's so amazing!! you should be really proud of yourself; that's a huge accomplishment! 

submitted by Nighthawk, age -14, Tartarus
(April 12, 2018 - 12:13 am)

Thank you so much, Nighthawk!

submitted by Leeli
(April 19, 2018 - 10:45 am)

Top!

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(April 16, 2018 - 9:15 am)
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