A poem!!!!!!!!

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A poem!!!!!!!!

A poem!!!!!!!!

STORM

The thunder is like like

a dragons roar,

the lightning, wizards light,

the rain is like a giants tears,

in the middle, of the night:

The cracking branches, of a tree,

is the witches, wicked laugh,

the water pounding on your roof,

is the sound of faeries small feet,

in the middle, of the night;

The lights going out,

is the darknesses doing,

the fealing of fear in your heart,

is all the monsters you've dreamed about,

in the middle, of the night.

 

Do you like it?  Tell me, truthfully.  If youd don't, like it,  just come out and say it.  

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(June 30, 2009 - 7:30 pm)

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I LOVE it! It's amazingly descriptive and....just.....WOW! I loved the way you described it all! "Faeries feet," "Wizards light," "Witches wicked laugh," "Dragons roar"!!! It was awesome! *applause* *virtual congratulatory hug for doing a fabulous poem* :D :D :D :D Nice job!!!! :-) 

submitted by Emma O.
(July 1, 2009 - 10:07 am)

awsome! much better then I can do. I like the part with the branches cracking. It was great!!!!!

submitted by Adina , age 12, Mostly in fanta
(July 2, 2009 - 8:59 am)

It's great! I'll never look at a storm the same way again...

submitted by Lena
(July 2, 2009 - 7:34 am)

It was great! Excellent sensory details.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.49, NJ
(July 2, 2009 - 11:29 am)

That's great, Meadow! I love it :D I like

how you connected the sounds to fantasy

creatures and the poem was pretty. Keep

up the good work ;D

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(July 2, 2009 - 9:52 am)

Thanks guys!!!!!!! I write poems better than I write storys. I have a few poem books filled with poems "and other strange things".

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(July 2, 2009 - 12:18 pm)

Wow. That was really good. Are you entering the Cricket poetry contest? You should... I'm going to try to write something for the contest, but I don't know what yet.

submitted by Ima
(July 2, 2009 - 1:33 pm)

That was cool. I like the "wizard's light" especially. Great poem, Meadow!

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(July 2, 2009 - 5:45 pm)

Admins, can I submit this poem into the contest?  becuase if it's allready here then I might not be able to submit it in the contest.

 

That will be OK, but follow the usual rules for submitting it to the contest. 

--Admin

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(July 9, 2009 - 8:38 pm)