Original Character Cafe!!
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Original Character Cafe!!
Original Character Cafe!!!
This is mainly for those doing NanoWriMo to help them develop their characters a bit more, but I think it would be useful for everyone! So, the plot? Our OCs stumble upon a gateway from their world into a mysterious cafe. Actors, think of this like an improv game. How would your character think? Feel? Act? Say? Do? How would your character correspond with others? How do they respond to love? Grief? Sadness? Happiness? Embarrassment? You can write as many characters as you want to, but I highly recommend introducing your characters one at a time, so that we can have new people to react to when the action starts to simmer down.
Okay! So, here's a little example using a character from my NaNo story named Crystal. So far, she's been the basic herowin (I'm so sorry, I'm a horrible speller) , so I'm hoping to devolope her a bit more. This isn't exactly her "voice" for the novel, since I'm still working on what that will sound like.
I set the last carton of Cheriope eggs on the cart. The eggs rattle and settle in their pockets. As I slowly push the cart forward, I cringe at each bump; every jostle, hoping that I wouldn't see clear, slimy egg whites slipping and oozing out of any of the boxes. "Every broken egg is a broken profit," my father says. The short stretch of sidewalk seems to go on for miles. My hands begin to shake from the effort of carefully controlling the cart; curbing its desire to leap away and shake off its burdens.
I don't blame it.
Finally, finally, after a tense few seconds, the open, crinkled-metal doors of the barn welcome me in. Bright, flourescnet light swoops over my eyelids to replace the early morning shadows. A refreshing coolness rushes against my face. I give a few seconds for my eyes to adjust to the light before continuing to push the creaking cart back to the refriderator. But suddenly, something twists in the back of my head, and the world seems to flie out from around me. My seaty hands are wrenched from the handle of the cart by a rushing force. A random thought snags inside the chaos of my mind..."I wonder if this is what Emma and the others feel like when they're on a ship leaving port..." Then the panick sets in and I have to bight my lip to keep from screaming as the world continues to turn around me.
And then everything is still. I find myself in a crouching position. Slowly, I stand up.
(November 2, 2017 - 5:28 pm)
Farren~
Mia's eyes grow incredulous. "Because-it's not that way where I live. At all." She must be from a different world! "Then-you're from-a different world altogether?" I ask. "I-I must be." she says with a curious not of wonder in her voice. "Or I am," I muse. "But-maybe we both are." I look around the...the...um...place, and my glance lands on...another winged elf! But I was one of the last of my people. How can this be? Is she from another world, too? And her companions look just as curious. There is a hooded figure with flashing eye lights, a tall man in gray armor, a very short woman, and then the other winged elf. At least I'm not so out of place here.~
(November 11, 2017 - 3:39 pm)
Jake~ Well, Teak has found something to do. She's over in a corner talking to some kid that just arrived. "Anyway, my name's Conner. Want to look around?" They get up and start trying to open the door, which won't budge. I should probably look around too. I walk over to an Asian girl, who's alone and regarding everyone except the girl in the soccer cleats with suspicion. "Hey," I say awkwardly. "Who are you?" she demands.
"Um, my name's Jake? I'm a human? I'm eleven years old?" She still looks nervous, but after a while she sticks out her hand. "Anastasia."
(November 10, 2017 - 2:11 pm)
UGGGGG I don't know what to write everyone already has someone to talk to!!!
*Slams face on table* And I'm bad at creating conversations!!
(November 10, 2017 - 10:57 pm)
As a note, Eve is awkward and sarcastic. She's pretty sensitive as well. Is a bit of a jealous person and is always trying to prove herself. Insecure as well.
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A guy across the table from me looks at me strangely. I laugh nervously. "Uhm, my, uh, hammer talks to me usually..." That doesn't seem to help.
"Do you know where we are?" I ask him. He shakes his head.
"I just got here," He mutters awkwardly.
"I was in Ash Beaches for one moment, and now I'm here..."
"Ash Beaches?" He wears a confused expression.
"You know, near Ash Mountain? The other place with Dwarves?" I exasperatedly continue when his confusion doesn't stop. "In Fregard?"
"...Dwarves don't exist, " He says slowly, looking at me like a crazy person.
"Yeah, and elves and Orcs don't exist either!" I reply, pointing at the winged elf. "Jeez, what rock have you been living under?"
"Oh my god... Am I even on earth anymore?" The boy whispers under his breath, wide-eyed.
"Anyways," I try to ignore that last statement. "I'm Eve. I'm the holder of the Baymoore Hammer and my quest is to restore the souls of Fregard!" I recite my memorized introduction proudly.
"Um... I'm Astor. I'm... from Earth? And my quest is to get back home?" He smiles weakly.
(November 11, 2017 - 12:58 pm)
This other character isn't from my book. I just made him up to be like the embodiment of this magical cafe.
Crystal~
I back into a corner, escaping the flashes of light and milling shadows. I pretend like I am cool and confident, instead of scared on the inside.
I wait for an opertunity. An answer.
There! A different sort of light, this one silver moves around the little tables. It pauses for a second, like a dragonfly alighting on a leaf, and I can make out the dim figure of a man before it flashes away again. I narrow out the rest of the world. Focus, Crystal. I tell myself the same thing every morning as I collect the eggs and weed the garden for hours upon hours in the hot sun. I tell myself the same thing when I drift into complaining which turns into exhaustion which melts into staring at the sky and dreaming. The silver light comes nearer, then flashes away. Nearer...nearer...nearer...
I pounce.
Leaping towards the light, I jump between it and the corner I was just standing in, throwing out my arms to block it from going anywhere. It stops moving and vibrating and begins to solidify again, like llquid silver slowly cooling.
I was right. It is a young man, with curly black hair and darting silver eyes.
"What do you want?" I ask, keeping my voice low, cool, controlled. Focused.
He laughs. Short and snorting, like a pig I once saw in an open-air shop.
"I don't want anything. You want to get out, don't you? Well, there's only one way you can do that. Find another person and each answer all the cards on one table, and maybe, maybe, I'll let you out."
I kick him in the shins. That's what I would have done if it were Ata* or Jac* getting on my nerves or trying to bully me into taking over their chores.
But he starts vibrating before my foot connects, and suddenly, he is gone.
I sigh in disgust. What could he mean? Find a person? Answer cards? No. There has to be a way out. I'm not playing someone else's game.**
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*Her brothers
**I've been playing Defying Gravity on the piano and it left the lines about playing someone else's game out, so I used it here :)
Okay, so I was thinking there are different types of conversation starters on each table, and if each person answers all the odd questions, they can go back to their world.
(November 11, 2017 - 2:25 pm)
Oh, I'll post Anastasia's appearance. I originally wrote this up when I was asking for a character sketch of her, so I wrote a lot about both her childhood and her present appearance. You can ignore the childish bits.
She grows a lot taller, loosing her plumpness, her skin tans, and her cheekbones begin to show. She's usually pretty dirty now, always looking like she lives out in the woods (which she does).
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The boy who walked up to me was very young, but, as if confirming my suspicions, he was an Other. He was also wearing things I'd only seen in textbooks: technology they called "glasses," using strange fabrics. Was he some sort of time traveler? That had to be impossible, didn't it?
He introduced himself as Jake. I eventually decided to reply. "Anastasia. I am human, too. Are there people here who are not?"
I glanced around again. Sure enough, it seemed so. Some people were even winged. I scratched at my cheek. "I am seventeen, by the way. Do you know where we are? I thought this place was built by Others, but no Other that I have ever heard of has wings."
(November 11, 2017 - 6:07 pm)
Jake~ "Well, this place is called a cafe, but there are a lot of cafes in the world and I don't know what this one is. As for there being non-human people, I'm pretty sure. I mean, that kid over there- I point to Teak- thinks she's a raccoon, so anything can happen, I guess?" I pause. When she doesn't respond right away, I ask, "Who are Others?" Hazarding a guess, I ask, "Are they... non-Asian people?" She gives me a surprised look and nods, and subconsciously steps away from me. "Yes..." she says carefully. "Ah... do you want to see if we can open the door to outside?" I shrug. "Sure- I don't think it'll work, though." We try to open the door, pulling with all our might. Suddenly, it comes crashing open. Me and Anastasia look out onto a bizarre landscape, flipping between two different forests like a wave affect on that slideshow I made for class. As more people join to look around, it starts changing to different things. A city, shimmering with heat. A bedroom that looks just a bit off. A beautiful sky, dappled with clouds. We back away. "I am not going out that door, someone says, and I agree.
(November 12, 2017 - 3:44 pm)
Here’s Connors appearance. And... he’s actually like 37.... so.....yeah...
He has dark blond hair, cut quite short. Green eyes. He wears an old revolutionary war artillery coat.
(November 11, 2017 - 8:49 pm)
Ugh, the bad thing about Mia being so self conscious is that I don’t know how to play her out! I feel like there would be a lot of awkward silences.
~Mia
My eyes open wide. “You’re from the w-“ then I look around at the café again. It’s bursting with people, all of whom have some unusual quirk. Some look like they’re from more than a hundred years ago, and some have wings, animal features, or robotic body parts. Then some look slightly normal, despite the fact that they have magic radiating from their souls. How can I tell with the magic part? Quinn taught me a bit before I left. If I really focus, I can tell what kind of magic they have. But there’s no time for that right now. I sigh and shake my head, bewildered. “Never mind.”
Farren looks at me, maybe a bit concerned. “Are you ok?”
I don’t mean for it to come out sarcasticly, but it does. Oops. Guess I’ve been hanging around Wayne too much. “Yeah well, I think I’m doing pretty good with about 500 other people in the room, all of whom look like they’re from different worlds.”
”That’s exactly what I was thinking.” The voice come from behind us, and Farren and I spin around to see a girl watching us closely. “About the worlds part at least,” she says, grinning.
(November 12, 2017 - 9:26 am)
~~Mj~~~
"Um..yeah. I'm MJ. And one of you is farren, corret? how did we get to this place..."
Sorry for the short post
(November 12, 2017 - 2:06 pm)
Astor~
"Astor?" Eve asks.
"Um, yeah?" I reply.
"You know that girl you were yelling at earlier?"
"That's Grace. She's my friend, though we don't get a long that well. Man, I wish Jessy were here. She'd probably find a way to get back to Sierra," I say, suddenly remembering what the rest of the powered people were thinking.
"What's Sierra?" Eve asks.
"It's the school my friends and I go to. You don't have school in your world or whatever?" I reply.
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Hope I got the personality right.
(November 12, 2017 - 8:28 pm)
Elenna~
This place is wierd. No doubt about it. There are tons of people, not all of them looking like they're from this century- or even this world. I wander around the room for a while, looking at the different interesting people. I do a double take when I see someone with wings. Eventually, I realize I'm going to have to talk to someone sooner or later.
I wish Amara was here, I thought. Then I wouldn't have to interact with other people. I saw two people talking in a corner, and walk over to them. I tap one on the shoulder.
"Hi," I say. "I'm Elenna." They introduce themselves as Mia and Eve, and I ask them about the worlds they came from. Eve says she's from some magical land that has a really cool name, and Mia says she's from the normal world. I feel relieved for a moment, then she proceeds to tell me how she has magic and transported herself to another world. Looks like I'm the only one who has no experience with magic- prior, of course, to coming here.
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Sorry to jump into your conversation, but I everyone is talking, and I need to develop Elenna's social interaction.
(November 13, 2017 - 7:26 pm)
*coughcough* um, I think I was talking to Farren and MJ. Eve was talking to Astor. Maybe both groups can combine to fit your post?
(November 14, 2017 - 9:46 am)
So sorry! Just ignore my post. My brain mixes things up a lot. Sorry!
(November 14, 2017 - 4:52 pm)
Well change of plans in my NaNo book, Farren is human but she was captured by this ancient sorcerer-antagonist guy in the story named Zarkaroth, and he brainwashed her and gave her mutations along with a whole bunch of other teens from Earth. It's futuristic/science fiction book, so yeah. She doesn't remember who she is or anything except that her name is Farren. She looks to be about fourteen. Anyways...
Farren~
"Who are you, anyway?" MJ asks, still eyeing my wings. I search my brain for answers, or some vague fragment of memory, even, but my only reward is the return of my headache. "I...I don't know. Not where I come from, not anything except my name." I confess awkwardly. "Not even how old you are?" MJ questions. "No." she replies, "You look around 14 to me." That's fine, then. I'm Farren and I'm fourteen. But why do they think I'm an elf...thing? What is an elf, anyway? This is all giving me such a headache....~
(November 21, 2017 - 2:55 pm)