Please look at this...I guess i'll start it off

Prologue.... or intro not sure which

A cheetah ran through the trees, leaping over stumps and bushes. The sky was starting to blacken and she smell her enemies vile scent. They were close, and the growing darkness would make them even strong than they already were.

The cheetah had to get home before they could catch her, before the sky was fully dark when thy would be at their prime.

They couldn't get her at home. There would be too many animals for them to handle, but would she even get home? Would she ever see home again?....

"Move tpo her left all go to her right." said a sinster voice. Her enemy's voice whispering.

She shouldn't be able to hear what they said. Their voice would to low for al animal to hear, but she wasn't a ordinary animal.

"Leap on her!" one of them shrieked.

They leapt. Two dark shadow converged on her, turning the air icy around her, freezing her in place. They got her...they were going to end her...

But suddenly light shown...in the dark shadows faces, and with a shriek they leapt backwards. 

The cheetah looked at the Dog's face in front of her, his eyes open, sending out a steady stream of light. He had saved her...but the light sining from the eyes couldn't make their enemy's disappear. It may well of worked on one, but not two.  

"Thank you" she chipped, bowing her head, gratefully to the dog. She ran past him, bumping him with his shoulder to tell him "We need to get home, fast. Come on, no time to waste"

But he didn't folllow. He merely looked the two shadows in the eye, who were getting up, with a little diffculty, for the light was shing in their faces, burning them.

She stopped. The shadows ..they were burning, and for a second she thpught the dog would kill them.

But then the skye went dark.

The shadows grow in size, avadncing fast on the dog.

"Run!" she yowled as she started to run. 

Bu the dog stood there..unmoving. The shadows had frozen him, just like they had frozen her. 

They converged on him, his shinging eyes disappearing, his body, all into blackness.

They had gotten him.

The cheetah ran, tears in her eys. She had to escape...she did want to murder the shadwos they had killed her friend..she should of died instead.

But she couldn't harm the shadows... they would just get her.

She could smell them, but her home was only a foot away, the little space between two bushes was the entrance, and it was right in front of her.

She jumped in the entrance.

She had made it, but her friend hadn't, and worst of all she had to tell her friends that were in front of her that all looked at her.

Star had died..their friend...their one small, weapon against the shadows gone!

~~~~~~~~~~The end of proluge... 

How did you guys like it? The start anyhow

Chapter 1: Sliver

The sliver fox stared at the cheetah. Her face was grim, and fledged with tears. She was shaking. Had she been attacked by a Darkstar? wondered the fox, anxouisly.

The fox glanced around, suddenly remembering that Haven, a dog,  had gone out of camp earler. He had sensed someone was in "dire danger" and left thrugh the entrance. No-one had stopped him, even though evening was approaching fast. No-one could stop him when he sensed danger as much as they had wanted too.

Besides they didn't even believe him. It was just yesterday he had manfisted this new power, and gone out to find who was in danger. He had found a bat, struck on a tree.

Sure the bat was in danger, but it wasn't real danger. The bat's family would probably come save it.

Thats why nobody believed him when he said someone was in "dire danger", today.....But were was he?  

"Where's Haven! What happened to you Sunset" asked the fox, looking at the cheetah, worridly.

" Sliver...., I was attacking....by a Darkstar"  replied Sunset the cheetah, shakily.

"I'm glad your okay, but...What happened to Haven.." asked Sliver, the Fox, shifting her paws, anxouisly. Haven had said someone was in "dire danger" had he been talking about Sunset?, and if that was true had the Darkstar's gotten him...?

Sunset flopped down, sobbing. "He...they got him....He saved me....and the Darkstar's got him!" she wailed. Haven had been her best friend. 

Sliver backed up shocked. He had been friends with Haven, but not as close as Sunset. "NO! it can't be true..."

Sunset looked up. "Why would I lie.."

"You wouldn't...." he turned to some of the animals who hadn't heard Sunset. "The darkstars got Haven"

Gasps.

~~~~~ 

Chapter 2: Moon

The wolf didn't believe it. Sunset had to be lying, but Sunset had never lied. If haven was gone though, what other resources did the wolf have to use in battle with the Darkstars? 

~~~~argh writer block 

The fire. 

Doing two stories on here.

The fire chapter one: Maya

Maya's day had been quite normal until evening when she lad down in her bed to read. The house was quite, except the snoring of maya's dog at her feet. The dog's name was River and he was a terrior.  The clock beside Maya's bed read 9:10. It was a tpyical school night for Maya, but she had no idea what was in store for her. 

Suddenly, though a orange fire appeared in front of her window. The orange fire was miles away, but it was coming fast, and it would be here soon.  It left dead grass in it wake, and smoke pulmed behind it, for the grass behind it was also on fire, the majority of it. 

Maya didn't notice. Maybe things would of been better if she had. 

It was 9: 30. The orange fire was almost there. 

Maya read on,  not noticing the glow the window had. 

~~~~dun duh spuspense... 

Ohh I remember the RP that never got started. It sounds great! I'll post a person.

Name: Mist

Age: Old

Gender: Female 

Darkstar/Waterhill: Waterhill

Apperance: she's a spotted owl, but she's white with light gray spots and silver eyes

Personality: Se's shy and wise. She doesn't like compony and trusts no one. She's slightly wierd and likes riddles. 

Strenghts: She can catch glimses of the future. And travle through dreams (this is a comon thing among spotted owls, but it's hard to achive.) 

Weaknesses: She's not a good fighter, and is forgetful at times. When she is delivering the furture to some one, she is vurnible during and after. She could be in a coma for a few minutes or days depending on how long and bad the prophecy is.

Other: This is important, she lives alone in the woods and is hard to find. 

I'm going to make another.

Name: Husk

Age: Young

Gender: Male 

Darkstar/Waterhill: Waterhill

Apperance: He's a gryphon the size of a normal house cat. He has dark blue feathers, with a russet red around them. (Look at a picture of a blue laced wyandotte that's how the feathers look). His lion side is a dark gray color.

Personality: He's sweet and clumsy, slightly naive. He's training to be a warrior to battle the Darkstars.

Stenghts: He's a good fighter (he doesn't know this yet) a good stragistic and his talons and claws can cut Darkstars.

Weaknesses: a bit to trusting, too curios, and will do anything to help somone.