Meadow of Faults

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Meadow of Faults

Meadow of Faults

I was reading Wuthering Heights outside yesterday when the mailman came and delivered a project. Then a single short fragment of a story popped into my head. Imagine this as just a part of one, somewhere in the middle of the story. Also, I didn't really edit the dialogue, just added a bit here and there. Please do tell me what you think!

"Mrs. Fendwick, a package for you, Ma'am," a dark haired man with weeping eyes and ragged clothes says, pulling forward a small box.

"I am not Mrs. Fendwick, but that of her daughter,"

"Does thou mother reside here?"

"I fear she resides in a place unreachable by man. Her screams haunt this old glory like that of the man's face melted to the moon," the girl says, pushing a lock of auburn hair away with pale fingers.

"Has she died, Ma'am?" The man asks, face falling in bewilderment.

"Nay, yet her fair soul wonders from time to time."

With wide eyes, the man speaks, patting the miss on the arm and tipping his haggled hat.

"With all due respect, I must be on my way. Do give the mistress my wishes." 

"That shan't be necessary, kind sir, now come hither. I shall tell you of a bird's call," the sly girl says, beckoning with a slender finger. "The mistress enjoys a fair soul. I fear she has yet to leave one sane, in whole."

The man's dead eyes appear wide as day as he frantically steps back, staring at the girl as if she were a madman.

"Might I ask where you shall run?"

"Thou are quite delirious, Ma'am! I must go call for Mr. Wilkie promptly, miss. You need a doctor, that shall do the trick. Or might I just be losing mind to the wind?"

"There is no such thing wrong with myself, much less thou. It is my late mother, the mistress thou should be frightful of," the girl speaks delicately, standing up with her foreign book in hand.

"Late? Is the mistress not alive as spoken of so lightly?"

"Might it be a shock if I described my mother as late yet wondering hungry and alone? Lad, there is nowhere for you to go. When thou o'clock comes as mine did, you shall understand."

"Ma'am? Ma'-"

With a flash, the atmosphere collapses upon the man's broken soul. The haggard life sinks, the wind knocked out of his soul. The fair girl lays her masked book upon his chest, smiling with a tilted head before turning with the lightest air, leaving the man to die.

With all that starts, all must end. Unless you are soulless, having lost your life centuries before. 

 

submitted by Ashlee G., age 16, The Future
(May 11, 2017 - 3:56 pm)

Oh my gosh, Ashlee. Oh my gosh. That's amazing, yet terrifying. It seems like it belongs to the type of book that would keep me awake at night. Wow. If that were a really a book, I would definately read it. It's that good.

submitted by Cockleburr
(May 11, 2017 - 4:35 pm)

Ahhh, thank you so much Cockleburr! I didn't think it wad that good, but reading over it gives me the chills. Maybe I will make this into a book...? That would be terrifying and awesome at the same time. Being that I wrote this in a hurry, I did interchange between old and modern English by mistake. But thank you so much! I think I will make this a novel then. Hmmm..

submitted by Ashlee G., age 16, The Future
(May 12, 2017 - 1:23 am)

Haha, I'm glad you noticed you blended them, because I was going to go on a nice long rant about proper Middle English. (dost, not does!)
Otherwise, though, I really liked it! It was creepy and really cool!

submitted by St.Owl, age Recarnated, Everywhere
(May 12, 2017 - 3:51 pm)

I know! I was writing in a hurry so I could return to reading Wuthering Heights, so I knew there were numerous errors. I love Middle/Old English, it just takes a while to write in. And thank you! 

submitted by Ashlee G., age 16, The Future
(May 12, 2017 - 10:55 pm)
submitted by Top top topity top
(May 12, 2017 - 11:19 am)

Oh my goodness! That was amazing, yet creepy! Very well written. Probably a book I wouldn't read if it were published, however, just because it give me chills. XD

submitted by Leeli
(May 13, 2017 - 8:27 am)

Thank you so much! I understand not reading it as a book, wow, that'd be insane. I figure if it was a book, it would be the intensive feel of Wuthering Heights. I don't know if you've read that before, but it is absolutely amazing.

submitted by Ashlee G., age 16, The Future
(May 13, 2017 - 11:02 am)