IDK if I should be asking this, but can you please post?  I don't have much to say as of now, since my charrie is following yours.

Zas~

"I'm not leaving my landspeeder here. It has virtually NO security—" 

"Who is going to steal this hunk of junk anyway??" Arial roars. I sigh. At least we made it to the port city. A port city. Not that I have any idea where it is.  Now, there's only the problem of theives. 

"You stay here with my landspeeder. I'll go find where we are." Before Arial can object, I run off, the noise and of engines and aliens and many other, uniedentifyable sounds swallowing me up. I try to look like I know what i'm doing, but I still earn many partly-interested stares. Glancing around, I start deciding who it would be safe to talk to.

But then...

the sound of a blaster echoes from building to building. My first panicked thought (embarrasingly enough) is of Arial, but then I realize that the noise is coming from the other direction. Someone yells, followed by more blaster fire. I start to run in the opposite direction, but then I hear a name that freezes my heart and sends me tripping over my own feet. 

"ALEXIS!" Comes the yell. It's not that Alexis. Not my crazy, wild orphan who left for Jedi training years ago. 

But I turn around and run towards the tumult, nevertheless.

Sorry I haven't checked for a few days guys, we have had family in town so I have been pretty busy.

~Alexis

I open my eyes as someone takes hold of my shoulders and pulls me up. I look into the face of the boy I have been having visions of. Questions swirl in my mind. Who is he? Where am I? Who was the man that came out of the bar? What is going on? My eyes take in the person that is lying beside me. His skin is tinted green and he looks fairly dead. Another question comes into my mind. Is this real? I turn to the boy. His arm feels strong and firm around my shoulders. I think he is saying something, but I can't hear him. "Is this a vision." I mumble, reaching towards him. He helps me stand shaking his head. He says something, but I can't make it out. Another man, this one looking to be an adult takes hold of me and lifts me up. We begin to walk, the boy and another tall cloaked figure are leading the way. I turn my head to look at the man who is carrying me.
"What is going on?" I ask in a weak voice.
The man nods towards the boy I've been having visions about. "Terron has had visions of you. His master believes you are in danger. We have to get you out of here."
I look at the boy, Terron, who I have been having visions of. His back is turned towards me and he is walking rather fast, with long strides. My eyes flutter shut. I can hardly keep them open. Suddenly the sound of a blaster shot echos around me. My eyes snap open. The man who is carrying me is sprinting to get behind a building. It looks like we are just outside the market. He sets me down and pulls a blaster out of his cloak and begins to shoot. Terron dashes across the road and comes down beside us, causing dust to rise up.
"What is happening?" I ask.
Terron turns towards me, looking into my face. I must look horrible. "We are being attacked."
"By whom?" I ask, reaching inside my jacket for a blaster.
"Not sure." Terron replies, firing a shot.
Suddenly the man who was carrying me dashes forward a few paces and ducks behind a wall.
I see a mans face appear around another corner a little ways ahead. He lifts a blaster and shoots and the man who was carrying me.
I lift my own blaster to shoot, but my hands shake to much to sight anything.
Terron reaches out a hand and places it on my own hand. "Don't try." He says gently. "We've got this...Um..?"
I meet his eyes. "Alexis." I reply.
He nods. "Alexis. We've got this, Alexis."
Suddenly a blaster shot bounces off the wall just above our heads. Small peices of stone fall on top of us.
"Come on." Terron says, reaching out he grabs my arm and we head for the wall. Suddenly a blaster shot catches the hem of Terron's cloak, blowing a hole in it. We run faster, I break away and dash towards the wall, lifting my blaster. With a last bit of energy I fire a shot then fall behind the wall. I think my shot went wide, but it was enough to call the enemy back.
"Alexis!" Terron yells, coming up behind me. "Are you CRAZY??"
I try to speak, but can't because I'm out of breath. Suddenly someone comes flying around the corner of the wall and stops. I gasp when I see his face. "No..." I whisper. 

C'mon guys! We are at a really exciting part! We need to keep this going! We almost have 100 comments!!

*screams* I'm sorry I'm back I've been out of town!! 

Terron~

I grabbed my light saber and drew it, stepping in front of Alexis. She stared at the figure standing there, blocking out escape. He was tall, dressed all in black. He was wearing a long black cape, some light armor, and a black helmet. Looking at his face I saw the figure to be a man, his face cruel and pale. 

"We meet again young one. It is a pleasure." He smirked, taking a step forward. I raised my light saber. The man laughed. "You wish to fight me Jedi?" He reached to his belt, wrenching out a strange metal object from it. With a burning purr, the bright red blade of the Sith's light saber. A face plate slid out of his helmet, concealing his face. "Lets fight then." He said, his voice a distorted through the helmet. 

"Well then," I said as the man walked towards us. "This just took an unpleasant turn." M

Silver, would it be okay for that dude to be a sixth or did you want him to be someone else? 

*dabs*

Zas~

I stand frozen in an alley, watching from behind the corner of a building. Then I hear a hiss in my ear, and all the sudden Arial is behind me.

"WHAT IS GOING ON!" She practically yells in my ear.

"Ahhh! Personal space, Arial." How did we ever end up working together? The fleeting thought of my warm, clean, quiet and Arial-free home dawns in my mind. I struggle to get a better glimpse of the action. Is that...? No, YES. A Sith lord. And a Jedi. Right here on Tatooine. Not to mention...

Suddenly, the Sith loshoots a bolt of blue elecricity.

"Alexsis!" Even as Arial claws at my shoulder in an attempt to keep me sane and alive, I dart out from behind the building, clumsily drawing my blaster. Thankfully, she and the other boy dodged out of the way in time, because I wasn't fast enough. Alexsis turns, narrowly missing another jolt of blue lightning, and a flash of random memories enter my head.

~

"You're Mark?" 

"No, I'm Mark. The scrawny one's Zas. Get it right."

"Oh, sorry. I'm Alexsis. I won't be here for very long, so it doesn't matter anyway." 

~

"Do you ever thing of doing something big, Zas?" 

"No. That's idiotic." 

"You sound like Mark."

"But Mark's always right." 

"Is that what everyone says?" 

~

"I told you I wouldn't be here long." 

"I thought it might be longer." 

"It's okay, I enjoyed meeting you, young one."

"I've always wanted a big sister..."

"I'll still be your friend, even when I'm gone."

"Yeah. My only friend's a girl. How embarrasing." 

"Goodbye, Zas."

~

The Jedi boy shoots me a quick confused look, before jumping away from yet another bolt of electricity. 

"Go! Get to your ship!" I yell.

"No!" The Sith lord retaliates in frusteration. Electricity crackles by my ear.

"Zas...why are you...what are you?" Alexsis calls out.

"Something idiotic. Now hurry!" With only a moment of hesitiation, the two turn and run for their ship, with only me standing between them and the angry Sith lord. His pale hair obstructs his ominous face as he walks towards me, arms outstretched.

"Move aside, stupid boy," he threatens. In answer, I shoot my blaster. He senses it coming and dodges, of course. 

I certainly am having a moment of sheer stupidity. Giving a quick look over my shoulder, I see the Jedi boy's friends helping Alexsis into the ship, while the boy turns back and draws his lightsaber.

"Hurry up! Just get out of here!" But he doesn't leave. 

Crackling electricty catches me in the chest, and suddenly my feet are skidding along the ground as I'm thrown backwards. Scrambling to get up, I'm pinned down by more electric energy. I think I sream as the pain cuts into my skin and my head, sending all other thoughts scattering. Getting a glimpse of his shadowed face, I realize that he's smiling. He's enjoying this. I scream again and again as horror bites into me with every heartbeat. 

"HEY! I've got what you're looking for! That's right! A secret rebel message...right here! YOU DON'T NEED HIM! GET ME! " Ariel. It's Ariel. I should be worrying about her dashboarded secret rebel message (if it even exsists), but instead, all I can think about is the word "friend." 

The blasts of electricty stop, and I let my head fall to the ground as I struggle to catch my breath. Behind me, I heard the engines ((rockets? what do you call them in Star Wars land?)) of the spaceship. Good. At least they're getting away. And if I die today, it's after my first and only up to this point friend got to see me do something "big" and idiotic at the same time. 

~

Sorry if I controlled anyone too much! I was thinking, since Alexsis was an orphan, she could have stayed with Zas, his brother (Mark), and his parents for a little while a loooooong time ago?? If you don't like that, that's fine.