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I am currently writing a book titled: The Army of the Alone. I want to post it here on the Inkwell.
I will take fourteen people. 7 main in the army with Amy, 7 who are spies trying to free the brainwashed teens.
Here's the charrie sheet:
Name:
Gender:
Age (13-17):
Appearance:
Personality:
Side:
A picture of character and/or a backstory:
Here is what I have written so far:
Part 1: Silence
Chapter 1
I lie there, alone and unmoving. The white-washed walls illuminate my pale skin. White clouds hang frozen in the air from my breath.
My slim body is levitated about three feet above ground. Wires that are attached to my skin are hooked up to machines. Iron shackles keep me from moving.
Somewhere around three days, they unshackle me and take off the wires. Then they hand me a black uniform and say that they will be back in a few hours. All I can do is nod.
Once I get into the uniform, which consists of black pants, a black long sleeve shirt, black armor, and a black sheathe, I walk over to one of the walls. I appear to be in a pentagonal room, with one door that is bolted shut and no windows.
Because the walls are so clear, my reflection stares back at me. I have blonde hair that is a little longer than shoulder length. My green eyes are bright and intimidating. And of course, the impotant one. I can't remember a thing.
That's all I have at the moment. I will try to post every day.
submitted by Lindsey H., age 11, Massachusetts
(February 21, 2017 - 5:46 pm)
(February 21, 2017 - 5:46 pm)
Here is the re-write of the last post:
Chapter 4 continued
The next morning, after breakfeast, I go to my first class. Warrior Training.
When I go into the room, I see three of my fellow peers. Ty, Via, and another boy who don't recognize, he has chesnut hair and vivid green eyes. Based in the fact that there is one more empty desk, I can tell that not everybody is here.
Indeed I was right. About five minutes before the lesson is supposed to start, another girl races in. She has auburn hair and big, green eyes.
"Hello," she says mysteriously."My name is Rosa. Major. What's your name?"
"Amy. Captian."
"Well Amy, I heard you had quite the encounter with Victoria the other day."
I sit down, trying to ignore her. Much to my dismay, she doesn't take the hint. She just sits down next to me.
The boy who was standing next to Via and Ty comes over. I notice that he is carrying a rifle. He looks dark and depressing. "Good day. My name is Caleb King. I heard about what you did with Victoria."
At this point, I completely blow my top. I open up my black notebook and show complete indifference to Rosa and Caleb.
Please tell me if there is any problems with this last section. I'll see if I can start Chapter 5 later.
(March 20, 2017 - 4:05 pm)
Chapter 5
I endure a bunch of strange looks through the day. Everybody seems to be talking about what I did to Victoria.
The only people who are still talking to me are Via and Ty. We sit together at meals on our side of the table while Regan and Maxwell talk on their side. Apparently, Regan can be up just as good at giving dirty looks.
But I don't care. Let them think what they think. Because one day, they'll be forced into the same situation. And I will not help them.
Then, some random quote pops into my head. "Revenge is like trying to bite the dog because the dog bit you. It's a waste of energy and all ya get is a mouthful of hair."
I can imagine hearing that quote. But as soon as it comes, it leaves. And once again, I am forced onto my knees in pain and aggravation.
That quote is from a TV show called Heartland.
(March 21, 2017 - 2:41 pm)
lindsey please I am literally crying;(
(July 3, 2017 - 8:21 pm)
I will try to continue. I am working on some other projects at the moment, and I have to work this on my summer HW.
Sorry everyone. There are also a few chapters that I have to fix.
I WILL post again some point within the week with another section.
~Lindsey H.
(July 4, 2017 - 7:14 am)
Can I still make a character?
(July 5, 2017 - 8:58 am)
OF COURSE!
(July 6, 2017 - 9:07 am)
Name: Rachel Bobbi
Gender: Girl
Age(13-18): 15.5
Appearance: Black hair, bright blue eyes, tan, tall
Personality: Bright, cheerful, and always joking around
Side: Spy
A picture of the character and/or backstory: Post later
Name: Georgie Bobbi
Gender: Girl
Age: 15.5
Appearance: Caramel colored hair, brown eyes, and a bit tan, tall
Personality: Always serious and cynical
Side: Army
Picture/backstory: Post later
(July 6, 2017 - 9:56 am)
Here is my picture of Caleb William King.
(July 6, 2017 - 10:05 am)
Chapter 6
I lie on my bed, and think. So much is going on.
Most people are not talking to me, especially after that stunt I pulled in the training room with Victoria. But she deserved it. Right?
Because of the think walls, it is impossible to. Make out what people are saying. And people sure do have a lot to say.
But no matter what, I cannot let their words get to me any longer. I will get up again tomorrow, and go to class. And I will not back down.
END OF PART 1.
(July 6, 2017 - 10:13 am)
Name: Fawn Dallas
Gender: Female
Age (13-17): 14
Appearance: Thick black hair, sweet and cute face, shining chocolate eyes, small for her age, almond skin, thin eyebrows
Personality: She is extremely kind and friends with everyone. She does have trouble realizing sometimes when people don't want to talk to anyone, like when they're really sad.
Side: Army
A picture of character and/or a backstory: Her family is very caring and over-protective. They worried a ton when she disappeared.
(July 6, 2017 - 3:42 pm)
Thank you everyone! There is ONE more spot left! And that is in the army.
(July 6, 2017 - 5:34 pm)
Scratch that. I was going through the comments and I realized that there is another spy spot open.
Therefore, there is 1 Army spot and 1 Spy spot.
(July 7, 2017 - 2:19 pm)
Question time!
What should I do next? For part two, should I do the next character, or the last person to respond?
(July 7, 2017 - 9:44 am)
you should do the last person to respond!
(July 7, 2017 - 1:23 pm)
OK.
(July 7, 2017 - 2:02 pm)