Just for fun...
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Just for fun...
Just for fun... Anyone want to rewrite Twilight? Get rid of all the purple prose, horrendous morals, and poorly developed characters? We'd still stick to the same basic plot, obviously, but we could get rid of the sparkles!
Anyone want to give it a shot? Not a parody mind, but a serious rewrite?
submitted by TNÖ, age 15, Deep Space
(May 15, 2009 - 10:37 pm)
(May 15, 2009 - 10:37 pm)
Well, TNO's ideas are the best for the vampires, but whatabout Bella/Iz? I think that's a good idea, Phoenix. Bella/Iz actually likes Jake, or Mike, or someone other than Ed, and maybe . . . could Ed be evil? Then he could put Bella/Iz in a trance and then everyone (Jess, Jake, Mike, Eric, and co.) would all be like "Whut?", because Ed isn't the cool/handsome/girls-drool-on-his-socks-type. Then, ta da, copy and paste, "THEY (Jessica, Mike, Eric, Jacob, whatever) figure out that Ed's a vampire, and, dunno, save her, and she's GRATEFUL for once . . . ?! "
(May 24, 2009 - 12:42 pm)
Sorry, I couldn't help cracking up. Bella? Astronomy? WRITING? WHUT?
But yes, I could see Izzy- NOT Bella, though- being into astronomy... which would also mean that she'd be out a lot at night, so she might see Edward going out doing whatever he does at night ("vegetarianism," or smoking or whatever)... *thinks*
(May 24, 2009 - 4:19 pm)
Maybe Carlisle is a "good guy," and, since I like TNO's logic, living on only animal blood is less nutritious than human blood (therefore the Culllens are weaker, not the superdudes that they are in the books--that's only normal 'pires--but anyway), Carlisle is trying to find a supplement that will allow them to get all their required nutrients without eating humans. I dunno--maybe he can actually FIND the thing, and it's a nearly extinct wild orchid from South America!
(May 24, 2009 - 5:37 pm)
* shows everyone nearly extinct Orchid from south america* everyone: ooh ahh* proceeds to eat the orchid* everyone: ooh ahh * laughs maniacally * Now the cullens will never survive and shall be forced to eat humens!!! Everyone: YAY!!!!!!! * the Cullens burst through the door and eat me* "Revenge" says Edward," has never been sweeter or tasted better". * goes home and lies to bella about where he has been saying that he was picking flowers and gives her a rose"
Based on a true story
(May 25, 2009 - 1:04 pm)
Haha. That was pretty funny, Adina. :)
(May 25, 2009 - 6:40 pm)
Ahem. You have been given a troll ticket for.... well.... trolling.
(May 25, 2009 - 6:57 pm)
Sorry! Whats trolling?
(May 25, 2009 - 9:12 pm)
Trolling is, put simply, talking about something on a thread that you're not supposed to (form of Internet harassment). I think the above post counts because this is "not a parody, mind, but a serious rewrite" and it's being used as a mock thread. Sooo... *apologies*
Not an awfully big deal, though, because you didn't know. :)
(May 26, 2009 - 3:46 pm)
Oops! tee hee!
(May 26, 2009 - 6:24 pm)
Nah. It's within the topic of the thread--wandering a bit, admittedly, but still well within the limits of normal posting. Trolling would be if she posted something not related at all to Twilight on this thread.
Point being, conversation wandering isn't trolling, it's people being ADD and, well, normal. :)
(May 26, 2009 - 7:39 pm)
So do I still have to pay the trolling ticket?
(May 27, 2009 - 11:01 am)
So, trolling is saying something like "Fluorescent blue lasagnas that jump over the moon will always taste cruddy"?
(May 27, 2009 - 7:10 pm)