ROUND ROBIN

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ROUND ROBIN


ROUND ROBIN

Rules

1. Please don't do anything changing the plot a lot. You can do slight varients, but the tone should be the same.

2. Please edit your posts so they're high quality.

I will start. 

Helen washed off her hands, looking down at her creation with satisfaction. The pair of wings were made up of thin, high quality muslin with structuring of bamboo. She'd carefully painted over the muslin in brilliant colored paints and allowed them to melt together, creating a sunset like look. The fabric was thin enough you could see the light through it and the bamboo sticks covered in an even layer of dark green paint, giving it a clean look. Helen had paid such attention to detail she had even added eyes to her wings, sort of like the eyes on butterfly wings. The wings were beautiful, but useless- without the proper hacking.

The gravity mechanics in this branch of the virtual world were very hard to hack. Helen had spent several months of hard work trying to figure out how to give herself wingless flying abilities, and the best she could come up with was a lessened gravitational pull- Helen could jump higher and farther than other users, and weighed less, but couldn't fly.

But Helen had figured out the loophole she needed. She needed a prop to add programming to- when she added it to the system (which had been a real pain) she had given it abilities you were not allowed to add on to users.

And now she had done it.

All that was left now was to test it out. 

submitted by Indigo
(November 22, 2016 - 10:26 am)

Helen stepped over to the window on the far wall. She opened it, sliding it carefully so as not to wake anyone. The very beginnings of sunlight had begun streaming over the horizon as Helen strapped the wings to her back with care. She boosted herself onto the sill and took a deep breath. This was what she had worked so hard for. Dreamed for. And the moment she had anticipated for almost a year was finally here. Helen let a smile creep onto her face. Then she closed her eyes, felt for the latch that would activate the flight socket on her wings, and leapt. 

I hope this was ok! 

submitted by Leeli, k
(November 23, 2016 - 4:01 pm)

yup, that was great :)

submitted by Indigo
(November 24, 2016 - 10:54 am)
submitted by Toppi Wingfeather
(November 23, 2016 - 4:02 pm)
submitted by Toppi Topa a Lot
(November 24, 2016 - 6:54 am)

This sounds cool! And fun! 

... She was free-falling, plummeting down. For a moment, she felt blind panic, then she was lifted up by the wind, the wings supporting her. She smiled, giving the wings a little experimental flap. She went higher, faster, floating on the wind's current. Helen closed her eyes, triumph and happiness exploding within her. The wind blew her honey-colored braids back behind her. 

"I did it," She whispered quietly to herself, "I'm flying."

A whirling sound came from behind her, unnatural, not blending in with the sweet sound of the wind. Her heart lurched, and she quickly glanced behind her shoulder. Her eyes widened and she flapped the wings harder, silently willing the wind to blow her faster. 

I hope this was good!  

submitted by Alexandra
(November 25, 2016 - 9:32 am)

It couldn't possibly be, Helen thought. She'd spent more time in the virtual world than out, and knew every inch of it. She knew every person who went in, had memorized every appearance. She'd never seen this person before.

His wings were like a dragonfly's. He flew, not with the elegant grace and exhileration that Helen was feeling, but fast and direct, gaining on her quickly. She felt her heart straining against her ribs, trying to break free. 

Who was this boy?

submitted by St.Owl, age Recarnated, Everywhere
(November 25, 2016 - 2:22 pm)

Helen stared at the boy and nearly lost her balance. She hadn't noticed any code for wings other than hers in the code. Is he one of the VDP Hackers?(BTW VDP stands for "very dangerous person") her mind asked, but that thought was quickly crushed with another. Nah, he's too young looking. But her heart was racing anyways. Helen dived, then sharply flew upward to try and loose him, but he stayed on Helen's trail. Then the boy was close enough to grab Helen by the leg, and he reached out before being tackled by somebody down to the ground. Helen felt that she could faint right there and then. 

submitted by Storm Windwhisperer, age WhoCares?, Somewhere over the rainbo
(November 25, 2016 - 5:24 pm)

Helooo, my name is Wind.

And i'm Min.

Weee have a sssingle write called-

Ski-lodgeish single write.

Min! IIII was going to sssay that!

Well I said it. So there.

Hmph. 

submitted by Min & Wind
(November 25, 2016 - 6:24 pm)

Pardon me, I wish you wouldn't randomly advertise on this thread. This is singularly for a Round Robin, and your single write really has nothing to do with it. I'm sure it'll be a great piece of literature-- just, please, don't announce it in someone else's thread, if it's not on topic.

submitted by ...
(November 25, 2016 - 10:30 pm)

I agree with ... Don't worry Min, nobody's mad or anything, we just ask that threads are used for intended purposes. I did see your ski lodge on Inkwell earlier, and it looks interesting.

submitted by Owlgirl
(November 26, 2016 - 2:11 pm)

Ya. It's kind of like when you're trying to do something on a computer or phone, and then an ad randomly pops up. I'm sure you single write is great, but maybe advertise it on one of your own threads, or make a thread for it, or ask before advertising next time. Thank you! :-)

submitted by Leeli
(November 27, 2016 - 12:24 pm)

Helen watched helplessly as the boy fell with his assailant, a messy blur of green and black. In doing so, she was forced to look at the ground, and  that was when she snapped out of her dreamy trance. Reality seeped back into her mind and the exhilaration of flying washed away, and now she was looking at the depressing earth beneath her that was alive with people and activity, yet so utterly, terribly, woefully dead. The black grime covering the smokestacks, crumbling buildings, and dark alleyways. In the distance Helen could see the glow of downtown, with its new, shining skyscrapers and its blissful ignorance. It was only a guise of paradise of course, but it was the closest to paradise one could get, at least better than these glitched slums.

A shriek caught her attention, and Helen cursed herself for spacing out again. Awkwardly, she flew downwards, struggling to stay in the sky. As she landed and the mud seeped bewteen her bare toes, she realized her shoes must have fallen off during the flight. Gross, she thought as she cautiously stepped towards the two people.

The mystery boy was on the floor, his dragonfly wings bent, his large eyes closed. But his chest was rising and falling, so he would be okay for now. Helen shuddered, thinking of how close he had been to grabbing her. She was glad he was out cold.

Whoever had tackled him had their leather jacket-draped back to her. The person turned around, and she gasped when she saw who it was. 

submitted by Owlgirl, age 13, Some daaay, somewheeeere
(November 26, 2016 - 2:28 pm)

Ooh! Who will it be? 

~~~

"Y-you!" Helen cried, stepping back, "What are you doing here?"

The person laughed, a cruel, cold sound, "Little Helen, I could ask you that very question." 

Helen froze, the familiar words piercing her. Little Helen... She shook the thoughts out of her head, trembling, "G-go away!" 

The man shook his head, "As if I would listen to the words of a little girl."

Helen shook her head, "I'm not a little girl! I've changed since the last time you saw me!"

"Oh, really. And I've changed, too," He laughed again, stepping toward Helen.

Helen involuntarily stepped back, glancing at the mystery boy. His eyelashes were fluttering- it looked like he was going to wake up soon. Helen could only hope he wasn't on the man's side.

The man circled Helen, who was standing rigidly. She felt her wings drag her arms down, and- her wings! She felt like smiling, but she couldn't let the man see. She stared into the distance, and made her eyes go wide, made her jaw drop. The man jerked his head to look, and Helen took that moment to leap up into the air, flapping her wings.

Go, go, go! She silently prayed that the wings would work, even from the ground. She fluttered up- she was rising! Then... her left wing was grabbed, and yanked down to the ground by the man. She cried out as the carefully designed wing ripped... then- 

The man collapsed, crying out, and Helen stumbled back, mouth wide open. The boy was on top of the man, and he drove his heel into the man's chest. He cried out, struggling to stand up. The boy locked eyes with Helen, "Some help here?" 

~~~

Wow, sorry that was so long! I really got caught up into the story!  

submitted by Alexandra
(November 27, 2016 - 3:20 pm)

Helen took a step back. She barely even knew the boy. Why risk helping him? But.... he seemed like he was on her side, at least for now... 

The man broke her wings. Helen felt her anger rising. He broke her dreams, the two single objects she had spent so much time, so much hard work on. He took her dreams and scattered them, easily as the morning dew.

Helen gave the man's head a good kick. He was out cold.

The boy stared at Helen.

"Hey, thanks! Anyway..." he scratched his head and smiled nervously, "Sorry for any trouble... er... I'll just get along now... "

The boy stretched his bent wings, their crippled membranes returning to their original shape.He winked at her and flitted off into the sky.

Sorry for the trouble, huh? Some trouble that was. Helen watched the shape of the boy fly up, up, and further still, and then off into the distance.

That's when the hand grabbed her ankle. Ah, yes, the man at her feet.  

submitted by Thorne, age Who knows?, Nowhere and Everywhere
(November 28, 2016 - 10:28 pm)

Helen ran over, trying to ignore the way her tattered wing swung uselessly from her arm, a dead weight. Together, she and the mystery boy succeeded in flipping the man over onto his stomach with his hands pinned on top of him, behind his back.

"Hold on a moment- command code: inventory," the boy said. A glowing green rectangle with several lines of text appeared in the air in front of him. With the hand that wasn't holding the man's hands immobile, he scrolled through the text until he found the entry he wanted and poked it. A length of string replaced the rectangle with an almost inaudible pop. The boy caught the string out of the air as it fell and tied it around the man's wrists, securing them with a tight knot.

Helen finally found her voice. "Who- who are you?" she asked, now more than a little awestruck.

The mystery boy's face turned away. "We'd better get him out of here before the Whitehats show up," he said, appearing not to have heard.

submitted by Curio
(November 28, 2016 - 10:31 pm)