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Summary:
Vivian and Scarlet are best
friends. Nothing is extraordinary about them; they are just two normal teenage
girls. At least this world thinks so. Vivian is struggling with a poor
self-image. Scarlet is the new kid at school, and bullies pick on both. But when
they enter into a magical realm, things change dramatically. They embark on a
quest to save the magical world. On completing their mission with success, they
find out who they really are.
Should I continue? Thanks for your support!
submitted by Elmodaisy
(June 12, 2016 - 7:56 am)
(June 12, 2016 - 7:56 am)
Sounds good! Just make sure in addition to planning out the plot, to have a separate...plan/outline/timeline of their relationship. Make sure to develop their characters well enough that yi=ou can imagine them as real figures.
Also, when they get to the fantasy world, make sure to do a lot of worldbuilding.
(June 12, 2016 - 10:36 am)
Great! Thanks for the advice.
(June 12, 2016 - 2:42 pm)
Chapter 1
Something Important
Beep.
Beep. Beep. “Mmm. Wha’s goin on?” Vivian groggily woke up. Someone had
texted her and her phone was beeping like crazy. She looked at the clock. It
was 4:45 A.M. On a Saturday
morning. She groaned. Reaching over, the picked up her phone and looked at the
message. Scarlet had texted, “Want to meet up today?” Wow, Vivian thought, she
was up early. “Sure! When/where?” she texted back. Scarlet replied quickly, “By
the bench, beside the ocean, at 10.” Vivian knew exactly where that was. They
had met there often to discuss homework, school, family, friends, and usually
brought lunch to eat in the salty air. In the summer, they would go swimming. She
texted back, “BTW, do u know what A.M it is?” Scarlet texted, “Sorry, hv
something important 2 tell u tho.” “What about?” “Tell u privately. LTR.” Vivian
sighed. Although a true and loyal friend, Scarlet could be quite the drama
queen sometimes. She thought briefly of going back to bed, but then decided she
was too awake. She spent a while idly wondering what Scarlet was so excited
about. Finally, it was seven. She ate a quick breakfast of cereal, got dressed,
and packed PB&J for both her and Scarlet. “There was no telling how long
we’ll be there,” she thought to herself. Little did she know how much that
beach could affect her…
(June 13, 2016 - 8:24 pm)
Pretty good!
(June 14, 2016 - 10:20 am)
(June 12, 2016 - 10:37 am)
(June 12, 2016 - 10:37 am)
That sounds great! (And yes, heed Owlgirl's advice) If you need help world-building ... just ask!
(June 12, 2016 - 2:44 pm)
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(June 14, 2016 - 6:19 am)
I have been working on the story all day! Hopefully tomorrow I can post the first chapter. Stay tuned, and please give me suggestions for two boys they will meet. I want them to look "normal", so, human, and they will meet Vivian and Scarlet in the magic world. Maybe you could help me by filling out this form? Much obliged. Ps, they are all about 13/14.
Appearance (eyes, hair, build (slim, fat, muscular, ect.), skin)
Personality
Other
Also, I need a good ice witch; think white witch from Narnia and Elsa.
And I need a villain, he is going to be associated with darkness.
Cho, I am counting on you!
(June 12, 2016 - 2:56 pm)
The witch is also the queen of the magic world. Also, I would love if people wanted to suggest names and places for the magic world. It's going to have mermaids, oegres, werewolfs, elfs, etc. Please don't suggest names for the elves/mermaids ect.
(June 12, 2016 - 4:42 pm)
*grins*
I'm guessing you want me to design the world?
Appearance: Long white hair, icy blue eyes, pale skin, a youthful appearance to her. Looks somewhere around her mid twenties.
Personality: Cautious, determinated, a little cold to those she doesn't know well, but has a cheerful and firey spirit once you get to know her.
Other: N/A
(June 12, 2016 - 7:25 pm)
Sounds great Cho!
(June 13, 2016 - 6:20 am)
Thanks!
(June 13, 2016 - 11:22 am)
If she's supposed to be the queen, then I'd say she'd be in her early thirties.
(June 13, 2016 - 7:15 am)
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(June 12, 2016 - 3:34 pm)