Chatterbox: Inkwell

Okay, guys.  I’m not really into writing poems, but I’d like to give it a shot. 

Days and days go on

My life continues to spread

I lead a life of wavering pawns,

It is not a simple wish to the stars. 

For life and life itself is menacing

It gives you obstacles to go over.

As people continue to grow,

They will soon learn

That everyone is not as nice

As the world may seem

We all struggle to live life

The way in our dreams. 

For dreams are our fantasies

We know it for a fact

That we wake up each morning

And live our life by our temptations 

But at least we will always know

That even in the rough spots

Our faith will continue to grow

As long as our friends can fill in the gaps.  

 

How is that?  Not the best poem ever, but it’s all I’ve got.

submitted by Leah G.
(March 29, 2009 - 8:21 pm)

I like it! :)

submitted by Lena G, age 11
(March 30, 2009 - 7:31 am)

I really like it! :)

(I'm on at the exact same time as Allison!)
submitted by BellaTrix ✌ ♡
(April 4, 2009 - 10:19 am)

I like it, too! Especially the last four lines.

submitted by Allison P.
(April 4, 2009 - 10:14 am)