Mice RP!So i

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Mice RP!So i

Mice RP!

So it is a book I am writing. (I will be the three main characters.) So there is a mice village and it is in England. And the story takes place in the time of Columbus, the mice decide to (before the people) sail across the ocean...

Here Is The Charrie!!??Laughing

 Name: Teardrop

Age: (teen mouse, adult mouse, or elder)  teen

Sisters or brothers: Nightshade and Angeljoy

Out of time bye... Finish it later

 

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 1, 2016 - 6:14 pm)

Name: TearDrop 

Gender: She-Mouse

Age:Teen Mouse

Sisters or Brothers: sister is AngelJoy and brother is NightHunter

Job:(if any) part of the Mouse Council

Appearance: gray mouse

Personality: (optional)

Backstory: NO WAY that would give it away

Village:(Allee)(Loner) Allee

Other: Orphan 

 

Name:AngelJoy

Age:Teen Mouse

Gender:She-mouse

Sisters and brothers: sister TearDrop brother NightHunter

Job: helps around the village and orphanage

appearance: White mouse (spoiler if I said more)

Personality: (optional)

Backstory: NO

Village: Allee

Other: Orphan

 

Name:NightHunter

Age:teen mouse

Gender: he-mouse

Sisters and brothers: sisters TearDrop and AngelJoy

Job: General (So he is in the Mouse Council)

Appearance:Jet-black

Personality: (optional)

Backstory: still NO

Village: Allee

Other: Orphan

 

 

Here is the first few paragraphs

 

 

NightHunter and his sisters grew up in the orphanage until they where the oldest kids there (Appearance Appearance Blah Blah Blah) TearDrop was put in the Mouse Council and became well known in the small village. NightHunter became a general, he was also in the Mouse Council but for a different reason. AngelJoy helped around town and the orphanage... I will continue later 

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 2, 2016 - 3:02 pm)

Ok, so do you want something like this?

Name: Amberfire

Age: Teen 

Gender: Female mouse

Siblings: Unknown

Job:.....(What kind of jobs are there?)

Appearence: Pale brown with a white cresant moon on her forehead 

Personality: Curious, shy, kind of unsure of herself. Will watch another mouse for a long time before decideing to speak to him or her.

Backstory: Was found as an infant just outside the Allee village and was raised by an elderly she-mouse. Feels a strong attraction to some forbiden place... ships maybe? 

Village: Allee

Other: Orphan

If you don't like this tell me and we can fix it.

P.S. This is the first RP I have ever done!Smile 

submitted by Lyra S., age 12 I think, Can't remember what world
(February 2, 2016 - 9:20 pm)

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submitted by Vikki/Naturebaker, age ?, Catopia
(February 2, 2016 - 3:49 pm)

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submitted by Vikki/Naturebaker, age ?, Catopia
(February 2, 2016 - 8:23 pm)

Name: Storm  

Age: teen

Gender: she-mouse

Personility: she is feisty, speaks her mind, dosn't wear dresses, she's a pirate at heart 

Looks-like: dark gray mouse, white under belly, black eyes  

Backstory: Longbeard,(Richard), pirate: big brown mouse, long brown beard, black eyes

Snowdrop, old pirate, Mother: silvery white fur, black eyes  

Her mother met her father when there pirate ships went to war, she saw Longbeard and instanyly fell in love, her father's skipper a black mouse by the name Dark-fur was jelous of his captain. On a stormy night her mother gave birth, and Black-fur capented mutiny. He tossed Snowdrop's newly born babies into the sea and said, "You should have married me!" He then dashed off with his commrads in crime to kill Longbeard. Longbeard killed his "loyal" skipper and chained up Dark-fur's cronies. Then the storm stopped and he saw Snowdrop crying, holding her last baby.

Other: she carries her mother's old dagger, her mother works in the council

I think that's all!  

 

submitted by Moonfrost, age Who Cares?, Mars
(February 3, 2016 - 3:51 pm)
Notes

1. The names have to be two words such as GoldFoot or SilverWind

2. I forgot the other villages
Lura, Allee, Noma (There is an evil one but none of us are going to be them.)
3. There are leaders such as SilverWind, SpiritWind, DarkWind, and RiverWind (that died)Cry
Allee/SilverWind 
Lura/RiverWind
Noma/SpiritWind
DarkWind is evil 
4. If you have read Warriors then you know there is that place you go to become a (___)Star. Well in here there is Hidden Tree to become (___)Wind
5. Ocean is called the Never End.
Boat is vessel. 
@ MoonFrost, there are boats in legends about boats so far so I might need to change it a tiny bit but not a lot. (Is that OK?)
Thanks for reading.
submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 3, 2016 - 4:33 pm)

I got the villages wrong again

Toran/RiverWind
Allee/SilverWind
Lura/SpiritWind
Noma/BerryWind
All of the Wind spots are taken. 
Sorry
submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 3, 2016 - 4:48 pm)

How about... StormBringer 

What do you mean by change?  

submitted by Moonfrost, age Who Cares?, Mars
(February 3, 2016 - 5:12 pm)

I mean that you might come later in the book. Like you could be a native to the new land is that OK

submitted by Victoria, age ?, Catopia
(February 3, 2016 - 6:07 pm)

Yes, that's ok. 

submitted by Moonfrost, age Who Cares?, Mars
(February 4, 2016 - 5:20 pm)

Ok here is the correct town:

Toran
Instead of the last one
submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 3, 2016 - 4:43 pm)

So, is mine ok? And what jobs are there? Maybe AmberFire could be a gatherer who goes all over the Allee teretory and brings food (and information for the council) that she gets.

submitted by Lyra S., age 12 I think, Can't remember what world
(February 3, 2016 - 10:22 pm)

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submitted by Vikki, age ?, Catopia
(February 10, 2016 - 4:14 pm)