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These are just random poems I came up with. I don't usually like poetry, but I'm trying it. I've done some in the past. Sorry, if I copy anyone's idea or poem. Here goes:
Comes
A dog
comes
to save the day
A light
comes
to light the way
A flower
comes
to bloom in May
Conclusion
Everything comes
and everythings goes
what comes next
only God knows
Through the Air
Feathers
flying
through the air
Kitties
crying
in the square
Mice
prying
through the lair
some are unwelcome
and some are quite fair
If these poems confuse you or offend you, i'm very sorry. It's just something I thought up during school.
Plz comment, whether you like the poems or not. There will be more poems to come.
submitted by Mary C., age 12, Fleetwood, PA
(January 28, 2016 - 7:58 pm)
(January 28, 2016 - 7:58 pm)
Nice poems!!! :D
(January 29, 2016 - 12:37 am)
thx
(January 31, 2016 - 3:49 pm)
I like the mouse part :)
(January 29, 2016 - 12:51 pm)
yeah, me too.
(January 31, 2016 - 3:49 pm)
You certainly have great ideas! Poetry can be really hard at times, and I admire your courage to post your work and give poetry a try. However, you may want to try giving the rhymes a rest. Rhymes are hard, and when you can pull them off, they sound pretty good; however, when you decided that you wanted your poems to rhyme, it may have distracted you from conveying a thought, or feeling, in your poem. The mood of these poems aren't completely there/I can't exactly see what you're trying to get across... You have great ideas, but you may find it easier to write free-verse. It'll help your poems sound more complete! Hope you keep posting, and this advice helps! Happy writing!
(February 2, 2016 - 10:10 pm)
Thx! I know, but I like rhyming. lol. I like to dabble in nonsense poems and actual ones. I will try writing free-verse. Thank you for your advice!
(February 14, 2016 - 2:22 pm)
I'm gonna use your advise and try writing free-verse. Yet another thing i thought up during school (some of my best ideas I find when I'm doing school).
Cat Antics
Sam and Lucy
staring at me
their kitty antics
make me laugh
little playfights,
and the chasing
of swishing tails
racing through the halls
fast games of tags
batting at random things
miscellaneous starings
at nothing particular
callor bells atinkling
Sam and Lucy
Yes, I am a cat person. I have two cats named Sam and Lucy. I also have a fish and 14 chickens.
(February 16, 2016 - 7:55 pm)
YESSSSSS! CHICKENS FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!! I have five chickens and I love them so much!
I love chickens!!!!
(February 16, 2016 - 8:53 pm)
wow your poetry is great! It's like how they flowed and the rhyming part. Nad the themes were really nice. :D
(February 17, 2016 - 4:19 am)