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Ok, so I
Ok, so I was writing and kindof goofing, when all of a suddden thes popped out.
It's weird, and I don't know how I came up with it.
Plus, it's really short.
If I could fly
If I had wings
If I could
I would.
Whadda you think?
PS I like writing little poems like that, if you like this one maybe I'll post more.
submitted by Jenni T, age 12, Nowhere
(March 25, 2009 - 5:28 am)
(March 25, 2009 - 5:28 am)
I like it. It's simple, direct, and beautiful. Keep it up! :)
(March 25, 2009 - 10:59 am)
You know what that reminds me of? The song El Condor Pasa by Simon & Garfunkel. The lyrics are:
I'd rather be a sparrow than a snail
Yes I would, if I only could, I really would
I'd rather be a hammer than a nail...
And so on.
(March 27, 2009 - 7:25 am)
I LOOVE that song!!!!
Yeah, it does remind me of it, too, now I think about it..LOL thanks, Wolfgang. I was trying to remember what it reminds me of............
(March 27, 2009 - 2:13 pm)
Yay!! Another S & G fan!!
(March 28, 2009 - 6:24 am)
My favorite of their songs is the one that goes "Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk to you again." It is an awesome song, but I can't remember the title!!!
Jenni, the title is "The Sound of Silence."
Old Cricket
(March 28, 2009 - 3:38 pm)
ME TOO!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!! I also like "I Am a Rock" and "The Boxer". Do you know those?
(March 29, 2009 - 2:18 am)
Nope. Actually, the only songs I really know by them are those two songs, "Sound of Silence" and "El Condor Pasa" or whatever they're called. But I'll look them up on YouTube and tell you if I like them!!
(March 29, 2009 - 12:52 pm)
Thanks, Old Cricket!!!!!
(March 29, 2009 - 8:07 am)
Nice poem!
(March 29, 2009 - 5:43 pm)