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The flowers pop up,
their colors are ravishing,
the stream along side them,
and the soiled mud right by that.
With the two little feet,
of a child so young,
and her shoes in the mud by the water,
she wades into the stream.
Up on the bank,
kneeling down quite low,
with two women-sized-feet,
and hard working hands,
would be the young girls mother.
The young girl falls,
into the stream,
but gets up just fine,
and laughs at herself.
The mother grabs a towel,
she raps it around her young child,
and brings her inside,
for something to
© Maggie S. 2009
submitted by Maggie S., age 13, St. Paul, MN :D
(March 23, 2009 - 7:27 pm)
(March 23, 2009 - 7:27 pm)
It's beautifully simple. But I think it got cut a little, if you know what I mean.
(March 24, 2009 - 11:34 am)
Yeah, I think so too... Oh, and I think you meant "wraps" not "raps".
(March 25, 2009 - 11:32 am)