Writing class!!
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Writing class!!
Writing class!!
I wanted to make a writing class for the new writers and the old. All you have to do is write your name. I will make a list and once a week I will post a new thing for you to work on. I can do it sooner too. But anyway if you join you need to write your stories on this thread. I will post the first challenge now.
Lesson 1: Pick one of the starting sentences below and write a short story starting with it.
1: The ghost was eating a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.
2: I have one brown eye and one green eye. The brown eye sees truth, but the green eye sees much more.
3: "Be nice," my father said. "After all he is your brother."
4: I am the most famous 12-year-old in the United States.
5: If somebody didn't do somthing soon there was going to be a catastrophe.
6: Ms. Fleming's wing had gone missing.
Good luck. I am going to post too.
(November 3, 2015 - 9:42 pm)
It was a witchy house: that quiet grey paint, those squinting shuttered
windows, and the empty porch rocker that rocked, rocked, rocked, day
and night. Everyone said the house was abandoned, but I knew better than that.
(Journalist's intuition.)
At Halloween, kids would dare each other to touch the doorpost, and afterwards they would run away screaming. There were ghost stories about that house. Even adults would gossip about the old lady that used to live there and the sad tragedy that happened to her. Everyone knew it was haunted.
Except me. I didn't know it was haunted at all.
(Journalist's intuition.)
I think my mom secretly believed it was haunted, even though she's an adult. She would never let me go near it, and she would pale at the mention of it's name: Witchy Manor.
The first thought that came to my head when I heard that name was "Wow, someone's creative." But Anyways, my mom wouldn't let me go near it.
But there was a great story going on in that house, and I was going to be the one to discover it.
(Journalist's intuiation.)
Maybe the newspaper would even publish my story! Now that would be something. So in the middle of the night, I got dressed in all black and packed my bag full of supplies. I sneaked out the door and into the night.
At the house, the rocking chair was rocking back and forth, back and forth. As always. That was the first mystery to be solved. Something told me to look behind the chair.
(Journalist's intuition.)
There was a solar panel. Yes, a solar panel. The chair was attached to it. That's the cause.
But who would go to so much trouble for a chair?
I went inside the house. I searched verywhere, but it was pretty much abandoned. I went upstairs. With every step I took, the stairs would creak. Except one.
I decided to open the one stair that didn't creak.
(Journalist's intuition.)
Inside, there were papers. I nearly fell down the stairs I was so excited! I turned them over and... they were blank. Big bummer. But I stuffed them into my bag. Maybe it was invisible ink???
I skipped over the broken stair and climbed up the rest. I heard a noise. A loud noise. It sounded like the clanging of chains on a prisoner. I gulped, but I pressed on. I turned the corner. The noise got louder. I opened the door to the room where the noise was coming from, and-
A little kitten stared at me and mewed. I laughed at the sight of him in the middle of all the pots and pans scattered around the floor. I scooped him up and put him in a bag. I knew he would be my new forever friend.
The scariest part of this was explaining my new pet to my mom.
The mystery of Witchy Manor has yet to be solved. The papers? The solar panel?
But I know I'll be back, and when I am, I'll find the story of a lifetime. I know it.
Journalist's intuition.
(November 8, 2015 - 4:15 pm)
The ghost was eating a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. Straweberry jelly, to be exact, and the extra-crunchy sort of peanut butter, which was his favorite. As he popped the last gooey, sticky, piece of sandwich into his mouth, he heard a cough. He turned around. "Who's there?"
Nothing was. The ghost shrugged and got up to make another sandwich. Hmm, he thought. Perhaps grilled cheese on rye. He opened the bread drawer and to his dismay saw that the only loaf left was sourdough. The ghost hated sourdough. Grumbling, he slammed it shut.
"Why are you eating so many sandwiches?" Someone asked. He didn't even turn around as he stared angrily at the drawer.
"I haven't eaten in one hundred seventy nine years." The ghost answered irritably.
"Why now?" The voice asked again, curiously. It was a little girl's voice, sweet, high, and gentle. The ghost glanced over his shoulder. She was sitting on the table. Rather, floating above it. She was a ghost too! He had never seen another one... like him... he had spent one hundred and seventy nine years drifting alone, mournfully, wailing to the wind.
"Because. It's obvious I'm staying here forever, I might as well get fed." Apples. The ghost thought. Maybe I should have some apples.
"It's not YOUR food!" The ghost girl asked, her transparent braids swinging. "This belong to some Living One."
"Who cares?" The ghost snapped. "LEAVE ME ALONE!" Then he glared at her. The meek, wide-eyed, innocent look she gave him was familier. Too familier.
"I'm Rebecca." The girl said gently. "Hi, daddy."
The ghost howled as the memories came flooding back with a torrent of feeling so strong he dropped the apple. Sickness. Terror. Leaning on the bed of a pretty, dark haired woman as her breath was sucked away for the final time. A small, cheerful girl fell into nothingness. Rebecca. Dark. Run. Far away. Stop. End it. NOW.
"Becky!" He sobbed.
"Daddy!" The girl threw herself at him. "Let's go home now." The ghost sighed in relief. Everything was okay. He held Rebecca's hand tightly as the kitchen spun into nothingness and a new, bright, lighted, happy place focused in front of his eyes.
~~~~~~~
"CAROLINE!" Mom bellowed. I picked myself out of bed. "Whaaat?"
"No more midnight snacks!" Mom yelled. "We have no peanut butter, and only sourdough left. You know I hate sourdough..."
~~~~~~~
(November 8, 2015 - 4:55 pm)
The bear charged! Its muscles strained with an ongoing forward thrust, and the wind flattened its fur against its skin. Its eyes were roaming madly, and a bubble of spit grew at the corner of its mouth. I curled myself into a tiny ball of pure fright, waiting for the roar of impact to hit.
But it didn't. I felt a whoosh of air, but no collision. I peeked through semi-closed eyes, and saw the bear trot off through a gate in the wooden fence. To my amazement, a stick was clenched in its jaws! "Good boy, Patty," said a voice off in the distance.
I got up gingerly. Every inch of my new Levi's was grass-stained, and I felt a stinging on each of my palms. I followed the voice, softly creeping along the fence until I reached the gate.
I will finish this tomorrow.
(November 8, 2015 - 4:59 pm)
Random prompts I came up with!
1. "Uh, hi, yeah, it's me, <insert name here>. And five kids, except one of them's hurt bad...can I come in?"
2. She swore right then that if he was here after all, if he'd gone back on his word, she would haul both him and the boy before the Council and demand that they take their oaths as master and apprentice right then and there.
3. The surprising thing was not so much that the stick had sparked- indeed, that was actually no surprise to any in attendance. What had everyone's jaws on the floor was who it had sparked for.
4. If the stinkin' government hadn't interfered, <insert name here> thought over his third cocktail, I might actually be somebody.
5. Sweat rolled down her back in rivulets. The heat was punishing, even with the trees hanging low on either side of the dusty track. "Johnny," she panted, "Are...you sure...trying to push...the cart...all the way...to the Dunstables'...was such...a good...idea?!"
(November 8, 2015 - 5:45 pm)
Thank you all for joining my writing classes. We have been going for a week now. We now have 16 people who have joined. Anyway, It is Monday and so it is time for a new lesson.
So next we are going to write a short story with the genre that I chose. I am going to pick the fairy tale genre. You are going to pick your favorite fairy tale and rewrite it. If you want an extra challenge, you car rewrite the story with five of the words below.
Earthy, gingery, satiny, murmur, chatter, ripple, gurgling, flashlight, munch, locket, honeysuckle, gargoyle, pendulum, amble, plummet, wavering, crimson, azure, tawny, howl.
For the poets. You are going to pick your favorite number and write a poem about it. It can be about what it reminds you of or what you makes it your favorite number.
Happy writing.
(November 9, 2015 - 4:50 pm)
I dont know if I can call Fairy tales, but I'd like to call Red Riding Hood! I'll write later.
(November 9, 2015 - 6:52 pm)
Sorry, but I don't know if I'm comfortable rewriting someone else's story that they wrote. And some are too gruesome for me to repeat. Maybe for those that feel as I do, we could create folk tales or fables? Please consider this request. And I find it funny that you chose "munch" as one of your words because one of the main characters of the novel I'm writing is named Munch. He's a talking chipmunk.
(November 9, 2015 - 9:30 pm)
Here goes
I have one brown eye and one green eye. The brown eye sees the truth, and the green eye sees much more. It sees hope.
If you have ever looked through a tissue you can understand how it feels, only now the tissue is a blue-grren color ans the image befor is rippling like a light skarf in the autumn wind. That's what I see. That's what all others wish to see. That's why I wish to be bling.
To me hope is as frendly as fear. And fear, in this case, is not my friend. Say you want a dog, you hope for a dog. If you were me, if you had my green eye, you wold every day see youself with that dog. That perfect dog. Then suddenly it would be gone, poof, just like that. Your dreams would be ripped apart right infront of you.
Now is when most people would ask,
"well what do you see?" So if you are wondering, I see me, happy me, alive me. That's right, I was never born, never alive. I am the magic woven into the world. the hope woven into fear. and I am afriad, very afraid. Hope canot be so intense. If it were it wold overwhelm the world. All fear would disappear. And in this case fear is your friend.
And soon, very soon, I will be born, born to the world.
(November 10, 2015 - 1:52 pm)
No don't die
(November 13, 2015 - 7:49 am)
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Fun activity: Find the four bottoms!
(November 13, 2015 - 10:28 pm)
Thanks, Scylla. My eyes just exploded.
(November 14, 2015 - 12:08 am)
I'm so sorry! Not to be rude or anything, but are you legally blind now?
(November 14, 2015 - 10:04 am)
OK, so my last idea didn't amount to much so I am going to make another thing. I know it isn't Monday yet but it is close enough. So the next challenge for the writers is going to be: I am going to pick thirty-five different and strange words. You are going to pick ten of your favorites and write a short story with them. Enjoy.
Poets, your challenge is going to be: write a poem about the last place you went.
For writers here are your words: Devise ( plan or invent by careful thought. ) pungent, musty, mellow, velvity, rasp, hubub, stutter, gurgling, tomes, orbit, nebula, radiant, careens, traverse, flutter, baffle, bioluminescent, pendulem, flash, soar, canter, rotuned, starred, crimson, ruby, beige, buttercup, azure, peacock, amber, mint, emerald, tawny, perl,
(November 15, 2015 - 5:24 pm)
I won't have much time to write right now so this is part one. Can i use more than 10 words?
Estrael stroked the velvety feathers of the tawny owl's back. She was surrounded by birds of all sorts- peacocks, owls like the one she was stroking, hawks, eagles, swallows, starlings, herons, and many others. Estrael gazed into the owl's amber eyes and it in turn gazed into her azure ones. She had come to the aviary in search of a familiar and knew that this owl was hers. The moment she saw it, she felt a bond go out from her heart to its. The owl hooted softly and fluttered up to her shoulder. It was a heavy weight, but Estrael felt that it was supposed to be there, like it was something she was missing. Girl and owl walked out of the aviary, Estrael ensuring that no birds got out of the glass building.
That's all I can do for now, time for school bye!
(November 16, 2015 - 10:42 am)
I
am the Mother.
I
am she who inhabits the sky, who personifies the sky, who is the sky. I am the sun
around which this planet orbits, falling forever and ever in the first of the
great cycles; I am the void it falls through, the nothingness and Chaos they
speak of at the limits of existence. I am the countless stars that spangle
night's imagined blackness, red dwarfs and nebulas and the fiercely radiant
blue-white giants, that they imagine to be distant but are actually far more so
than they can comprehend. I am the crimson of dawn, the azure of high noon, the
velvety dark and pearlescent moons that traverse it, bearing silent witness to
them, my progeny. Blood of my rain, flesh of my sunlight, spirit of that
invisible breath that binds us all.
For
I am Wife and I am Parent, but first and foremost, I am the Mother.
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I
am the Father.
I
am he who inhabits the earth, who personifies the earth, who is the earth. I am this
planet, the ponderous rotund breadth and depth of it, from solid outer rock to
the molten-metal inferno at its very heart. I am the land the way they
picture me, changing as the seasons turn in the second of the great cycles, the
quickening and slowing of a subliminal rhythm, deep but somehow immediate. I
am the gurgling streams, the musty caves, the grasslands stretching endlessly
on to the horizon. I am the soil that nourishes the grass, which in turn
nourishes their prey, the animals hunted by them, my progeny. Blood of my
meltwater, flesh of my clay, spirit of that invisible breath that binds us all.
For
I am Husband and I am Parent, but first and foremost, I am the Father.
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I
am the Child.
I
am Life; there is no other way to describe me. I am the flame at the center of
everything, stars and stone alike. I am the plants, the insects, the reptiles,
the avians, the mammals, the uncountable other lifeforms far smaller than the
finest grains of sand. I am all that crawls, lumbers, flutters, soars, runs,
swims, or floats with a current. I am the secret drumbeat underlying all, the
instincts for survival that drive the third of the great cycles, of birth and
maturity and reproduction, on to death and back again. I am the balance, for
all life comes to balance in the end: though all living things must perish,
still I will remain, for I am tenacious beyond imagining, and so are they, my
progeny. Blood of my blood, flesh of my flesh, spirit of that invisible breath
that binds us all.
For
I am Son and I am Daughter, but first and foremost, I am the Child.
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Given-word count: 12! Yay!
(November 17, 2015 - 11:11 am)