Don't die on me! DON"T DIE ON ME!

I'd comment, but I was the last one. Why don't you comment? I mean, I could comment again, I have an idea, but someone else probably should comment first.

OK, I'll try to post more often, like now, for instance!

I'll have to read it, first, but I will try to post more often. 

Working on it.....

Ranger~

"You will be deleted."

"l'd like to see you try." 

The Cyberman raises a hand. "You will be deleted." 

"YOU WILL BE EXTERMANATED!" The Cyberman turns in suprise. "You will be deleted."

The Dalek fires. The Cyberman is fried.

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l'm not quite sure which side this Dalek is on, as l am confused about the whole thing.....

@Tardisrider: I'm sorry! I wasn''t trying to force you to stay or anything. I was just trying to help.

Doctor~

I was crawling through an air duct. In a spaceship. Holding my sonic Screwdriver in my hand, with about five dalek troopers, a dalek scout, some of my companions that hadn't been captured, and some other time lords with me. Things were going about there normal buisness. After we'd formulated our plan, Dalek Zhane had come with some  of his best men and a scout along with us to save the others, he had left the rest of the refugees behind to call renforcements.

"Aha! this is the vent into the main passage into hte prison ward." I said as I sonic unscrewed the vent. We dropped into the passage.

"We will go first." Said Zhane. The scout ran ahead. As we walked, All of a sudden, we heard crashing footsteps coming towards us. "Combat positions." Zhane ordered. Three of the daleks droped to their knees and raised their guns. The other two Raised their guns as well, but remained standing. They made a wall against the cybermen. Al of a sudden, the Cybermen came clomping around the corner.

"EXTERMINATE!" Zhnae Roared. Blue jets of energy blasted out of teh dalek's guns. The Cybermen were caught off guard for a moment, just enough time for the Daleks to down seven of teh twenty. "We need to rush them! I shouted to Zhane. He nodded. TAC ran in between  the Cybermen's legs, meowing loudly. That distacted the Cybermen again, allowing teh troopers to down a few more.

"Advance!" Zhane shouted. The Ranger and teh author pulled out there weapons and started to blasted away at them. I ran up to the nearest Cyerman and pulled out my screwdriver. I opened up the the robot's  chest cover and studied it.

"Oh, no." I siad.

"Come on, hurry doctor! The Cybermen reiforcements are coming!" Hollared the Author. I charged after them, taking aiece of the Robot with me. I caught up to the others.

I held out my hand while we were running and showed them the particulare piece that interested me the most.

"the Cybermen,"I panted,"look at this piece."

"What are you saying, it's just a robot part." Siad the Ranger.

"These Cybermen weren't acting like htey should, it was like they were being controlled. This piece here is covered in a very strange kind of energy. It's effecting the Cybermen's actions and thoughts."

"So?" Said TAC.

"The Cybermen are being controlled by the Sight."

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Is that OK with you guys? Did I use the Sight corectly? I thougth that Nessa might could be affected by the sight, too. Hence her strange vision. Is that OK? 

I imagined the Sight to be a force that none of them know about until it tells them. And it actually doesn't control things (though it making its own cybermen is pretty brilliant). It separates people, and shows them hallucinations of their strengths, weaknesses, hopes, and fears last, to weaken its opponant. They probably shouldn't know what it is until it tells them. But it's ok. Oh, and you forgot, Ranger is with Mysterious, and Ginger is the only non timelord currently with the Doctor, Author, and Danielle.

Author-

I freeze for a moment before Mysterious pulls me forward again. The Sight. Nothing good can come from this. I thought the Sight was just a story to get naughty Time Children to behave. Eat your vegetables or the Sight will get to you!

If you don't brush your teeth, I'm telling the Sight. But no. This is real. There is nothing I fear more than the sight. That and bad books that I'm forced to read for school. Now that I think about it, I can feel this presence, this awful laugh in the baack of my mind. And it's telling me that I'm next. Then the Cyberman grabs me, and I black out. Or so I thin.

I'm in a big, glass bottle. I'm lying in the middle, asleep, until a loud noise awakens me.

"I've got eyes on Author." The Doctor! These must be radio transmisssions. I suddenly see him outside the bottle staring in at me. He looks upset, maybe even angry.

"How long would it take to free her?" Demands Mysterious. He appears outside the glass as well. The Doctor shrugs, his expression blank.

"Too long. Besides, she's not any help to the team. We could just leave her behind." My eyes widen. My heart quickens. But they turn their backs, walking away into the darkness beyond.

My worst fear.

Then I wake up.

Danielle ~

I climb through the rest of the vents. I kind of got lost from everybody else, thanks to some fog. Why there was fog in an airshaft, I don't know. Finally, I find where they went off to. The Doctor is holding a glowing thing, the Author looks terrified, and TAC and Ginger look confused. "So," I say to break the silence, "What did I miss?" The Doctor is about to speak, when the Author says, "nothing important. We just beat some cybermen." I'm about to reply, when one of the cybermen comes to life and grabs the Author, knocks her out, and runs away with her. I attempt a chase, when Ginger holds me back. "What are you doing!? We need to get her!" "We don't want you captured as well though!" 

Hello? 

C'mon! I don't want to post because I was one of the last, somebody please, Don't let this thread die!

(Takes out difibulators and zaps RP) Don't die on me! DON'T DIE ON ME!"

Just playing around. I'll post the next part of the story tomorrow. 

Sooooooo. .....