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Brynne and Zoe
Brynne and Zoe are working together on a nature poem.
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Follow all Cricket rules!
Please no fighting!
Please, don't one person write the whole poem! Work it out between you if your gonna write one section each, one person be the editor and add details, etc! But remember, this is a teamwork thing! No writer left behind! :D
Keep the poem pg!
Please keep to your genre!
:) Thanks guys!
submitted by GloWorm
(March 17, 2009 - 7:37 pm)
(March 17, 2009 - 7:37 pm)
Tiny diamond droplet
Crystal clear orb
Shimmering in the sunshine
Twinkling in the light
Quivering on the
Very edge of the leaf
Sorry, I know that was two lines. It didn't sound right in one.
(May 27, 2009 - 2:40 pm)
Tiny diamond droplet
Crystal clear orb
Shimmering in the sunshine
Twinkling in the light
Quivering on the
Very edge of the leaf
Peeking over the side
(June 4, 2009 - 1:48 pm)
Tiny diamond droplet
Crystal clear orb
Shimmeriing in the sunshine
Twinkling in the light
Quivering on the
Very edge of the leaf
Peeking over the side
Almost ready to
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Down
(June 6, 2009 - 8:15 pm)
I love making poems like that where how you place the words actually makes it so you can see what you are trying to say.
Just one eensy weensy problem: I have no clue what to add!?!?!
(June 7, 2009 - 3:24 pm)