that's not how

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that's not how

that's not how things are supposed to work -- 

 

just because

you don't want to explode

doesn't mean

you should

blow up

someone

e

l

s

submitted by Madeline, age 14
(August 6, 2015 - 10:45 am)

Do you mind an edit?

 

Honestly, this should be a quote, not a poem. "Else" does not look good written one letter at a time vertically, and the meter seems chunky.

Just because you 

don't want to explode

doesn't mean

you should blow up

someone

else

 

 

OR

 

Just because you don't want to explode

doesn't mean you should blow up someone else. 

-Madeline T. 

 

 

submitted by Brookeira
(August 7, 2015 - 12:32 pm)