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Short Stories S-...Thread

Short Stories S-...Thread. Can't think of another S word that would work. *Le sigh*

Okay, this is exactly what it sounds like. A short stories thread. We need one of theses. Because I really want to hear all of your amazing little stories!!

I have a few in mind. I never wrote them down...but here goes... (I'll only do the longest one for now)

 

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It was one note. Only one.

I covered it up so well you would never be able to tell I missed it, but it was enough.

Mother could tell. She could tell because she had spent every spare second listening to me practice. Listening to me practice for five hours each day. I could see the dissapointment on her face. Father couldn't tell because he had work all day, every day. Mother leaned over and whispered to him, obviously telling him my mistake. His slight smile turned into a frown, at least until my flute teacher looked at them. Both of my parent smiled, until we reached the car.

I had finished my song well, I had played perfectly, as far as anyone could tell. My flute teacher had noticed, but complimented me because I covered it up so well.

My parents' reaction was different. Immensly different. 

"Honey..." I remember mother saying, her tones harsh, and cold.

I looked down at the heels mom made me wear. "Yes...I know. But-"

"No buts!!!" Mom screeched, even dad looked aghast.

"You made a mistake! That is UNACCEPTABLE!!!" I am not exagerating when I write that in caps. The car next to us sped up, the driver cast a quick glance at us. A pale woman with lots of kids in the back of her car.

Father nodded and said, "Darling. If you want to be as good as Grams you need to perfect it."

I don't want to be as good as Grams.

~~~~~~~

I gently set my flute case on it's shelf, then sat down on my bed. Mother had grounded me from my books. The only comfort I had nowadays. I buried my head in my hands and sobbed inwardly, for I had no more tears left in me. Also, because last time mom caught me sobbing, she slapped me.

Mother walks in, her makeup smeared from the previous fight in the car. "Practice Kaitlyn. You need to practice. I have a few hours for you to perfect your song."

"Mom!" I stood up, meeting her in the eye. "I just had my concert. It is over with, and the songs I played? Going on the shelf. I am done with them. I made a mistake. So what? No. I am tired. I will not practice today."

Mom's face turned red and I recoiled, terrified. "You need to fix your mistake! Then write an apology to your flute teacher because you messed up."

"No!" I shouted, suprised at the power of my own voice. "I. Am. Done. For. Today."

Mother stood taller, staring down at me from under her long, crooked nose. "I said, practice."

"What can you do?" I stood on my tiptoes just a little, as to not make it so obvious. "You already took away my books."

"No friends for a month!" She shouted.

Anger boiled inside me and I stepped closer to her. "I HAVE no friends! WHY? Because you make me practice for five hours a day and you never let me leave the house!!!!!!!!" By now my throat was dry, and I glared at her.

She hesitated, a mistake, because it allowed me to see she was scared, terrified even. "...OUT!" She pointed to the door and I stormed out, shoving past my dad, who was obviously watching the whole thing.

And that was how I met Trevor.

We met in front of my house. He had stopped, because he heard the shouting, heard every, single, wretched word. We spoke for hours, until he had to leave for dinner. We spoke at my tree, the only place in the world I could find peace.

"That sounds terrible..."

I nodded, looking down. "I picked up flute, not only because my parents pressured me, but because I always loved flutes. I was obsessed with them. But then..." I sighed. 

And I laughed that day.

Trevor had stood up over me, looking down at me and pretended to scold me. "Practice, practice, practice." He said in a such a rediculous, high-pitched voice that I could't help but laugh.

I wiped the tears from my eyes and smiled at him, "Actually that's pretty accurate."

~~~~~~~~~

We started getting together. Mom allowed it because he was an AMAZING piano player, and the only one that could keep up with my playing. He practiced two hours, and practiced because he loved it.

I could tell I was good on flute, but he would have been better if he played flute. I practiced more, but he practiced for the love of it. I told him so one day.

He just nodded and looked up at the night sky.

"It is a terrible thing..." I whispered. "And I hate it. I despise it, dread it."

He nodded again, but turned his gaze to me. "Thats why I'm here."

I smiled at him and nodded. "Thank you for not listening to your headphones on full-blast that day."

He let out a laugh, warm and true. "Amen."

~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Practice."

Not again, was the thought that flashed through my mind.

"You need to practice," mom stated. "If you want to be like your grandomther you need to practice."

"What if I don't want to practice?" I asked.

She turned to me, her gaze strong. "Of course you want to be like her. That is why you play flute."

I felt anger boiling up inside me yet again. "Mom. I wanted to play the flute because I liked flute. Now I never want to hear the blasted thing again."

"Nonsense!!" Mom shouted, glaring at me.

"Nonsense! I'll show you nonsense!!" I shouted, grabbing my flute case.

She stared, terrified, as I threw Grandmother's priceless flute out the window. Out the window of a three-story building. From the third floor. It was in it's case sure, but it probably wouldn't survive the fall. Mom screamed and pushed me aside, like a toy. Like a doll. Like an outgrown doll.

I ran out of the house, tears streaming down my face. I ran to the seaside, sobbing wildly.

And I stopped. Stopped at the edge of a cliff.

My shoulders shook with sobs and my hair stuck to my soaked face.

I jumped.

I jumped those ten feet, landing in the water. The water was colder than I expected, but it felt amazing. It was cool against my hot skin. It washed the tears from my face. (In a way.) My eyes stung as I stared ahead, blinking never, watching the water slowly get darker. My lungs started to hurt and I knew I had to swim up. So swim up I did.

But I made a vow. A vow to be different. Never again to be such a pushover, and a vow to come completly clean with my parents. No matter what.

I broke the surface, gasping for air and expecting for peace. Instead there were boat motors, and shouts of joy. Someome reached down, and I looked up. Seeing Trevor I grabbed his hand and he lifted me to the safety of the boat.

"Someone saw you jump. We were all so worried." He whispered.

"I wasn't under that long..."

"You call a minute not that long?! It seemed like forever!"

"A-a minute?" I whispered, startled.

He nodded, then tilted his head. "You look cold."

I nodded, I was shivering all over. I looked him in the eyes and took a deep breath. "Trevor...I am different now."

He stared for a moment, his green eyes understanding, and then wrapped me in a warm, comforting hug. I had noticed my parents before, and smiled slightly at the though of them staring. Maybe jealous? Maybe. 

Trevor whispered something in my ear I will always remember for life. It sent warm chills through my shivering body, and I felt all fuzzy inside.

"I exchanged your mom's sugar for salt."

Boy, was that a riot. 

~~~

Hope you liked it! It was..okay...I think...Actually..this was one of the best stories I ever wrote. It just kinda came to me while I was in bed one night. This is where I wrote it! 

Feel free to write all the stories you want! 

Sicily says ymam. Y mam..Y mom? Uh..I don't know why her mom was like that... 

submitted by Katydid
(August 4, 2015 - 1:14 am)

That was over the top, super duper fantastic, amazing, and phenomenal! I give it 100 stars!

submitted by Buggy
(August 4, 2015 - 10:04 am)

TOP

submitted by Top!
(August 4, 2015 - 10:29 am)

TOP

submitted by Top!
(August 4, 2015 - 11:04 am)
submitted by Thanks!
(August 4, 2015 - 3:36 pm)

"Wait Amahi!" Titi shouts from the doorway as I walk towards the helicopter.

I stop in my tracks and turn around. Titi runs towards me, clutching an aqua (my favorite color) satin bag in her hand. 

"Here Amahi, I got you sumpting!" she says excitedly.

She's bouncing up and down on her feet, waiting for me to open it. First I read the note tied to the bag.

"To the best sister ever. I'll miss you. Love Titana" is written in a child's handwriting.

Then I untie the white ribbon and reach into the bag. I pull out 6 strips of my favorite sticky coconut candy wrapped in shiny plastic.

"You always say I'm the sweetest, spesh-l-ist, little girl in the world, so I got you sumpting sweet an' spesh-il," she says happily

"Thanks sweet n' special." This stuff is delicious.

"The last things the bestest!" she replies.

I reach in again and pull out a handmade clay sea turtle painted the exact color of Titi's sea green eyes. Its shell is huge,and its legs are all different sizes, but it's beautiful to me.

"Flip it over, flip it over!" Titi says, still bouncing around.

I do, and discover why the shell is so big. Titi has lined it with bubble wrap and stuffed in a silver bracelet with three charms. One is a heart ❤️ with the word sisters  on it, and two are pink Hawaiian flowers

submitted by Dragonrider
(August 4, 2015 - 9:29 pm)

Aww, that's adorable! I wish I was that close with my sister!

submitted by Katydid
(August 4, 2015 - 9:50 pm)

Here is another one! It's about bullying...and it's really sad...

I remember the young girl's pale face as she emerged from the school. She was only a year younger than me, but was short and had long, black hair. She was beautiful, except for the tears streaming down her face. She looked at me that day with her sad, blue eyes. I could have stopped her and asked her why she was in tears. But I didn't. And I sat it silence many nights wondering why?

Why didn't I do something?

You see, no one ever saw her again after that day. Her parents apparently were at work until five, and it was 3:30 when I saw her. I was the last to see her. Ever.

I found out why she never came to school again after that. I had assumed her parents had withdrew her from the school when she went home in tears. But that wasn't true. The story was in the newspaper. The headline was,  "Bully Victim Dissapears." 

I read that article many times, I kept the article with me the rest of my life, the words blurred with old tears.

Talia Jameson came home from school one day, her parents at work. When her parents got home they never went to Talia's room to check up on her, for being in her room was a usual thing for Talia. Her parents only noticed something was wrong when they called her down for dinner. She didn't respond. The mother, assuming Talia was asleep, went to check on her. She screamed, sending her husband dashing up the stairs. When he entered the room his wife was on the floor, bawling and holding a small peice of white paper. James Jameson stared down, his eyes fearful and bent down next to his wife. She, still in tears, held out the paper to him. James stared, mortified, then enveloped his wife in a hug. 

The words on that page were something I swear I could have stopped, if only I had stopped the girl and asked a question.

And it was only one word.

One word written in large, shaky letters.

Goodbye.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

And here is another sad story...I feel bad now...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The little girl laughed and ran around, her delicate, golden curls flying behind her. A young man, only in his early twenties, watched, a sad smile resting upon his handsome face. The little girl, who it seemed you could touch and break in half, was laughing, without a care in the world. Laughing like there was no tommorow.

A thought rushed to the mans head and he looked at his feet, frowning.

His little girl walked up and hugged his sturdy legs with a concerned exspresion. "Daddy?"

He smiled and knelt down, bringing his sturdy face close to her deathly pale one. "Yes Sugar?"

"Why are you sad?" She looked into his eyes with her big, brown eyes.

"Because the world is a terrible place Honey."

"But daddy, it isn't here. Right here is good. Right here is happy. This is my place." She looked around them at the small field surrounded by trees.

Daddy smiled and laughed, his eyes blurring with tears. "Yes Honey. Happy place."

She reached out with her frail hand and touched his cheek. "Then why are you crying?"

"Oh Darling..." He enveloped her in a hug, tears streaming down his face.

The little girl didn't know why, but she decided to cry too. Daddy was crying in this happy place. It wasn't a happy place anymore. 

Her father hugged her tighter, the happy moment before was gone. He took a deep breath. He had to stay strong for his little girl. His wife was gone, his little girl was the only thing he had. He had to be brave until the end. His little girl loved this place, it had always been the two's retreat when they needed alone time.

Soon it would be the father's retreat.

It wasn't a happy place anymore. 

~~~~~~~~~

:(

It's too sad...here is a happy story.

~~~~~~~~~

She threw sparkles everywhere, bringing a smile to the world. 

 

 

 

submitted by Katydid
(August 5, 2015 - 12:55 am)

I don't actually have sister, I have a little brother that is quite often terribly annoying. I thought of that story off the top of my head and it came out much better than I thought it would.

submitted by Dragonrider
(August 5, 2015 - 7:23 am)

This is completely and honestly off the top of my head, so let's see how it turns out. I don't usually write short stories.

In. Out. In. Out.

The sun dips into the crashing waves, the burning ball of fire setting the sky ablaze as it sets, orange light covering all I can see. 

For the first time in two years, I can sit quietly and watch the sun set.

"Ariel?"  I whirl around, and curse the wind spirits that whisper in my ears. "Begone with you! Out, I say! Out!"

I hear their giggles as they retreat away from me. They never used to do that. They used to bow, or flit away. I am not a target.

Did being a servant do something to me?

I look at my hands, the brightness of them slowly fading as the sun sinks ever deeper. These hands have done many things now, so many things, from the time I was created to now- Grabbing seagulls, shooting sparks, shooing pesky spirits; pushing ropes and pounding on the tree, summoning and scolding and doing more magic I had ever done in my life.

Prospero...

He said that he loves me. Reluctant though he was, he said it, and I sensed the truth. He loves me, he does.

And the many times I said I hated him and wanted to be free again, I was lying.

Where is he now? In the far-off place they call Milan. He left me without a second glance, and it broke my heart to see them go, sailing in their ship- the ship that I mended, that I tore apart- back so he could be ruler of the place. Did he not rule enough already? Does he not miss me?

"Ariel." This time it is real, but it is not the voice I seek. My eyes tear away from the sun and into the hideous face of the monster they call Caliban.

"Stay away, eggshell," I growl, "I'm not in the mood."

"Missing your master, are you?" he chuckles. "Well, here's what I think of him-"

And with that, he spits at my feet.

My reaction is immediate and I'm not fully aware of doing it; all I know is one moment I'm above him and the next he's lying bleeding under my feet.

"Never," I say, softly and warningly, "never insult Prospero in front of me." 

And I know what I must do.

My feet rise from the ground, slowly at first, then faster and faster, over the seas and through the waves, flying towards the sun.

I will go to him.

____

Sorry, turned into a Tempest sequel! :P

submitted by St.Owl, age Recarnated, Everywhere
(August 5, 2015 - 6:31 pm)

So cool!

submitted by OtR
(August 6, 2015 - 5:33 am)

I wrote this a couple years ago...

Natalie and Me

By Abigail C.

 

 

I have a friend named Natalie.

 

She came to the library this Friday, The library is where I work.

 

She runs in with a big grin, right up to me.

 

I smile and look at the books she returns. 

 

“ You read so fast,” I say.

 

Natalie smiles and replies; 

“I just can’t keep away!”

 

Then she skips off to the shelves.

 

 

When Natalie comes back she checks out her books, 

 

Then gives me her library card. 

 

She asks me if I know of some good books for her brothers.

 

I say; “sure, what about A to Z mysteries, They are by Ron Roy.”

I show her where they are.

 

She gets her books on hold

 

 

and collects everything to go out.

 

I say; “Have a great day!”

 

Natalie calls; “you too!”

 

Sometimes the words come out; “ y” but the others catch in her throat.

 

I am always waiting for Natalie.

 

I love books, and Natalie does too.

 

One Friday, she doesn’t come.

 

I miss Natalie. 

 

She has no books on hold.

 

She doesn’t come the next Friday, either.

 

Will Natalie come back? 

 

I soon forget Natalie, her grins, her flashing blond hair, Her         

 

Dancing blue eyes. 

 

next week, I see Natalie.  She comes in and hands a 

 

Book to me. 

 

“ I wrote it for you.” She says.

 

She smiles and looks shy.

 

“For me, thank you! I didn’t know you are a writer! You are amazing, Natalie.” I reply.

 

“I have not been coming”, Natalie says “Mom could not take me.”

 

“ It’s fine,” I say.

 

Natalie skips out. 

 

her blond hair waves good-bye to me.

 

Her eyes smile fondly at me.

 

Her grin flashes happily at me,

 

Like I remember.

Natalie is back.

 

I look at her book. 

 

Its cover says; Natalie loves the Library

 

I write Natalie and me. 

 

My book is about Natalie,

 

Her waving hair,

 

Her smiling, sparkling eyes,

 

and her shy, flashing grin. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by Rose bud
(August 5, 2015 - 7:58 pm)

You were really always a poet, huh?

Here's a story:

Ten years after I cried wolf:

"Wolf! Help! It's a wolf! I'm not kidding, a wolf!" 

Of course, nobody in there right mind actually believes me. I say, I'm going to be great, I'm going to acomplish great things. And they say yeah, yeah, sure. But they don't mean it. They're just being nice. Which makes me wonder, is everything they say to me false? Are they just saying it out of kindness? Out of politeness? Out of spite? And if everything they say to me is false, is everything they say to other people false? Who are they inside, really? They could be rude or malicious, but somehow they have enough dignity to lie to everyone about what they think. Is that dignity, or is that manners, or is that just tom laugh about with friends. Yeah, right, that girl won't do anything good. But I will. And maybe they won't.

Actually, it all depends on how you say things. If you say 'em nicely, saying, yeah, maybe, probably, you could just be using your manners. But if you smirk, yeah, sure, of course, and then whisper to your ffriends, not then of course your going to giggle about me later. It all depends on how you look at things. Of course, everbody in their right mind looks at me in the same way: skeptically, almost laughing, like even if I said my name, the simplest fact, the'd giggle and say, yeah, right. We know that that isn't true! Well, it is true. There was one false alarm, and that time I just saw the neighbor's dog, who's name actually happened to be Wolfie. See!? It all depends on how you look at things.

And yet, they don't believe me. So let their crops be eaten and they're children hurt and themselves scared to death. Because ten years ago I may have been wrong, but today I'm not.

submitted by OtR
(August 6, 2015 - 5:47 am)

Love it OtR!

submitted by Rose bud
(August 6, 2015 - 1:37 pm)