EVIL's Revenge!

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EVIL's Revenge!

EVIL's Revenge!

Oh me! Oh my! Could it be?!!

YES! My dear spies, this is in fact the sequal to AYA Spies. I would like to thank all of you who partiipated. You are allowed to be the same spy, but what's this? You can make another charrie? Yes! New Story, and some new people. Friends or foes? Who knows! We must partake in another endeavor with our spies! It was decided that our charries would be umm, *looks at paper* 16!  Ahahah! EVIL is back, and better than ever! They plan to acutally take over the world this time, and the plan is already in action!

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!! We are all drawn back together by someone you know getting brainwashed. WHOA THERE NELLY!! Go ahead and copy and paste your characters, and edit the slight variations, or the "IS THAT EVEN THE SAME PERSON?" edits. So go ahead and take a chance with fate! Why not? You've done it once before. So without any further ado,

LET THE GAMES BEGIN! *Lighting in background* HAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!

 

Name: Madison Parks

Female

Former Agency/ies: AYA

Appearence: Medium height, dark brown hair the color of fudge. Brilliant blue eys. Light freckcles on her nose and under her eyes. Fair skin. Hair to her shoulders, usually in curls or in a high pony tail.

Personaltity: Quiet, and with a fire of determination in her eyes. Constantly on high alert, after the 'incident.' Skittish, but not with people she knows.

Curently doing: Living with Foster parents, but sadly not with Mason. They were split. Has two new foster sisters, and is studying to be a nurse. Like her friend, Embry. Calls Roselyn all the time. 

Name: Mason Parks

Male

Former Agency/ies: AYA

Appearence: Has clean-cut milk chocolate hair. Military cut wise. Ocean blue eyes. Freckles on his nose, and no where else. Tall.

Personality: Doesn't talk much, not to anyone. A few of his closest friends are exceptions. He always hangs back at parties and things with people. Will not even try to attempt talking to a girl. 

Curently doing: Living with a Foster family that consists of all boys, with the exception of the mother. The father is a drill sargent, and just Mason's luck. Because he wants to enlist ini the army. 

So how have your characters changed? 

 

 

submitted by Buggy
(July 25, 2015 - 3:57 pm)

TOP

submitted by ISKATARAGOINGTODIE?!
(March 21, 2016 - 12:33 am)

Something Buggy and I made a long time ago, back when this RP first started. Can you guess which side each of us did?

 

I'm sorry, Lindsey, the art isn't showing. It's just a blank box. Try another way.

Admin

submitted by Lindsey R.
(March 20, 2016 - 8:17 pm)

Top. Hey guys, I had a dream where the CB was a boarding school and we were all in dorms and the Admins were our... I guess supervisors. You guys (all the EVIL's revenge people) and I snuck out and ran around outside for a while and then we went back in and the Admins were FURIOUS because apparently it is very dangerous to run around in the road at midnight in our pajamas. Then we all went back inside and used really crowded bathrooms to brush our teeth and then we all went to bed. All of us, the EVIL's revenge writers, were in the same room and it was super fun! I have pretty detailed dreams sometimes...

There was another one, a few months ago, where all the CBers went to a movie theater, but there was no movie and we were all wearing feathered masks and we were trying to guess who was who! Sorry to bore you guys, but... yeah, I have to tell SOMEONE about my crazy CB dreams!

submitted by SHEBETTERNOT!, age Cockleburr
(March 21, 2016 - 9:11 pm)

Guys, we're number two for most comments! I don't really think you care, but at least you know! And we have 209 more comments than AYA's spies does. Cool beans. Now I really need to get to bed....

submitted by Cockleburr
(March 21, 2016 - 9:14 pm)

That's so cool! Question. What did I look like in your dream? If you can remember

submitted by Lindsey R
(March 22, 2016 - 12:58 am)

I'm pretty sure you had long reddish brown hair. You were tall(er than me, which isn't much of an accomplishment Smile) Buggy had short blond hair and brown eyes. Katy had shoulder length light brown hair and was wearing pink and black zebra striped pajamas! Shadow Dragon had long, shaggy, unkempt black hair and really pale skin. Rosebud had light skin, really light blonde hair, and light pink lips. 

submitted by Cockleburr
(March 22, 2016 - 5:04 pm)

Okay. I have decided I do not like first person! I am simply NOT good at it with past tense, especially for dramatic scenes. Thus I am making Part 2 third person, as well adding something from Elisha's perspective.

So I will basically be rewriting it on my kindle for now, but oh well! I just hope I don't loose it all!

Elisha~

She lunged, casting a meaningful glare at her sister. The dagger hit home. Triumph flashed through her frenzied eyes....Nop

Nevermind. I can't write as two girls in third person right now.

Elisha~

I lunged towards Katara, hatred swelling my black heart. All of my force was put into that single thrust, and I felt it graze her flesh.

Graze.

I missed.

Katara let out a startled yelp as the blade cut her arm. She had just managed to throw me off enough to save the dagger  from penetrating her heaving torso. I could only enjoy the feeling of her flesh for a moment, however. My lunge propelled  me forward and we crashed into each other, tumbling to the hard, cold ground.

Over  and over I played that moment out in my head. What had gone wrong and how I had lost my grip on the dagger as it clattered to the ground nearby.

With my Time short, I recovered as rapidly as possible. Katara writhed underneath me as I pinned her down. I could smell the blood rising from the damage I had inflicted, and darted my gaze over the wound. Hissing in dissatisfaction I blindly reached for the dagger.

 

She grabbed it first, however, and shoved me off. Realizing my danger, I hurried to my feet. Katara stumbled after me, grasping the dagger within her hands as she lunged forward.

I felt pain.

In an instant she had impaled me on the dagger, holding it there as we silently stared into each others' confused gazes. I wasn't sure what to feel, and I could tell she didn't know either.

The room was silent as my insides twisted in pain and I broke it by letting out a small whimper. Despite her initial confusion, it had seemed to please her thirst.

Waves of pain  pulsed through my paralyzed body. It felt as if everything was leaving at once, and I collapsed to the floor, sliding off the blade. 

The dagger clattered next to me, and I mindlessly pondered why it made such a sound for a blank moment.

"I  didn't expect that...." Weakly muttering, I focused on Katara.

Commercial break---

I feelk like this is really bad for some reason, but it gets the point across!

Katara~ 

 

I stared. Her crumpled body lay at my feet.

 

The dagger clattered to the floor, sliding out of my blood-coated hand. Its harsh sound seemed oddly out of place. I followed shortly after, a mournful cry escaping my lips as I kneeled next to my sister, my whole body shaking.

 

“E-Elisha?” I stuttered, barely able to make my voice work.

 

 

“I didn’t expect that…” Her dark eyes slowly turned upon me.

 

“I...I didn’t either…” I replied, my heart lurching with sorrow as I shook above the falling body of my sister. 

 

“You were always better than me." She sobbed in pain, though emotion shone through the silent shaking of her shoulders. "I could never best you….I thought I could win…”

 

“But you did…” I cried, my vision blurring with salty, unwanted tears. She had beaten me. I came here to loose: there was no other option for me. 

 

“How?” She stared up at me with her dark eyes, filled to the brim with pain.

 

 

I let out a heavy sob, and it sounded surprisingly welcome in the sound-abandoned room. The few EVIL agents watching quietly didn't matter. I had no care for what they would do to me. “You caused me so...much...pain…” I admitted, closing my eyes and squeezing out the tears, which began to roll freely down my cheeks. “That was all you ever wanted, right? I’ve gone insane….because of you, and killed so many people…..”

 

“It was.” Her voice was shaky and even quieter as it became harder for her to focus. Her eyes darted every which way, returning to my face before departing again. “I hated...I hate you,” she managed to growl with such conviction it made my heart stop.

 

“I’m sorry!” I sobbed, reaching down and placing my hand gently over her wound. She winced at the touch, but refused to remove my hand. “I hurt all of those people!” Tears flowed from my eyes as I tried to catch my breath between choked sobs. “It wasn’t you, Elisha! I murdered and hurt so many people! I left Mason and hurt him too!”

 

Elisha managed a small smile, placing her hand over mine and clutching it tightly. “Maybe you are truly EVIL then, Katara.”

 

It couldn't be true.But at the same time I would have bet a million dollars I was.

 

“No!” I retorted, shaking my head and trying to dry the unwanted tears that hopelessly continued to roll of my cheeks.

 

She remained silent, staring up at the ceiling. Her shoulders shook with silent sobs, and I could just make out tears forming in her eyes through my frenzied fog.

 

“No, Elisha!" Everything I had felt before, all of my anger and hatred, had been swept up into a single movement. My world had fallen apart because of it.

 

My life was behind that dagger as I had thrust it forward. What little humanity I had left was tossed away, and all I had left was regret.

 

For everything.

 

But I had dementedly drove the dagger into my deadly sister without a second thought. I was no longer human. I was just as bad as she was.

 

Her whole goal was to make me feel pain, and now I felt it. I understood what it felt like to have your heart ripped from your body,leaving an empty space. 

 

 

“You’re….right….” She coughed, and I leaned forward and tried to muffled my broken sobs, trying to hear her. “I did win.” A gasp escaped her lips, and she gave me one last smile. The broken, evil smile I had seen so many times, but now content.

 

She had won, but it took her life.

 

I turned my gaze to the heavens, letting out a death-wrenching cry as her grasp on my hand faded away. As her grasp on life tumbled into nothingness.

 

There was nothing I could do as emotion swept over my body like a tidal wave of death. My body shook with painful sobs and her pale, evil smile blurred with superfluous tears. 

 

I cried out my regret.

 

I cried out my pain.

 

I cried out to beg for forgiveness.

 

I cried out for my soul, begging it to come back as my tears swept it away.

 

But there was nothing I could do to bring it back. To take back each of the actions that had whittled my humanity away. And now I lost it all.

 

And I couldn’t stop crying. I didn’t care that people were staring at me, and I didn’t notice the other people that had entered the room.

 

My face contorted with pain as I leaned over her body, wrapping my arms tightly around my waist with each painful sob. My tears wouldn't stop:  Trying to hold them back resulted in even more suffering and agony so I couldn’t help but let them fall onto Elisha’s cold body.

 

I muttered  incoherently through the whole thing, praying to whoever might be out there to bring her back. I never wanted to kill her.

 

“She was only sixteen!” I screamed, hitting at the floor between us. “I’m only sixteen! Why is this happening?!” My voice ravaged throughout the room, as I released another uncontrollable wall of sobbing that barely left me room to breath.

 

She didn’t deserve to die. After all she tried to do to me, it was my fault I let it happen. We were supposed to be sisters, not enemies. It was my fault for turning her against me!

 

We were enemies,however. She was the owl and had locked me in a hopeless maze. I couldn't see where it was going, but there was only one exit. Loosing. 

 

 

I was the one alive: the one weeping. For her death I had sacrificed my very soul and everything that remained of it. The pain I had worked my way through was nothing compared to what it was now. Each sob and tear was like banging against an unstoppable wall, and I buried my head in my hands with an angry scream, leaning over her unmoving body.

 

I was supposed to die.

 

"I never wanted to live!!!!"

~~~~~

:*(

I am sad now.

Peoples....

"Liek if U crie everytiem" 

Admins what do you think? Is it dramatic enough? Sorry if you have to remove anything that says blood. I made sure to cut back though, :D

 

There you go.

 

Katara didn't die....

But she lost. 

 

(I am literally sitting here and staring at the submit buttons like: "Did I just do that."

submitted by Katydid
(March 22, 2016 - 1:35 am)

Whoa. How do you write like that?! You all write so well and I feel like I'm, I don't know, killing your story with my writing. Katy, that was incredible. You are incredible, all of you, incredible writers, incredible friends. I'm sorry about my writing. And as soon as I hit the submit button I'll feel sorry I did that, too. I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry. I'm in a weird mood, I don't usually get like this, and I'm sorry for that too. I actually do know why I'm like this, I just went outside to make a wreath and then I started thinking about that Holocaust song, Birdsong, particlularly this one stanza:

Open up your heart to beauty and go to the woods someday

and weave a wreath of memories there

and if the tears obscure your way

if the tears obscure your way

if the tears obscure your way

if the tears obscure your way

then you know how good it is to be alive

Then I started thinking about the attacks this morning ando how sad it is that people have to die and then I sang the song a few times then I dedicated the wreath to the people who were in the attacks, then I went to get more flowers and the wreath had vanished. Seriously, it vanished. I could not find it any where. I'm sorry (again) that I just made you guys read that, but it's what's going on in my mind right now and I really needed to talk to someone about it. I love you guys so much. Thank you.

submitted by Cockleburr
(March 22, 2016 - 4:56 pm)

YAYAYAYYAYAYAYSAYSYYSYSS!!!

KATY- 

submitted by COMMENT NUMBER 444!!
(March 22, 2016 - 5:23 pm)

Well,I guess the real threat now is Madison and Mason's mom.

Cockleburr, don't apologize. You write wonderfully. And honestly can't imagine Buggy with light blonde hair. But she does have brown eyes. 

submitted by Lindsey R.
(March 22, 2016 - 7:00 pm)

Oh no! Don't say that! You are a fantasticwonderfulmagicalwriterwithyourownspecialstyle~

And that's really cool how you dedicated the wreath to those people! I love singing as well, but really scared I sound bad.

Also Fuzzy pajamas are TOTALLY me. Have you guys checked out Savvys video? Called Optimist? It's really good, and she has a really good voice! I commented on it, and obviously subscribed!

(Pink isn't my color, but it is still really happy and totally me!)

Lets get this party started~

Peace, Potatoes, and God bless*

*Idontmeantooffendanyone 

submitted by Katydid
(March 22, 2016 - 8:24 pm)

Thank you. Thank you so much. You don't have any idea how much this means to me. You guys just made my heart soar! I feel so so so so happy! Thank you thank you thank you! You guys are such wonderful friends, I love you guys so much. It's strange, even though we have never met in person I feel like we are all neighbors (or roommates, according to my subconscious). Here's a weird thought for the day: what if we actually have met and didn't know it! I know that Buggy and Lindsey know each other, but anyway... Now I'm tempted to wear a sticker to school tomorrow that says 'I'm Cockleburr'. :)

submitted by Cockleburr
(March 22, 2016 - 9:04 pm)

Haha yeah. Maybe Buggy and I should do that. It would be really cool if we went to the same school. I just got a cool thought. What if we all went to the same college and were roommates. Now that would be beyond awesome. 

submitted by Lindsey R.
(March 22, 2016 - 10:00 pm)

You should go to this one college in Idaho that allows you to have three minors! I'm not sure on all the details, but I'll probably find out during highschool! Y'all should totes come!

submitted by Katydid
(March 22, 2016 - 11:42 pm)

I'm in high school, 9th grade to be exact, and I don't have any college picked out, but seeing as I live in Virginia I doubt I'll go all the way to Idaho to go to college. It's possible, though.

submitted by Cockleburr
(March 23, 2016 - 4:06 pm)